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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

18,500!! You deserve that bow

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
18,500 words done.
I will now take a bow, and leave you all in the bedroom with ArHi while I run off to send PMs.

Enjoy!

Not only should you take a bow, but you should go rest now; do the PM's tomorrow!!!

Just read the update - kind of at a loss for words right now so will come back and give a proper comment shortly.

But if that isn't a cliff-hanger at the end, I don't know what is!!!!

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vks11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Simply superb . What can i say. The best of best. Intezaar ka phal such me metha hai!

Will read it once again slowly and then post my comment.

👏

Now I am at loss of words and cant describe. what I feel.

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Juhi, first of all thanks for staying up so late and giving us the update. Hats off to you!!!!

Secondly what an update it was!! The raw passion between them and the way you have expressed it in words is beyond excellence.

Finally the insecurities Khushi has, came out in the open to Arnav. I was also happy that even he confessed that he was at fault too to be so authoritative towards her regarding Payal.

So Khushi is cooking for him and taking it to his office to have lunch with him and they are having sex right in the conference room!!! 😉

Now at last what was that, a threat from some one. Why did she not show it Arnav immediately. I hope nobody harms her. She should discuss it with Arnav ASAP.

As next update is from Arnav's POV, will wait to know what he thinks about everything that is happening.

Enjoy your trip, have loads of fun!!!!

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

The update was

My sleep has gone down the drain J!!! I cant believe the twist in the end... I just cant believe it... Trust you to keep the mystery intact and to shower us in cold water with just few lines at the end... When the update was the hottest that I have read from you, the note was the coldest... Will be back later...