~~||Writing in the Sand||~~ - Page 15

Originally posted by: sami01

skepy and arwen sorry but my computer crashed before i could save my mix....which broke my heart but i will try to make it today..........but i have crazy ay at work so me taking my time this time...........😭 sari mehnat pe pani phir gaya,,,,,,,but hum bhi haar nahi manege

Pen is screaming that I update MRD.......but how can I when I am here .......... sorry mere sab bahane hai.

Originally posted by: skeptical

Not asleep Sakhi ............... not asleep at all !!!!!

But by golly!!!!!!!!!!!! What a VM............... Hahahaha! 😉😉...tum ko acha laga itta bahut hai mere liye

Rahe na Rahe hum ...................

One of my favourites from Mamta. That was also a sad story of a woman who had lost her love. very tragic story ,its my fav film apart from pyasa and mughleazam..so mother daughter concept came in my mind from that film only.....and yes name saba....too suits...

Rahe na Rahe hum...................

Meheka karenge

Banke kali Banke Saba Bage wafaa mein .........

That Saba was a good choice of word. Well done Sammy excellent choice for a song. And it was well compiled too. 👏 👏🤗thankyou

The first verse wasn't catching up so well (much of the words went over my head because of the urdu), but the second one matched to the T. The idea that she will live on was terrific. as i mentioned in earlier post had to make philosphical connection of autumn and spring of one's life.....😉

Khoye hum aise ..................... and the look of the forlorn Saba's face superbly matched....... 👍🏼

Kya hai milna..... kya bichadna nahi hai yaad humko. The ring sequence was just too good. The ring finally passing on to the daughter ............ Isi sar zameen pe hum to rahenge ........ saba now in form of sara???????? That's my perspective.......Was it yours too???totaly also ...that for happiness of daughter ..a woman can sacrifice anything like kalyani does for her daughter in mamta...and hwo she sees she will live on in her daughter..part of her will be there...😭

And then Mohd Rafi voice to focus on Haider and Sara was really a masterstroke ........i thought of idea again from original film when kalyani's daughter and inderneel both r singing and she hears them....and feels nostalgic,took me soem time to find mohd rafi and suman kalaynpur version of the famous solo of lata...am so happy u liked it ,its also to depict taht time changes as u mentioned

Jab hum na honge ....... showing the repentant Arfeen at her grave was marvellous

And in contrast the happiness of the young couple ....... everything is chalte chalte.

And lastly using the sea waves constantly rolling shows time doesn't wait for anybody ..... chalte chalte.yes life moves on but memeories r left forever..........this is how i wanted to end it
mere man ki is bhawna ko tum ne kis ache se chua hai skepy am so happy
mei mehnat safal hui thankyou once again

Superb................my dear, just toooooooo gooooooood!!!!!