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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, guys i am posting my latest ff ,half of it will continued by me later after your replies,i made some changes but my story is the same as cha. PART ONE: The truth revealed. shikha was at sambhi engagement and everyone was enjoying but suddenly sunaina came and told tht sam is veer and sapna's daughter,everyone was shocked and shikha aske d veer to tell the truth then he told everything and shikha instead of being angry with veer gets angry with sunaina and veer decide to divorce sunaina and shikha agreed,sam was watching this with tears in her eyes and was about to faint when abhi catches her 😳and take her to her room then shikha comes in and say that; "sam i am so glad that u r my sister and sapna anti is your mom,"then sapna and veer comes in and tell tht shikha shld call sapna mom and sam shld call veer papa😆,everyone delighted except samrat as he was thinking that all his plan to harm sam was failed due to this. AT BASE Abhi and other hawks were in the cafe discussing there next plan to go to college when suddenly veer comes and ask all of them for dinner at his house ,and they would discuss all this there only. AT SINGH'S everyone reached at singh's house and veer asked abhi to shoot his idea then abhi starts " sir," ,veer interupts and say "as you call sapna mom so call me papa" abhi agrees and say tht he would be a sports teacher and sam as student,tanvi as maths teacher and farhaan as abhi's assistant and samrat as history teacher and esha as bio teacher,then they eat dinner and when sam went to see off abhi ,she had an accident 😭and samrat gets a call that,"sir, kam hogaya". for now thts all , will continue soon. do press thanks button and do tell if i should continue because many minds will become +tive . 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fren when sunaina tell everyone that is sameera is veers daughter....how come shikha accepted so easily......if i was in shikha's place i would hav slapped veer....and kicked how dare he......???shaadi se pehle bacche....???ram ram...i would done his last rituals also.....and accepting sam and her mom....never....i would hav taken sunaina{mom} with meeee.....before going i would hav banged everyone....and leave boring sambhi....and moved with some loyal person..... 😳 😳
dont mind ....mai character mai thoda guss gayi thi..... 😆
i liked it.... 😃 but mai thoada confused hoon.... 😃 😃 😃

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