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Here I am posting some thing... please give me reply... as my next story is based on ur reply...

Confusion

A silver car stops at a hotel….. Room no. 326…. Someone knock the door…. After some time enters in to room….. After few movements…. ACP comes out….. He look here and there and then move on………..

In Bureau

All are present except Sachin and Kajal……

Abhijeet: Daya yaar yeh achanak Sachin or Kajal kaha chale gaye….

Daya: Abhijeet tum toh jante ho Sachin or Kajal pehele Delhi CID mai kam kar chuke hai…. waha pe unhone kisi case mai sath mai kam kiya tha….. ussi case ke sinsileme Delhi head quarter unse kuch madat chahti hai…. tom un dono ko wala jana pada…… Shayad 10 -15 din woh log wahi rehenge…..

Fready: Sir, kya bat hai… aap dono kuch pareshan lag rahai hai…

Abhijeet: nahi Fredy aaisi koi bat nahi hai…. Darsal ACP sir ab tak nahi aaye hai…. toh thodi chinta ho rahi hai…. tum toh jante ho na… Pichale do din se unko koi phone pe dhamaki de raha hai…..

Vivek: toh Abhijeet sir… aap ACP sir ko phone karke kue nahi dekhte……

Abhijeet: or phone pe kya kahue… Daya tum kue nahi karte….

Daya: Kya??????? Mai?????? Kue marawa rahai ho yaar?????

ACP: kon maar raha hai Daya tumhe….. or tum logo koi kam nahi hai???

Abhijeet: Sssir woh kuch nahi bas aaise hi? Aap thik toh hai na sir?

ACP: Abhijeet muse kya hua hai……..

ACP gives an envelope to each of them….

ACP: In envelopes mai kya hai yeh toh muse bhi nahi pata… or haan in envelopes mai joh bhi likha hai usse tum muse ya kisi or ko nahi bata sakte…. Samaj gaye……

All say yes sir…. And open their envelopes…..

After some movements…… Daya moves out…. But before moving he give a look to Abhijeet…… in return Abhijeet gives a node and also show best of luck sign…. Daya gives him a smile and show his thumb……

After some hours…… Abhijeet's mobile rings…. He listens to it…. And

Abhijeet: Sir kharghar mai station ke bahar ek gadi khadi hai…… Sir uss gadi ke upar ek black colour ka suitcase hai…… logo ko shak hua iss kiye logone Police ko bulaya…… chan bin ke bad pata chala hai sir ki ussa suitcase mai bomb hai……

ACP: oh my god Abhijeet…. Kahi bomb blast toh nahi hua…………

Abhijeet: nahi sir time bomb tha per timer on nahi tha… bomb squad waha pohoch gayi hai… unhone uss bomb ko waha se hata diya hai……. per sir uss bag mai ek gun mili hai……. Sir hairani ki bat ye hai sir ki woh gun Daya ke naam pe hai….

ACP: Kya Daya ki service gun…….

Abhijeet: nahi sir Daya ki service gun nahi…. Sir aap ko yaad hai woh Bank scam wala case…..

ACP: Haan… per usaka yaha kya samaband hai Abhijeet

Abhijeet: Sir uss case mai Daya ne do guns kharidi thi…. Jismai se ek gun ussane muse gift ki thi or dusari ussane aapne pas rakhi thi… or dono guns ussane register bhi karwai thi….. Sir yeh wahi gun hai…..

Fredy: Abhijeet sir per woh gun toh Daya sir ne lota di hogi na?

Abhijeet: Nahi Fredy…. Hum dono ne paper works or proper higher authority permissions leke woh guns apane pass rakh li thi….. per woh gun toh Daya ke gharpe honi chahiye….. yeh waha kaise pohochi…..

ACP: Ab yeh toh waha jake hi pata chalega!!!! Abhijeet Daya koh phone karo or usse wahi bula lo…..

Kharghar Station area

Fredy and Vivek searching the Car… Abhijeet try to call someone…….. ACP talking with the local police and Bomb squad head…..

ACP(Gun is in his hand): Sharad tum ko iss bat ki khabar kisne di….

Insp Sharad: Sir muse ek pone aaya tha subah…. Pehele toh muse laga ki koi zuti kabar de raha hai… per phir bhi maine wireless ke jariye yaha pe patrolling kar rahi Van ko khabar ki… unhone jab aapne paas ke metal detector se bag check ki toh unhe signals mile unhone muse or bomb squad ko bulaya….

ACP: or yeh gun?

Bomb squad person: Sir yeh gun bomb ke niche se mili….

ACP: Abhijeet…. (He looks at him) Kya hua Abhijeet phone laga usse ya nahi?

Abhijeet: sir phone lag raha hai per koi utha nahi raha hai.

ACP: Vivek iss gun ko, bag ko or gadi ko forensic lab bhej do….. Fredy pata karo ki gadi kiski hai….. Abhijeet tum Daya ke phone ki location pata karo……

At forensic lab

ACP and team enters….

Salunke: arre ACP aaj tumhare aane ke bad bhi meri lab khali khali lag rahi hai?

ACP: Salaunke sidhe sidhe bolna kya bolna chahata hai?

Salunke: arre iss gun ke malik inspector Daya kaha hai? Kue Abhijeet Tumhara dost kaha hai…. Kahi bomb blast karwake bhagne ka plan toh nahi thana usaka….. (Abhijeet give him a angry look)

ACP: Salunke yeh kya bakwas kar rahai ho….. (in harsh tone)

Salunke: ACP mai toh wahi keh raha hue joh yeh sabut muse keh rahai hai…. Boss tumne layi hue her ek chij per sirf or sirf Daya ki ungliyo ke nishan hai…. iss bomb per, gun per bhi or Gadi ki driving wheel per ….

Abhijeet now keenly watching all evidences……

He took the gun… and taken out the magazine of the gun… he look carefully………… then take out a bullet……

Abhijeet: Sir yeh gun Daya ki nahi hai……….

Salunke: Abhijeet yeh tum kaise keh sakte ho…….

Abhijeet: Sir yeh gun ek dum uss gun jaisi hai…… per sir Yeh Daya ki nahi hai…… Sir Daya ke pass joh gun hai uss ke Magazin per maine Daya ka naam emborse karke usse diya tha… or sir uss gun mai joh goliya hai woh dikhati toh ek dum assali hai per woh assal mai nakali goliya hai…… Sir maine aapni gun ke sath bhi kuch aaisa hi kiya hai…………

Vivek: Sir per iss gun ki registry to Daya sir ke naam pe hai……

Fredy: Abhijeet sir magazine badly ja sakti hai…….

ACP: Abhijeet tumhari Gun ki bat mai koi dum nahi hai…….

Abhijeet: Sir hume kisi bhi conclusion pe pohchane se pehele ek bar Daya se pat karani chahiye…. per yeh Daya phone kue nahi utha raha hai……

ACP: Abhijeet maine tumhe Daya ke phone ki location pata karane ko kaha tha….

Abhijeet: sir Daya ki phone ki location usaka ghar hai…..

Daya's House

ACP and team outside…. Ringing the bell…… no answer…. ACP looks at Abhijeet…. And order Fredy to break the door………. The same time Abhijeet take out the keys and hand over to ACP…. ACP gives an Angry look to him…….. and open the door……

All start searching for Daya….. Abhijeet dial Daya's mobile phone…… its ringing in kitchen……

Abhijeet: Daya phone kitchen mai hai……. Per woh khud kaha hai………..

Fredy and Vivek enter in to Kitchen: Sir Daya sir ka koi pata nahi hai….

ACP: Abhijeet Daya woh gun kaha rakhata tha… tumhe pata hai right?

Abhijeet: sir, woh cupboard mai rakhata tha aapni gun

Fredy moves to search the gun. After some time: sir Daya sir ki gun gayab hai…… unke cupboard se…… cupboard mai gun ki khali case padi hai…. or ye magazine jaise Abhijeet sir ne kahi thi…. Sir iss pe Daya sir ka naam hai or Goliya nakali hai….

ACP: Thik hai chalo yaha se……… they move towards main door… but Abhijeet did not follow them……….. after few seconds he also move towards door………..

ACP: Abhijeet dekh rahai ho na…… Woh gun Daya ki hi hai……….

All reach at main door… Abhijeet in hurry comes out and join the team……..

At bureau

ACP: Akhir ye sab ho kya raha hai…… Daya hai kaha……..

Abhijeet called someone….. After talking to him he feels uneasy……

Then he called to his khabari and gives some instructions

Abhijeet: Dekh mangu muse puri khabar chahiye….. or woh bhi ek ghunte ke under…….

The same time… Daya enters in to bureau….. ACP looks at him….. Before he ask anything….

Daya: Sir, woh bomb maine hi rakha tha… per on karne ki himat hi nahi hue iss liye aaise hi chod diya………… Sir mai aapne aap ko surrender kar raha hue. (He put both his hands in front of ACP)

All are shock at that time………..

ACP: Daya kya tumhara dimag kharab hai………… Abhijeet sun rahai ho ye kya kaih raha hai……..

Abhijeet: Sir agar Daya khud confession de raha hai… toh hum kya kar sakte hai…… Vivek girftar kar lo Daya ko…..

Vivek: Sir….

Abhijeet: Vivek its an order… Daya ko interrogation room mai leke jaao………

Daya himself enters in to Interrogation room……

ACP is shock on alls behavior…... Fredy is silent…. Fredy who every time takes site of his team members……… Vivek is not at his sharpness… he is just following orders……… Abhijeet….. he order against Daya…..

Here Abhijeet is busy on phone…..

After Half an hour

Some police officers enter in to bureau….. They are holding two culprits whose faces are covered………..

ACP: Shirtke yeh kya hai…. kone hai ye log………

Shirke: Sir inn logo ko pakad ke lane ke instructions muse Inspector Abhijeet ne diye the……

ACP: Abhijeet kone hai ye log…..

Abhijeet: sir batata hue pehele Daya ko toh yaha aane dijiye…….

Daya comes out from interrogation room…………

Daya: shirke Jara inn dono ke chehere se nakab toh hatao………….

Shirke takes out the cover from culprits' faces…… All are shock to see their two officers as culprit………….. its Sachin and Kajal……..

ACP: Sachin Kajal kya hai ye sab……. Abhijeet kya tum ne kaha tha inn ko girftar karane ko……..

Abhijeet: Sir haan sir maine hi kaha tha.

ACP: Abhijeet tumhara dimag toh thik haina? Kya hai ye sab

Daya: Sir Abhijeet joh kar raha hai woh sahi hai….. Sir Kharghar station pe joh bomb mila hai woh inn dono ne hi rakha tha……. Or mere ungalio ke prints bhi chode the……

ACP: yeh tum kya keh rahai ho Daya….

Abhijeet: Sir Daya sahi keh raha hai……

Daya: Sir do din pehele mai ek case ko solve karke bureau aaya….. tab Sachin muse bahar mila or musase kehene laga ki usse thodi der ke liye quails chahiye………… maine dedi

Abhijeet: Sir ussake thodi der bad muse Sachin ek garage ke yaha mila….. Woh driving whill per naya cover laga raha tha……….. maine jab pucha tab ussa ne kaha ki woh cover fat gatha iss liye Daya ne ussase kaha ki woh chage kara de…… sir muse thoda shak hua…… per maine uss waqt jada nahi pucha… per maine bad mai Daya se jarur pucha toh ussane saf mana kar diya….. Sachin nane ussase kaha tha ki maine woh cover change karne ke liye kaha hai……. Sir Daya ka pehela whill cover maine aaj waps dekha… ussa Khar ghar pe mili gadi ke driving whill per…… or ussake sath sath Daya ke finger prints bhi……

Daya: Sir ussi din sham ko Kajal mere pass ayi thi… ussake hath mai ek time bomb tha…… ussane glowz pehene or musase keh rahi thi… yeh ek case ka evidence hai…. ussi waqt achank ussake hath se woh bomb gir gaya maine suddenly usse catch kiya… sir maine gloz nahi pehene the iss liye mere unglio le nishan aa gaye uss ke upper………..

Abhijeet: sir kal Daya jab ghar pohocha tab ussa ke padosi rahul ne ussase kaha ki ussa ka CID officer dost ussake ghar pe aaya tha…. Sir Rahul ne Daya ke ghar pe CID team ki photo maise Sachin ko pehechan liya….. ussake bad Daya ne aapne ghar ki talashi li toh usse pata chala ki ussa ki gun gayab hai… per ussaki magazine wahi thi…..

Daya: Maine Abhijeet se kaha toh ussane muse FIR karne se roka……..

Abhijeet: Sir mai janana chahta tha ki akhir bat kya hai………… Aaj subah Sachin ka Daya koh phone aaya tha ki woh or Kajal… Delhi office ja rahai hai case ke sinsilemai………

Daya: Subah Jab muse Sachin ka phone aaya mai samaj gaya ki kuch hone wala hai………. phir kya hai sir maine Abhijeet ko signal kiya or mai bureau se nikal gaya…. Aapne ghar ke liye…..

Abhijeet: Sir Daya nikal gaya kue ki hum nahi jante the ki plan kya hai.. or Agar kuch galat plan hai toh bhi Daya iss waqt apne ghar pe ho sakta hai yeh koi soch bhi nahi sakta……………..

Abhijeet: Phir hume woh gadi mili………Jiske Driving wheel per Daya ka puran cover tha… wahi bomb tha joh ussa din Kajal ke pass tha… or phir Daya ki gun jise Sachinne ussake ghar se churaya tha…….. Sir muse Yakin ho gaya ki yeh sab Sachin or Kajal ka hi plan hai…..

Daya: Sir phir Abhijeet ne Jaan bhuch kar woh magzin wali bat ki or Fredy or Vivek ne usse kata….. Taki agar Sachin or Kajal humpe najar rakhe hai toh unhe uakin ho jaye ki hume Daya pe shak ho gaya hai…………

ACP: toh iss bar tumhare plan mai Fredy or Vivek bhi shamil the… kue………

Vivek with smile… yes sir… permuse yeh sab Fredy sir ne kaha tha

Fredy (proudly): Sir muse sab Daya sir ne kaha tha

Abhijeet: Sir inn dono ka humare sath hona jaruri tha… kue ki agar ye dono ko nahi batate toh Daya koh bachane kiye Fredy aapne sare khabari lagata or Vivek full action mai kuch na kuch toh jarur dhundata…….

ACP: haan yeh toh sahi hai…..

Abhijeet: Sir issase hume Sachin and Kajal ke plan ke bareme kabhi pata nahi chalta…… Sir ussake bad jab hum Daya ke ghar peg aye the….. Tab Sachin hamara picha kar raha tha…… Daya ne sachin ko dekha or woh chup gaya……

ACP: issaka matlab Jab hum Daya ke ghar pohoche toh woh wahi tha…...

Vivek: Kya Daya sir aap wahi the per aap hume dikhe kaise nahi…..

Abhijeet: arre Vivek Daya ko hide & sik khelne ka bohot experience hai…. (Abhijeet wink at Daya…. who gives precious smile to him) or agar tum logo ko yaad ho toh maine tum logo ko kitchen room ki talashi lene hi nahi di thi….. Sir jab hum waha se nakal rahai the tab mai thodi der ruka jaise hi aap log bahar nikale maine daya ko ishara kiya or usaka mobile usse wapas de diya

Daya: Phir maine Ahijeet ko phone kiya or usse Sachin ki harkat batai…..

Abhijeet: Phir maine Daya ko surrender hone ko kaha taki jab ye Sachin or Kajal bureau mai aapan jurm Kabul kare tab Daya bhi yahi ho…. Or aapne khabari ko inn dono ko dhundane ko kaha…… ussane jab muse khabar di toh maine shirke ko… innhe girftar karane ko bheja…………

ACP: Sachin Kajal tum dono ne aaisa kue kiya……..

Sachin……………………

Here I am confused…… as there are two ends ready in my mind….. now I wantall of ur views……

Let me clear one thing….. my one end gives Sachin and Kajal their Possession back and one end Sachin and Kajal will be out from My stories……………

Please suggest me……. Its up to u people…………

Edited by loveDAYA - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you LD di
Howz you?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay LD di I am reading it right now
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks maggi...
read and please reply...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivani24

give a look...


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Bhari mehfil main tanha rehna acha lagta hai

Terey barey main sochtey rehna acha lagta hai

Kabhi pholon main ,kabhi kaliyon main

Tujh ko hi dhontey rehna acha lagta hai

Meree zindagi ki khushiyan tumhee say hain

Rab say sirf tumhein hi mangna acha lagta hai

Hamarey darmiyan hail rahein sadiyon ki khamoshiyan

Kuch is tarhan guftugu karna acha lagta hai

Tumhrey baghir zindagi ki koi tasavur nahi hai

Kuch is tarhan tumharee tamanna karna acha lagta hai

Tum hi ko chaha,tum hi ko chahtey hain

Tumhi ko chahtey rehna acha lagta hai

Tumare bagair kya hai meri Jindgi

Bas isi soch main khud ko uljhaye rakhna acha lagta hai

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Rab maran te puche khawahish meri..

Meri akhiri khawahish tu hi tu hove...

Bol na hove bula kolo...

Tere ghar val mera Muh hove

Hath la ke vekhe dhadkan nu

Mere Saha vich tu hi tu hove...

Agle Janam li mang lva tenu..

Main Jism te tu meri Rooh hove

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Teri khushi vich khushi sadi

Hor kise naal ki

Ji sohneya ji

Bhave kise da ho ke jii

Ki hoya je

Hun sada nhi

Kade ta sada c...

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dada plz translate krne ke liye nhi kehna
apne dimag pr jor daal kr samjh lena😉





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Edited by capradnya1986 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


dis is MY OWN!!!

koi bhi kaam karta hun
tou aankhein bheeg jaati hain
tujhy jub yaad karta hun
tou aankhein bheeg jaati hain;

koi by naam sii aankhein
meri yaadun mein lehraaein
kabhi manzar badalta hun
tou aankhein bheeg jaati hain;

kabhi lafzun ki sang baari
kabhi wo yaar ki yaari
main jub mehsus karta hun
tou aankhein bheeg jaati hain;

mian her lamha bhulaany ko
main wo zillat mitaany ko
kabhi jub shoor karta hun
tou aankhein bheeg jaati hain...






Dada u put your heart in it...

Lovely my creator... 🤗🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: gadhadada



MAGGIE SKETCHES...
SURPRISE for DUO n ALL...












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Edited by capradnya1986 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANX a lot Prady di
And LD di the story is GREAT👍🏼
And my view would be that they should be out of the story😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks u maggi... Chalo lets have a voting for same
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Posted: 14 years ago
Actually it was my dream to Remove from AB PP from CID team.
So opt this option.

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