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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

😆😆
Okay suggestions?
Guys? Any suggestions? Should the name be changed? if yes, then to what?

Jake? 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
part - 3
DD prepared the tea poured it into the cup,placed it over the tray which already had the snacks in it.She is blushing continuosly and she is enjoying these moments of her life to the core.She knew that GC too feels the same,but he wants her to bring it out with her words.She wants GC to pamper her more to let her heart out.With this thought she went to the hall where GC is sitting with his eyes fixed on her.She gave the tea cup and he purposely touched her fingers looking deeply into her eyes.😳

DD: Aise kyoun ghoor rahe ho mujhe,jaise pehle bhar dekh rahe ho!☺️
GC:Mein dekh raha hoon,ki thum kaise ithni pyari si, sundhar si, meeti si,.........
DD was looking at him longingly☺️
GC:Hmmm tum ithni meeti si chai kaise bhan sakthi ho?😆
DD:Wo,mein ne Oxford university mein seek kar aayi hoon🤣and she asks is this very important now?😡
GC:Then tell me what is important,this Samosa😆 i love samosa....
saying that he took one and started to eat,DD tried to take the other one and she intentionally dropped it down and acted as if it slipped from her hands
DD:Ouch,sirf dho hi the [she is lying]and she looked at him with an expectation in her eyes.she wants him share his joota with her!
GC:Drashti.is it true if we eat the joota of someone love will grow more stronger?
DD:U was saying this dialogue in the show,so u should know about that!🤣
GC:I didnt share my joota with anyone till now,saying that he gave the samosa to her which was half eaten by him.😳 DD still blushing red took it from him and starts to eat that.
DD:I ate it because i desperately wanted to taste it cause i too love samosas😉
GC:Achcha,tho tum kyoun andhar jaake aur laker aathi,i saw many more there😆
DD blushed even more as he caught her.
DD:Pehlehe aapko pathatha hein na then why did u give me urs?
GC:I gave it because,i wanted to know whether u will eat my joota or not?
DD:Now i ate it ,what did u understand from that?
GC slowly got up from his place,moved closed to her,gently took her hands in his and asked,
GC:So you want to hear it from me,
She just closed her eyes in anticipation and waited to hear those magical words from him.
GC thinks himself ithni aasani se nahi boloonga Drashu,you have to wait.He took her hands up and kissed it and he said
GC:Drashti,ab mujhe chalna chahiye!
DD:Aap kuch kehne wale the,thodi dher aur rukhiyena,still it is raining outside.
GC:Mein jho kehne wala hoon wo mein kehdhoonga par ab nahi😈
DD was thinking,show me kithne bhar bol chuke hein,par real mein ithna build up kyoun dhey rahen hein.she just stood up and went close to him and looked at him eagerly,
GC:Tu kyoun nahi bathathi ,why did u eat my joota?
She just stood up on her feet and kissed him on his forehead.GC was shocked and happy at the same time.
DD:Dont you know action speak louder than words😳
GC still in trance
GC:Drashti,i am leaving now see u tomorrow!
DD:You didnt said anything
GC:Abhi nahi kuch thaiyyari karni hein,winked his eyes and started walking towards the door.
DD:Gurmeet,drive safely,its still raining.
He smiled at her,came back and gave a peck on her forehead and said
GC:I will take care,dont worry Drashu!
He unwillingly moved again and went out,while DD was standing there like a statue and she can still hear GC calling her Drashu and a huge grin came in her face and she said i will wait for that Gurmeet😳



How was that GUYS ,ready shoot me with ur comments.Thanks everyone for liking my writing and for ur splendid encouragement.Really kabhi nahi socha tha ki mein ye sab kuch kar paoonghi.thanks deedians from bottom of my heart🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Jakefication

I don't like the name, Deej. Being straight foward here! 🤣

Simz! Do you spend all your time hooking me up with ... people? 🤣

i hook u up u 😲do the naughty things 😉and put the blame on me😡
i try to help in making it public bhalayi ka zamane hee nahi raha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
@Jake u can do the honours pls🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
DEEDar😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
How about Jakeed? 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
i just finished venu again don't have words for it too gud
👏
but can we ahve a different nick name for DD, dhrashtu is quite common i think must be very special between them 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
🤣🤣🤣🤣 GOOD ONE!!!
I put that name and i will have the entire anti-jake brigade behind me
🤣🤣🤣 Awesome!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: TomJerryTom

i just finished venu again don't have words for it too gud

👏
but can we ahve a different nick name for DD, dhrashtu is quite common i think must be very special between them 😆

What about 'Mirchi - bomb' or mishti or mirchi!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Jakefication

How about Jakeed? 😆😆

no jake we don't want the kid to be scandalised before birth itself 🤣 waise bhi parents karte karte rukh jaate hain 🤣🤣🤣

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