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Originally posted by: asrcraze

Arre Fari I was eating so was playing ...adding only smileys...Take back your sorry right now!!

Infact I think I should say sorry ...Sorry :(

Here🤗🤗🤗

You go refresh and eat ...I'll be here so we'll talk later ...You know I love you loads and loads right??

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Fari, I made this for one of Zee's updates...but will be happy if you are happy with this

Originally posted by: asrcraze

Originally posted by: asrcraze

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Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

La you made these?

Originally posted by: asrcraze

Yes Saiyu... I made Fari sad so for her :D

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

La i am broozd by two parties. Fari and Sami on one hand and KLa on the other. Jaaon toh jaaon kahan? 😭

Originally posted by: asrcraze

We're used to it Saiyu... chodo :(

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Q&A for Kismet

Was the quality of the story good? Be specific

Yes. It was very good. For someone who has written two epics, you did an amazing job with a short story :-)

Was the length of the story justifying to the story?


Not only the story length but also each update length was perfect (although everu uodate did make me crave for more 😳

Was it abrupt at any place?

Nope :-P

Is there anything I may have missed in the update?

An elaborate love making scene ]:$]

Were unnecessary characters included in the story?

No. you never even showed Payal!

Did I hurt any sentiments in the story religious/ethnic/others?


Nahi nahi nahi *gets dramatic*

Based on your response I will be able to cover the
overlooked points in the epilogue

Jaldi likho epilogue :-D