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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

@ rakhi -- llovely part...cant wait to c the expression on A n S face when he says geet,,,..😈...jitna blush karna hai kar lo sam...hum hawaiyan ud jaayengi...😈

i feel like everytime
Sam thinks dat now she can get Maan
Geet comes n ruins it for herπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
u know something like Band Bajaing πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
@maanujaanu welcome to maaneet express.
I know but I changed it and let assume she knw
@kate yes hope no mc
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ kate -- once again...just awesome...lovely...cant get enough of ur poems...πŸ˜› πŸ‘ thank yu sweetheart
πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago
jyoti tu toh mere soul sister hain , sab samajh ajti hain mere maan mein kya hain
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Posted: 14 years ago
πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜†Wow..kyaa timing hai meri ....... πŸ˜†
@rakhi ... another gr88 part dear .... eagerly waiting for next
@kate heyyyy dear πŸ€—
nice poems ..loved it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
ELEVENTH PART: πŸ˜› ........ITS LAST.......SORRY 😳

G: oye listen mister……..as I said before I m sorry……..meine janbuj ke nahi takrahe……..n thanks for saving me………as for ur tie…….im sorry even thought u were at fault too……….so here……..she forward her hand which was holding new ties……..maan didn't response or move………he look other side………geet took his hand forcefully n put new tie on this palm………n said

G: im sorry about tie again………I can't return tht tie but aap ko yeh deh sakti hu………she waited for his replay but none came……….

G: look……..i know ur mad about it but………then she remember something………n……said omg its getting late don't u have meeting to attend……..word meeting caught his attention……..n he gave angry glance at geet…… he was about to say something ……….before he could start geet started walking toward store exit ………….n then stop in middle (imagine geet stoping to say something)

G: by the way……….tht tie don't match ur shirt……..saying this she wink πŸ˜‰at him………n walk toward exit door where is ran into PARI (I think maan was right about geet adat of running into people)

ab aage: πŸ˜†

PART: 12 πŸ˜›

Geet run into pari

P: hey watch it geet

G: sorry….still smiling

P: Kya huwa ………geet…….y r u smiling

G: Kuch nahi…..bas woh……..n……..she turns to see maan

P: Woh….. kya…….. try to look where geet is looking,……..

Geet who sees maan……n………give him big smile……..then turns n grab pari hand n exit store

P: Geet……..bata bhi de kya huva…….

she was confuse as y geet is in store….. When she was suppose to be at caf…..n…..if she was not wrong…..she show geet smiling at stranger…….more like he is totally Mr. DREAMYYYYYYY

G: Kuch nahi pari……n…..remember her encounter with maan….n…..smile herself

P: Geet…..geet…….r u ok?

G: Yeah……..im fine…….

P: No ur not…….now be a good girl n tell me wht happen after I left……

G: Kuch nahi yaar….. pari…….trying to change topic

P: Nahi……..kuch toh jarur huva hai…….giving her "UCAN'TLIETOME" stare

G: Thik hai meri maa…….bata ti hu……..par ab chale…….we r getting late

P: Geet…..dont ignore topic…….n…..start telling me

G: Im not changing topic…….woh …….but stop suddenly….like she remember something

G: Pari…..y don't u go n sit in car I will be right behind u

P: Par….geet…..listen yaar

G: Pari I will be right back……….i promise I will tell u whole story……..thik hai……..ab tu jah

P: Promise….

G: Pakawala promise ……….yaar……..aur tum janti ho……..GEET HANDA apna promise kabhi nahi tod ti…….chahe kuch bhi hogaye

P: Thik hai……..but I want to know……everything…..n…….i mean everything ok

G: Ok meri maa……..ab tu jah

PARI LEAVE n GEET goes toward CAF


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Posted: 14 years ago
i feel like everytime
Sam thinks dat now she can get Maan
Geet comes n ruins it for herπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
u know something like Band Bajaing πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Good point my dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
my last scene for today.....

outhouse--
daadi again called maan...
daadi -- maan bete, aap abhi tak party me nahi aaye..kahan hai aap??
maan -- daadi maine kaha naa...mujhe nahi aana..
daadi -- hum kuch nahi sunna chahte....agle 5 min me aap yahan hone chahiye...
maan -- par daadi ...daadi had cut the call...
here mk was listening everything...
mk -- da...da...ka..un..thaa....
maan -- daadi...
mk --me...ri....daadi..
maan -- no sweetheart...meri daadi...
mk -- yeeyyy...meaning...mk...ki...par....daa....dii...
maan just nodded...
mk -- daa...di...gu...sss...aa...
maan again nodded...
mk -- ma..maa...says...ba...don..ko...gu..ssaa...nahi...kar..te...
maan -- then..
mk -- u ..do...wha...ttt...th..ey...say...
maan -- but baby then dada ko wahan jaana padega..
mk -- ma..inn...bh..ii...aa..on..gi...
maan -- nahi sweety aap nahi aa sakte...bade logon ki party hai..kids r not allowed...
mk feels sad
maan -- sweetheat...agar aap aisa sad honge then i'll not go...
mk -- na..hin...mk...nahi...jayegi..aa...pp...bh...i.i...ma...tt....ja..ooo
even maan doesnt want to go but daadi had given him clear instructions that he had to come...
maan -- but abhi aapne hi to kahan ki badon ki baat maanni chahiye...
mk is now confused....
mk -- she is sad but says -- okk...but onl...ly...5...showing her fingers...min...
maan -- thats like my pari ...n kisses her...
he himself didnt know y he called her my pari...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

@maanujaanu welcome to maaneet express.
I know but I changed it and let assume she knw
@kate yes hope no mc

thnxs 4 d invite
n gr8 update
can't wait 4 d nxt prt
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Posted: 14 years ago
@kate heyyyy dear πŸ€—
nice poems ..loved it 😊


thank yu my dear MUAH

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