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AnuMP

@AnuMP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#801

Sorry Frapps, you cannot be kill-er and kill-ee at the same time.😆

Drona and Abhi interact in a MAJOR way. Shyam bro, ca you continue with Drona?

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Chiillii

@Chiillii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#802

Hi guys

Sorry for delay in reply, got caught with work...I am almost done with Panchali introduction, swayamvar, division and wedding...I need to just check with brishti and urmila on division part..I'll pm you guys stuff today...feel free to edit and include Yudhi / Arjun and Kunti parts...then this part will be done

But arijit is missing to help figure rakhshasavrat part, with hidimbi...if that is done then I can focus on the most critical part of my work DS / VH and vanaparva...

In the meanwhile eagerly waiting for pandavas to be born and rangbhoomi...I am eager to see some action scenes.. From not just Arjuna and Karna.. I want to see bheem dury mace fighting too.

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AnuMP

@AnuMP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#803

I am mostly looking forward to seeing the BheemDi love scene😆

Wrestling match or food fight?😈😆

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Radhika

@ashne

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Posted: 10 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: AnuMP
I am mostly looking forward to seeing the BheemDi love scene😆
Wrestling match or food fight?😈😆

Neither. I think it will be a passionate one.

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AnuMP

@AnuMP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: ashne

Neither. I think it will be a passionate one.

Somebody stop me!🤣

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Radhika

@ashne

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Posted: 10 years ago

#806

Don't make fun anu.😭 Poor BhiDi

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AnuMP

@AnuMP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#807

Radhika

😆 I wasn't making fun of poor Bheem. That six-packer😳. I was just thinking of how a wrestling match could possibly not be passionate😈😆

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: AnuMP
Radhika
😆 I wasn't making fun of poor Bheem. That six-packer😳. I was just thinking of how a wrestling match could possibly not be passionate😈😆

If Bheem starts with a wrestling match, I don't think Panchali will stand a chance literally. I hope it is not a metaphor, that u mean

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guenhwyvar

@guenhwyvar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: ashne

If Bheem starts with a wrestling match, I don't think Panchali will stand a chance literally. I hope it is not a metaphor, that u mean

I think this is what Anu means:

"They stood in the center of the dirt area facing each other, their eyes locked on the other's beautiful face. It was a strange sight to behold, a man and a woman facing each other in a wresting arena. The man smirked and beckoned the lady to attack. The lady tossed her dark bluish hair over her shoulders and using two small sticks, she swirled her hair into a messy bun. Crouching, her brown eyes drift across the empty arena, seeking out the best places. She swallows and with a breath, she lurches forward and strikes her opponent on the chest with her palms, leaving a red mark over his heart.

The man grinned, this was exactly how he had imagined his nuptial night to be. Doing the one thing he loved the most (after eating and cooking of course) with the woman of his dreams. He brought his fingers to his lips and kissed it and touched the red palm mark.

The lady raised her eyebrows and stomped her feet into the dirt ground, creating a cloud of dust to rise. She once again ran towards the man and moments before reaching him, she dug her right foot into the ground and twisted her body enough to leap into the air and deliver a kick.

The kick never came for he ducked out of the way. With her back towards him, a huge disadvantage, she could only hope to land on her feet quickly. But her feet didn't touch the ground. The man's strong arms quickly crossed her stomach, and she was pulled in. She felt the warmth of his breath lingering on her neck; she heard the beating of his heart. She paused and slowed down her breathing. She slowly turned around and looked into the eyes of the golden-hued husband of hers, lost in a river of love and emotion.

"Arya Bhim." she murmured softly. She rested her head on his broad shoulders and closed her eyes. The moment was here and now. She could feel the mighty mace warrior's hands slowly inch up her slender back. She gasped as she felt the sticks from her hair pulled out, as her bluish curled locks fell, and as they danced on her shoulders.

"Priya Valandara." came the masculine voice of Bhim.

Draupadi, the fiery princess of Panchaal, opened her eyes, red with rage. "What did you call me?"

The end 😆😆😆 Ok I ruined the ending, but I didn't want to end with romance (otherwise that would go for pages)

But the food fight couldn't happen Anu. Bhim would be like "Woah there honey sugar, let's not waste good food that I can eat. Let's go wrestle instead!"

** NOT PART OF JAYA**

Edited by shyam09 - 10 years ago