Baaraatis #17 * New CC link-Page 142* - Page 14

Originally posted by: ...ASB100...

Vandanaji, that poem was FANTASTIC!!! 👏

Originally posted by: sher_lock

We have seen

the SCANDALOUS

the SEDUCTION

soon the SHAADI too

..WRITER JI following the sequence and the fact that your ff titles start with S ...

I guess next will be, well what else is left... SUHAAGRAAT 😉

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

An ode to all the Baraatis...

How do I begin to write a fitting poem for Shaadi

It leaves me confused and in a bit of a quandary

So much has happened and not just in the story

With it came in to existence our wonderful CC

Where developed friendships & bonds beautifully

Addictive & fun where we all hang out collectively

Not wanting to leave till it's absolutely compulsory

And from being Baraatis we now are called Bees

We talk about anything & everything constantly

And new Bees we always welcome very warmly

Some even who silent readers used to once be

For that though the credit goes to J our writer ji

Juhi, thank you to you I say with much sincerity

For bringing us together I think we all will agree

Looney with your challenge you made us happy

The terms and conditions suited us too perfectly

Mini your gifs & comments a writers dream really

An asset to every thread you are I say honestly

Jigs you are now the backbone of our unique CC

A special bond you share with us all individually

Sami, you along with Choti the queens of guttery

Your poems, images & stories loved by everybody

Of course you think yourselves to be sati savitris

But that place is reserved for our one and only

Or two contenders we have for the spot maybe

One being claimed by our darling Bee Cherry

Who came up with awards & categories witty

Nominations were indeed fun & a great memory

While Gita feels she is deserving too apparently

I suspect she is not an innocent and naive Bee

Her forte lies in calculations & statistics brilliantly

And of course at making ASR muse occasionally

Ruchi our Bee with her fabulous songs & parodies

All the way from London she visits us almost daily

Joined by my sweetheart RRK aka Kavita or Kavi

With guttery riddles & gifs she appears very quietly

A_BA is these days outside the lines,unfortunately

In her AD busy, Aami your presence we miss badly

Mrs DK's guttery thoughts are always of top quality

How her mind works is indeed for me still a mystery

The cutest posts of little babies posted by Rashmi

For every occasion she seems to have them ready

Re Re we call her now with love & so affectionately

A name that was given to her by one of the Baraatis

Posts and images share here everyone confidently

Some adding to the fun & to the pages flying rapidly

Like do our very own special Bees Nooro and Preethi

Although I wish they would visit here more frequently

Asha, Dolly & Tinkleby have also contributed equally

I hope I don't leave out someone & make them angry

As I know there are more members, am sure many

If I do then I do apologise in advance wholeheartedly

But like Rith, Sudha & vks11 it might just be simply

That I may not have interacted with you all previously

Which I wish will be remedied in the future hopefully

For this CC and the Bees will keep buzzing indefinitely

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

Unresed main post.

Now I'm off for a few hours until I am ready to post, and when I do, I will also come back here with a note for the Baaraatis.

See you soon :)

• finding an author who doesn't trigger my pet hates (poor grammar, poor spelling, crazy fonts, unfinished stories, lack of maturity of plot & themes).
• developing respect through the reading process for the writer's process. Juhi, your insights into your decisions about this story have been fascinating, and I am in awe of how well-thought out this story was.
• reading a story where physical intimacy is portrayed sensitively, creatively and not gratuitously
• finally posting on IF after months of being a silent reader,
• and last but definitely not least, the Baaraatis! I'm very late to the party, but I'm having so much fun!

Juhi, as requested, I'll post an edited version of this on your blog once you've posted the final epilogue.

Mwah!

Originally posted by: MsDroolKanthan

Not only are you good at poetry

But also have a sharp memory

Remembering each Bee's characteristics individually

And then listing them out descriptively

Kya Bolun ab main Vee

Just accept this as a gratitude from this Sati Savitri

There is only one thing that makes me angry

And that is that you have washed your touched-by-barun Tee

I wish you had preserved his touch carefully

And couriered it to us and made us happy

Now I need some Tanda Tanda Paani

Because I have just reread Ch 7 of Shaadi

Thank you Looney and Juhi

For making us Dance madly

Blush profusely

Gaze dreamily

Through this wonderful story

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Droolji, thank you for voicing what we're all feeling 😊