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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

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sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Just writing the last paragraph, then proofreading and posting time :)

NO NEED TO PROOF READ DEAR>

Kaate nahi kat te hai lamhe intezaar ke

Nazre jama ke baithe hai raaste pe expel ke

dl ne kaha dekhe jo jalw-e- Shaadi ke

laye ge kab expel ji inhe palak se uthaar ke

Edited by amanzbajaj - 11 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Chapter 8 is now up.

Finally!

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

YAY!!! Perfectly timed too 😆

Edit: HA! I knew it. I shall update my comment further once I finish.

Sheetal finally does something besides biting Arnavji's... well, you know. 😆 That bird can do things other than curse!

I love, love, love the way you gradually build up relationships. You make them evolve, and it's not painfully slow either- it's always shifting, and the dynamics change from chapter to chapter. You're fabulous, absolutely phenomenal!

Edited by chotidesi - 11 years ago

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Thanks Juhi for posting the next part. Will comment in detail later.

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: chotidesi
YAY!!! Perfectly timed too 😆
Edit: HA! I knew it. I shall update my comment further once I finish.

You knew...what, exactly?

Are you writing cliffhanger comments now?😆

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

You knew...what, exactly?

Are you writing cliffhanger comments now?😆

Cliffhangers are your area, Di! I would argue that the ending of this is a cliffhanger as well 😆

I couldn't very well reveal the action before others read it! The person who's ruining Arnav/Khushi eye sax and private time was someone I had suspected for a while.

Also editedish my comment!

Edited by chotidesi - 11 years ago

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Jignasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
Chapter 8 is now up.
Finally!

Ahhh...just logged in after a brutal day at work 😡...this should change my mood hopefully 😉

Thanks for posting!!!

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dev25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: dev25

I guess note sent by garima or payal

I have guessed on 23 march thread 4 page 65

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cosmina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

i think i love Shetal!although he already suspect that ,hearing those words ,even by Sheetal's beak ,scares him to death!why? the year is not over yet,maybe will be more other problems between,why now?maybe because he realize the same thing in the same time? come home Arnav and face the problem,if this is one.i would like that Kushi too ,to be present when Sheetal made that statement,but who knows,maybe she was?! we will find out next week.thank you for update!

oh,almost forgot,the ring cut part and the sindoor similarity was brilliant! his ring,his mark on her forehead!

Edited by cosmina - 11 years ago