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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chotidesi


With the way they acted off screen, it's so surprising that they lit up the screen when they were together. They acted like goofballs, and then made us hyperventilate with how much eye sex they oozed 😆


Waise, isn't the original unfinished? Is chrometurtle still active?


well the original has been published way back in 2009 and the last chappy is quite abrupt... and i dont have the login for fanficnet to check if the readers are expecting or asking for updates or whether chrometurtle has written any note ...so i thought she has ended it the way GWTW was done


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cineraria


It should move down, stay for a while then move up, draw concentric circles at the once there was an umbilical cord area and also pheel it's depth...


Still a leetle high.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amus5


well the original has been published way back in 2009 and the last chappy is quite abrupt... and i dont have the login for fanficnet to check if the readers are expecting or asking for updates or whether chrometurtle has written any note ...so i thought she has ended it the way GWTW was done



Perhaps I should login with my really old FF.net username 😆 I found the last chapter to be very abrupt. Ajeeb tha. I just skimmed and went to the end. Deadward and Stoneface are meh. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wahi Ruchi wala link hai mere bhi pass.

SO the turtle FF too is incomplete? Haw. Dil ke armaan ansuon mein beh gaye. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cineraria


Wahi Ruchi wala link hai mere bhi pass.

SO the turtle FF too is incomplete? Haw. Dil ke armaan ansuon mein beh gaye. 😭



Aansoon na bahan, fariyad ko wayshte na kar , dil mat jala 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chotidesi


Still a leetle high.


Arre abhi toh there are many places left to pheel the depth. One at a time. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67



Aansoon na bahan, fariyad ko wayshte na kar , dil mat jala 😆


If it has the GWTW ending then me no reading. 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
I discovered lots of "update soons" from as recent as September 11. So I am assuming it is not yet complete.

But in da end, she chooses Deadward. M thinks. It seems like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chotidesi

I discovered lots of "update soons" from as recent as September 11. So I am assuming it is not yet complete.

But in da end, she chooses Deadward. M thinks. It seems like it.


And Deadward is which one. The former or the latter?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just came across some really embarrassing old writing.

"He fell on top of her lips."


WHY. WHY 13 year old me, WHY?!

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