CC#1 ~Friends with no benefits :p~ [Strictly IO] - Page 42

Mom..
It's a very very beautiful OS
please do post it..
I totally loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Mom..
It's a very very beautiful OS
please do post it..
I totally loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: sankadevi_lg

is it ok? i mean i didnt like it at all... if I post... i'm confused... can u feel it like completed? please tell me frnakly ... otherwise i will try to write again.. please

mom it's awesome..
But yes..
Maybe yo can write it as a TS.. I mean a two shot..
This was a bit hurried..!!
Otherwise.. It's really awesome :)

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

mom it's awesome..
But yes..
Maybe yo can write it as a TS.. I mean a two shot..
This was a bit hurried..!!
Otherwise.. It's really awesome :)

Mom you can make this update as half..!!
I mean you can break this chapter into two..
In the chapter 1... Maybe you can end with Arnav proposing Khushi..
And in 2nd chapter you can write the other details..!! 😊

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Mom you can make this update as half..!!
I mean you can break this chapter into two..
In the chapter 1... Maybe you can end with Arnav proposing Khushi..
And in 2nd chapter you can write the other details..!! 😊

and first part only arnav proposing? or khushi's acceptance also?

Mom I think you should end the chapter on a cliff hanger 😃
This will keep the readeras glued :p
and no more suggestions mom..
You know what, I totally love this concept of yours..
Now I am thinking of writing something similar to this 😊

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Mom I think you should end the chapter on a cliff hanger 😃
This will keep the readeras glued :p
and no more suggestions mom..
You know what, I totally love this concept of yours..
Now I am thinking of writing something similar to this 😊