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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.
Annie the os was really good!
The start and build up was nice but the end came off a little bit flat.
You can work on the ending this time! U no like leave it in a suspense or give it an unexpected end?

okay!😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Guys tell me! Is it Kabir Kumar or Kabir Singh Rathore?

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

thoda better comment de! like pros and cons in it, then only i'll be able to improve na?

Starting nice tha but i think end mai need some improvement

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Posted: 9 years ago

kabir singh rathore sounds better but he came into the existence as kabir kumar, so kabir kumar may be!

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

When seeing mystic aura... I was like Ye new kon Aya???

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Posted: 9 years ago

Good story annie... Hota h... Aisa waisa b hota h 😉 [=)) ]

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Annie for fun you can also add sukku and umesh funny scene like cv's show

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Posted: 9 years ago

Vishrutha you have already made na full nauc collage na

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