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Posted: 11 years ago
My first comment on your story Juhi.. Just couldn't resist after this chapter.. specially these lines that are so beautifully written that it tugged right at my heart..
It is his touch...the way he holds me as if he can never let go.It is his gaze...the way he looks at me as if he never wants to look away.

Khushi actually writes him an email explaining everything..great! Love this directness in your heroine.. When she opened her eyes after the dream and he wasn't in front of her I was literally dismayed and heartbroken and then when her eyes found him standing for real right in before her it was exhilarating! You said the excerpt reminds you of your love for writing .. lucky us I say! Thanks a lot for giving us this story..

Now coming to a theory I have in my head.. everyone here is allowed to call me crazy but this chapter seemed vaguely familiar because it feels like the time Arnav went missing and Khushi knew something was not right. So I am thinking maybe Arnav left but was about to return midway or atleast return earlier but something terrible has happened. So like in the show he has these short conversations with her on the phone and comes back to tell her he loves her (via his touch and not in words yet, but soon since you like happy endings..) but rushes out again..

Anyway you will probably make us wait till Monday. Still just like Khushi was pleasantly surprised that Arnav arrived earlier than expected, I am going to keep dreaming we get an update earlier than promised..

Oh and hello all baaraatis.. I have laughed so much reading your conversations.. 🤗Lovely place to be in..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bridgeofdreams

Although I cannot say that in the four days Arnav has not felt such strong unpleasant feelings...

🤓.Hmm..Looks like he's facing reality at last...that note🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rhea Di it's so great to find you on this thread. Welcome!!!
No one can resist Juhi Di amazing stories.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tvpal007

The email by Khushi❤️

How could Arnav resist such an open confession.?
Writerji..For that email alone,I will read the update again and again😳



That email was the part I added after my conversation with the 'challenger' :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tvpal007

🤓.Hmm..Looks like he's facing reality at last...that note🤔



So far, I'm thinking positively about this; maybe he is his study for a video conference considering that he got home earlier than expected, or he is out to buy her roses...😛
Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarwen

<font size="2" color="#009900">My first comment on your story Juhi.. Just couldn't resist after this chapter.. specially these lines that are so beautifully written that it tugged right at my heart..</font>

It is histouch...the way he holds me as if he can never let go.It is his gaze...the way he looks at me as if he never wants to look away.
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<font color="#009900" size="2">Khushi actually writes him an email explaining everything..great! Love this directness in your heroine.. When she opened her eyes after the dream and he wasn't in front of her I was literally dismayed and heartbroken and then when her eyes found him standing for real right in before her it was exhilarating! You said the excerpt reminds you of your love for writing .. lucky us I say! Thanks a lot for giving us this story..</font>

<font color="#009900" size="2">Now coming to a theory I have in my head.. everyone here is allowed to call me crazy but this chapter seemed vaguely familiar because it feels like the time Arnav went missing and Khushi knew something was not right. So I am thinking maybe Arnav left but was about to return midway or atleast return earlier but something terrible has happened. So like in the show he has these short conversations with her on the phone and comes back to tell her he loves her (via his touch and not in words yet, but soon since you like happy endings..) but rushes out again..</font>

<font color="#009900" size="2">Anyway you will probably make us wait till Monday. Still just like Khushi was pleasantly surprised that Arnav arrived earlier than expected, I am going to keep dreaming we get an update earlier than promised..</font>

<font color="#009900" size="2">Oh and hello all baaraatis.. I have laughed so much reading your conversations..🤗Lovely place to be in..</font>



Welcome to the baaraatis !
And about your theory, it's 'no comment', I'm afraid 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS



That email was the part I added after my conversation with the 'challenger' :)

This challenger is good for you and your stories😎😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Rhea Di it's so great to find you on this thread. Welcome!!!

No one can resist Juhi Di amazing stories.


Thank you Javeria.. And it was you who introduced me to her stories 😊 so thank you for that!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS



That email was the part I added after my conversation with the 'challenger' :)



I knew. It's good that you have included it because as Khushi said, from the beginning she promised to be honest with him, and that's what exactly she is doing.

The funny part that the subject is Sheetal 😆...okay what Sheetal said.

Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a delightful part 1 to Chap 9 ... Opening with Khushi's email to her darling hubby ... totally ingenious !! loved Garima/Khushi's heartwarming conversation ... AND the 'sone pe suhaga' the exquisite dream sequence which turned into magical reality.👏
You write so eloquently that one is compelled to feel that they are a part of the narrative... I cannot express in words how much I am enjoying "Shaadi" 😊
Looking forward to reading the details of Arnav's note on the pillow and his verbal response to his lovely wife's heartfelt email 😉
Lastly, all the baaraati's are a riot !! this CC is the best place to be 👍🏼
Edited by jujubee - 11 years ago

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