Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_
accha regarding your comment... haan even i think i wrote differently. i could really feel otherwordly while writing it. usually i have semblance of everything else.. but iss time pe i concentrated to the maximum extent... felt mad at that time.
WHOOPIIEEE
maine sahi pakda...
see u say ki u write vulgar.. its a tharki scene so.. thats ur notion..
par kal jab padh rha tha.. toh it wasn't lets say uncomfy for a rookie to read u cud say..
feelings were projected nah..
normally u don't go this much into emotional description..
u lace it with physical content and emo content alike...