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Posted: 11 years ago
Hieee everyone. . 😊
who izz writing for task 2??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaataarey

Hieee everyone. . 😊
who izz writing for task 2??



Hello muskaan :)
gud morning

Rabia ne post kiya h ek scene.chck out page 62
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Posted: 11 years ago
WT...buh buh buh

What are we doing?
We need some great convo
rabia di ke mein rey ke parents and TR ke beech zyada comedy nhi hai :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
guys! how about we each give ideas, and some dialogues that can be used? And someone puts them all in together?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rabertmona

hey

anyone here

wese mene likha toh hai but i dont know acha hai ya nhi

i know bohut bura hai but plzzz chapal mat maarna 😉


manager: excusme mam, you need any help?

taani: no umm haan actully mujhe kissi se milna hai ..mein bas kisi ka wait kar rhi thi

manager : mam kahin aap woh toh nahin jo ladke walon ki family se milne wali thi

taani : haan

manager : ohh toh aap yahan kya kar rhi hain mam please come, yeh rahi ladke ki family ..

taani : ohk thanks...

taani : hello ...how r u??

rey's mom : hello ?? how r u ?? oyee yeh kya par chona nhi sikhaya kisi ne

taani : (confused) what ??

rey'mom : zaban lada rahi hai..chal peer pad mere ...aashirwad lene k liye

taani : ohk .. namaste

rey's mom: aur apne hone wale sasur ji ke peer bhi toh padd

taani : ok . namaste uncle

rey's mom : oye yeh kya engrezy (english) mein oky oky bolti hai ..badon se na zara tameez se pesh aate hai haan ji ...na ji kar ke baat karte hain samjhi ..

taani: haan ji (yeh rey kahan reh gaye hain)

rey's dad : kiss ko dhoond rahi hoo??

taani : woh uncle mein re...

rey's mom : Ooo.. tujhe kise ne yeh nhi bataya k apny hone walay pati ka naam nhi laitai.

taani : haan ji

rey's mom : wese mera golu na bas aata hi hoga ..woh na uska pet (stomach) kharab hai. ajai ga.

taani : (in her mind) golu?? rey ki mom isse golu bulati hai ?? pet kharab abhi toh sahe tha.

rey's mom : arry kahan kho gai, par tu mujhe yeh bata ke tujhe ghar ke kaam toh aate hain na aur khane mein kya kya bana leti ho ?

taani : khana ?? arry aunty khana banana toh mere left hand ka kaam hai

rey'dad: kyun beta right hand kharab hai.

rey's mom :aa ji ap na chup he raho bas pee ke aajate ho .. wese tumhain ghar ke kaam toh aate hi honge na ...jhado pochha ..kapde dhona ..yeh saare kaam toh aate hi honge aur haan mere golu ko na roz alag alag tarah ka khana pasand hai toh tu iss ke liye rozz naye naye pakwan banana theek hai aur tumhari taraf se toh haan hi hai na ??

taani : haan ji meri taraf se to haan hi hai (in mind) lo taani gaaye tu kaam se kya soch ke yahan aayi thi k rey k parents se milongi and rey aane do isse mujhe yahan phasa kar khud pata nhi kahan hain

rey : arey taani tum yahan?? i mean tum yahan kya kar rhi ho ??

taani : rey.. umm ji aap aagaye ??

rey : (confused) kya ?? taani u ok ? any way tum yahan kya kar rhi ho ?? mein kabse tumhara wait kar raha tha

taani : mera wait but mein toh yahin pe hi hoon ...aap ke parents ke sath

rey : (confused) mere parents ??? taani yeh mere parents nahin hain//

taani : whhaaatt ??? what u mean ??? matlab yeh aapke parents nahin hain??

rey : nahin taani woh toh tumhara indar wait kar rahe hain..

aunty : oye yeh tu kis se baat kar rahi hai ...woh dekh mera golu aagaya

taani : aa aunty aapko na koi misunderstanding hui hai mein woh nhi hoon jo aap samjh rahi hai

aunty : oye kya nhi samjh rahi ..chal chor ..golu dekh toh mene na tere liye teri dulhan dhoondli hai

taarey : (shocked) whaat ??

rey's mom: rey beta tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ..tum toh taani ko lene gaye the na ?

rey's dad : haan rey kabse indar wait kar rahe the

rey : dad, mom yahan bohut badi confussion ho gayi hai ..actully yeh taani hai and woh by mistak un logon ko mere parents samjh gayi

rey's mom : ohh koi baat nhi mein baat karti hoon...excuse me umm dekhiye aap logon ko koi galat faimy hui hai taani aap logon ki nhi hamari bahu ban ne wali hai ??

aunty : oye teri himmat kaise hui meri hone wali bahu ko apne bahu kehne ki..yeh meri hone wali bahu hai mere golu ki dulhan

rey's mom : excuseme how dare u ?? woh meri bahu ban ne wali hai.. mere bete rey ki wife

aunty : aise kaise kissi ke sath bhi chali jaye gi aur is ne toh shadi ke liye haan bhi kar di hai

rey : mom, mom stop it mom ..dad aap mom ko indar leke jao hum aate hain..plzz mom

taani : dekhiye aunty ji mein aap ko saari baat samjhati hoon

rocky (golu) : mami ji chodiye na wese bhi m,ujhe yeh nhi mujhe piya pasand hai jo mere sath hai

aunty : theek hai golu agar tujhe woh piya pasand hai toh phir theek hai mujhe koi aetraz nhi hai

mujhe maaf kar dena beta woh galati se tujhe apni bahu samjh bethi ..bohut khushnaseeb hoga woh parivaar jise tujh jaise bahu mile gi ...khush raho

taarey : bye aunty

taani : pphhewww thank God ke woh aapke parents nahin the

rey : hmm kitni big misunderstanding ho gayi thi na ??

taani : hmm sach mein but thank God sab theek ho gaya

rey : ya sab theek ho gaya but ab jinse milna hai unse toh mil lo...mom, dad tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain

taani : chalo..

taani: namastai

rey: namastai???

taani : sorry abb hi aunty..how r u

rey's mom : hello taani beta ..m good .. tum mujhe batao tumhain rey mein kya acha lagta hai??

taani : jahan tak mene inhen jana hai yeh bohut ache hain

rey's dad : good..but tum aise ladke se shadi kyun karna chahti jiska koi career hi nhi hai

taani : nahin uncle aisa nahin hai rey ka career hai unka dance... inka passion woh best dancer hain and aaj agar hum donon sath hain toh woh bhi inki dance ki wajah se mujhe rey pe pura bharosa hai and i know uncle ek din aap bhi rey pe proud karoge

rey's dad : hmm well i m impressed ..agar tumhain itna yakeen hai toh ok

rey's mom : wese kuch bhi kaho mujhe toh taani bohut pasand aayi

rey's dad : haan toh mujhe konsa aitraz hai ..afterall mere bete ne life mein kuch toh sahi decesion liya

rey : (excited) ohh toh yeh shadi pakki ??

rey's mom : haan haan dekho toh kitna excite ho raha hai ..so deal is done

rey's dad : yeh lo... rey tumhari mom toh tumhari shadi ko bhi deal samjh rahi hai

rey's mom : aapko toh bas moka chahiye

rey's dad : arey ab mene kya kiya ??

rey's mom : kya kiya matlab tum mujhse ladayi kar rhe ho

rey's dad : mein ladayi kar raha hoon ...arey tumne start ki

taani : rey kya aap nhi wahi soch rahe hain jo me soch rahi hoon

rey : haan taani but tum kya soch rahi hoo ??

taani : yahi ke kya hum bhi 20 saal baad aise hi ladayi karenge ??

rey : nahin ..nahin hum ladayi nhi karenge or wese bhi mein toh ladayi karta hi nhi

taani : what u mean ke aap ladayi nhi karte ..infact aap hi ladayi shuru karte ho

rey : what mein no taani tum hamesha ladayi karti ho

taani : aap

rey : tum...

THE END


Superb Rabia really nicely done I'd agree with ...Sanyukta... just a little more comedy needed for the part Taani meet the real parent baaki sab perfect hai and I love the ending lol 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rabertmona

Hello
sana I agree with u


yep i think its going to make everything much easier that way o.o

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Posted: 11 years ago
guys kal submission day h aur humare paas kya h<babaji ka thullu>

Kisi ne dialogues likhe kya?
I suck in this matter.
Me n comedy...poles apart.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Rabia: hello dear :)
whts up??
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am here with another dialogue version
All I can say, I tried my best

Ting, the she rang the doorbell, as she nervously waited for the arrival of him and his parents.

Rey's mom opened the door and warmly welcomed Taani with a hug, literally crushing her in the process.

RM: Kia beta, I was waiting for your arrival.

T: Ummm... I am Taani Shekhwat

RM: But Rey had said his business partner's name was Tara

T: Ummm... I am not Kia or Rey's business partner

RM: What? Wait are you another girl, coming to complain about Rey?

T: No I...

RM: Are you pregnant with his child?

T: Yes. I mean no. I mean yes, I will be.

RM: WHAT? How long has this been going on? I mean without parental consent or even marriage, you want to have a baby with MY SON?!?!

T: Aunty just listen to me.

RM: For right now, I will ignore the fact that you called a young woman like me, aunty, and we are going straight to Rey's father

T: But listen to me

RM: Shh. If you don't keep your mouth shut, I will call the police for trespassing my house and son without my consent

T: Oh god. Where is Rey?

RM: I want to know the same thing Taani didi.

T: Taani what?

RM: Look, even though you don't deserve respect, I like to give respect to those who are older than me. I mean I am so young

T: *mumbles under her breath* Haan itni young ke chameli ke tel se, chikni chameli tak zinda ho

RM: Eh ladki. Did you say something?

T: *nods her head in a no

-Scene Shifts To Dining Table-

RM: Patidev

RD: Yes, wifey

RM: I had told you so many times, not to spoil your son and now look at what he has done.

RD: Stop being so melodramatic, what did he do now?

RM: This girl is pregnant with Rey's child!
RD: Congratulations...wait what?

T: Correction. I said I am going to be pregnant with his child.

RM: See. She isn't even asking us, she is telling us.

RD: Where is Rey?

RM: As usual, sleeping like a bear in his room.

RD: Let's go talk to him, RIGHT NOW!!

-Scene Shifts To Rey's Bedroom-

RM: *takes cold water in a bucket and pours it on Rey*

R: WTH! How dare you? Oh hey, mom and dad. And T t taani

RM: Care to explain? Or do you need another dose of water?

R: M m mom and D d dad, this is Taani my girlfriend

RM: Girlfriend is okay. But a pregnant one? Really Rey, I didn't expect this from you

R: What? Taani you are pregnant? When did this happen? Wait, when did we do it? I mean was I drunk? Kya maine tumara balatkar kia tha? Nahi nahi. Mein aisa nahi karsakta. Hawww. Kya tumne mere nishe kei halat ka fida utaya? Aur mera balatkar?

RM: Nahi!!! Aisa nahi hosakta!!

RD: I didn't expect this from a girl, especially someone as pretty as you.

T: SHUT UP!!! For the past 15 minutes, I have been listening to all of your useless or should I say insulting comments. Yes, I am Rey's girlfriend but as I said earlier, I am not pregnant. Rey had called me over for dinner tonight because he wanted to introduce me to you and say that WE ARE GETTING MARRIED! But seems like he didn't tell you guys and was sleeping here like kumbakaran, while I had to listen to you banter on about me being pregnant. Which I repeat, IS NOT TRUE!!! *takes a deep breath*

RM: I..

RD: We...

R: Taani...

RM, RD, R: Sorry *cute face*

T: *melts and laughs* It is okay.

RM: Thanks didi. I am really sorry for all the trouble Rey's dad caused. It is his habit to overreact over silly things.

RD: But I...But you...Never mind. *whispers to Rey* One advice son, is to go along with whatever your wife says, especially in front of others. *winks at Rey*

R: *whispers back* Thanks dad.

RM: Judging by how you put up with us for over five minutes, which by the way is a record, and because of your sweet but wild side, I approve. You are perfect for my son. What say patidev?

RD: I can't agree more wifey. She is an angel with the hint of a devil.

T: *bows down and touches the feet of her soon to be in laws*

R: Thanks mom and dad

-Group hug between the four-

RD: I guess we should leave you guys alone for right now and we will call Taani's parents over tomorrow.

R, T: Good night mom and dad

RM,RD: Good night

RM: *while going out of Rey's room* By the way didi, I would like a granddaughter. *winks at a shocked TaaRey*

Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ashu ki bacchi ..you're the BEST...
This totally Rocks...
My stomach's aching..
Gimme a bhaalo hug 🤗
Kay..moi off now..
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