FF collaboration CC: Doing it right#2, note-p5 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

@D: As long as I write the last chapter D you can take whichever date that suits you and Vid allots. Yes, I can get very demanding...

@Juhi: Hum theek hain *in a meek voice*

Erm.. can anyone tell me if the neighbourhood where the Guptas live in Lucknow has been mentioned anywhere and if Nani is in Lucknow? 😳

Only two writers, v and girl of fire have mentioned that nani is in Lucknow. And choti has mentioned that Khushi's house is called gomti sadan. But no one has mentioned the neighbourhood.

The person writing after you is vid again. so madhu and vid...

And the third person. Okay, will you read, R didi and give me honest opinions? *looking up with puppy eyes* Mush and Humour is not my stuff 😳 But it's fun to write.

D I'm online from phone. so replying here.

Interesting. very interesting. you got a mast twist at the end...

now to the things i didn't understand-

madhu had ended on the note that Khushi will meet Arnav at his office in an hour. you've not mentioned it and no explanation for the same isn't given either.

as far as i remember nikita had mentioned that mami who wanted a rich sophisticated ms. India type bahu wouldn't want anyone like payal. and in the party shyam had mysteriously taken care of that. so mami had already agreed to the proposal.

why did anjali have 'her' lab coat in her hand? she isn't a doctor. shyam is a practicing doctor in Lucknow. and she's pregnant and doesn't work.

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

D I'm online from phone. so replying here.

Interesting. very interesting. you got a mast twist at the end...

now to the things i didn't understand-

madhu had ended on the note that Khushi will meet Arnav at his office in an hour. you've not mentioned it and no explanation for the same isn't given either.

as far as i remember nikita had mentioned that mami who wanted a rich sophisticated ms. India type bahu wouldn't want anyone like payal. and in the party shyam had mysteriously taken care of that. so mami had already agreed to the proposal.

why did anjali have 'her' lab coat in her hand? she isn't a doctor. shyam is a practicing doctor in Lucknow. and she's pregnant and doesn't work.