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Posted: 15 years ago
LOL An 😆

Jokes apart, i understood wht he meant 😊 kerna mushkil hey 😆

Howz you? :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: secretkeeper

LOL An 😆

Jokes apart, i understood wht he meant 😊 kerna mushkil hey 😆

Howz you? :)



Slept a lot. Feeling lethatgic though need to sharpen my mind for the next issue on Monday 😊 Plus, need to finish loads of work before my break starts. 😊

Tussi sunao?
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Penguin: Lethargic? You need some Mehrkits 😆

Next issue on Monday? Whoa- time flies!

When does your break start? date set?

I'm fine. Need puri nahi hoh rahi samajh nahi aa raha kya masla hey :S
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maan ka masla to nahi ha ha ha. Btw, did you go through your piece again? My break coming Friday probably. Lets see. 😊
Edited by an12345678 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kal Haya nay mujhe story sunai.. 😆 She was twirling my dupatta around her fingers 😆 aur aahista aahista dupatta phisal raha thaa LOL i was like: kya ker rahi hoh? 😆

then she paused at one part and said: "U wont like it" 😳 I asked: "Why?"
She: *eyes down, low whisper*: "Because then the prince kissed her" Me: 😲😳😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
Are you sure Haya your niece? 😆 You would put duppata on the prince and make him your bhai 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Penguin: Maan ka masla? 😆 No no...😳

Nope, didnt go through again. When i said one week, i meant it 😆

Please tell me An...what is wrong with it? [:S] Meinay pura tense change ker k dhekha, but my bhaabhi said this version was better [:S]
Edited by secretkeeper - 15 years ago
secretkeeper thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Penguin: "Are you sure Haya your niece? 😆 You would put duppata on the prince and make him your bhai 😆 "

Underlined: Mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi 😆 I'm very careful abt wht they watch on tv...but when they're in their room...out of my hands *shaking head* aur aaj kal k cartoons or ads 😡

Bold: hahahah ☺️😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
@An: Friday?? aur waapsi kab ki hey??
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Posted: 15 years ago
Tense is fine ... no problem with the narration. But, the reason is missing, according to me.

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