PREJUDICE PARADISE SWARON AND KRIYANSH FF - Page 7

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Awesome update, Kriya and Rey argument , swayum help Sharon but still she don't reciprocate.. Hope Kriya team rock on stage . Waiting for next update rdx party.it's long time you don't give us update, Jodi made in heaven , socha nah tha and prejudice Paradise please update. And please pm mee 👍🏼 ...Tell me all your story name please...
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RDX party in d3 was awesome.I can't match that but hopefully you will like RDX party in this update too. Please ignore the mistakes.sorry for the late update.

PART-5

Everyone in RDX's office

Kriya:weakling...sir humari team ka naam weakling hoga

RDX:ok

Rey:finally miss. Dehradun ne apni team bana hi li

Nil:look at them guys ek team kya bana li atitude dikha rhe hai

RDX:who is the captain of your team?

Kriya:Swayam

Swaron:what

They look at each other

Sharon(in mind): please god isse captain mat banana.agar yeh captain ban gaya toh aur bhi jayada attitude dikhayega

Kriya:Swayam tumhari help ke bina yeh team kabhi nahi banti so tum captain banoge

Swayam:no kriya ...team ka idea tumhara tha...jo bhi kiya tumne kiya hai iss liye tum hi captain banna deserve karti ho

Vishakha:dude kya farak padta koi bhi captain ban jao yeh team hum sabki hai

Neha:vishakha telling right

Vicky:yeah kya farak padta hai koi bhi captain ho harne wale toh tum hi ho

Rey:stop it vicky...hum RDX sir ke office mein hai

Swayam:kriya humari captain hogi

Kriya:ok

RDX:great...bahut jaldi dance competition ki date bhi announce ho jayegi but before that kal ki party kke liye main aap sabko personally invite karna chahta hun

Neha:neha dreaming RDX inviting us personally

Simmi:kya bure din aa gaye hai an inke sath party karni hogi

Sharon:kitne khush ho rhe hai jaise first time kisi party mein jaa rhe hai

Kriya:thank you sir

RDX:party mein naa koi weakling and naa koi dazzler invited hai party mein sirf lousians aayenge...no fights

Rey:yes sir

In party

Kriya:get ready kriya first party in Mumbai

Neha:RDX ki party kitni happening hai

Vishakha:yeah dude

Swayam:just wait and watch guys dazzlers ne humare liye kuch na kuch not so happening plan kiya hoga

Bharat:agar aaj un logo ne kuch kiya na toh main chodunga nahi unhe

Amar:chodenge toh woh nahi hume

Kriya:but yeh toh party hai yahan no dazzler no weakling

Swayam: dazzler aur weakling ka divide 24*7 on rheta hai

Kriya: universe ji first party ko last party mat bnana

Nil:where is Rey yaar

Sharon:as usual he is late kabhi time par nahi aa sakta

Vicky:ab inn weaklings ke against akele hi plan bana hoga

Sharon: careful guys agar RDX sir pata chala gaya toh problem ho jayegi

Nil:mujhe toh RDX sir bhi weakling hi lagta hai humesha unka side leta hai

Rinni:not fair Sharon mujhe kisi ne bataya hi nahi ki RDX sir weakling hai

Simmi:shut up Rinni and enjoy the party

Rohit's friend:kya boring party hai yaar

Rohit:don't worry friends thodi der mein hi yeh party interesting hone wali hai

Rohit's friend:kaise

Rohit:RDX ki non alcoholic drinks ko alcoholic bana kar

Rohit's friend:wow dude but kaise

Rohit:kaam ho gaya bas fun ke liye ready rhena aur tum Sharon tum apni life ki horrible party ke liye ready rhena aaj ki party tum kabhi nahi bhool sakogi tumhe tumhare thapd ka answer milega aaj

After some time Almost everyone were drunk

Swaron

Sharon sit next to the swimming pool.Swayam come and sits next to her

Sharon:tum kyun aaye yahan

Swayam:tumhara naam likha yahan par

Sharon:you weakling...humesha dazzlers ke area mein aa jate ho

Swayam stared at her

Sharon:kya dekh rhe ho

Swayam:you are so beautiful

Sharon:ab pata chala

Swayam:pata toh tabhi chal gaya tha jab first time maine tumhe dekha tha but phir...

Sharon:phir?

Swayam:phir tumne apna muh khola bloody weakling,loser tumhara beautiful face hungry tigress mein change ho gaya.

Sharon:tumhe tumhari actual identity se problem hai ...loser ko loser hi bolte hai

Swayam:mujhe meri actual identity pata hi nahi hai

Sharon:matlab

Swayam:mera ek secret hai

Sharon:tumhara kya secret hai Mr. Saviour

Swayam:promise me tum kisi ko nahi bataogi

Sharon:promise

Swayam:main...main najayaz hun

Sharon:naj what

Swayam:I am Illegitimate. I don't know who my father is?...my mom loved someone and I...

Sharon:you are so lucky

Swayam:lucky?...you are making fun of me...sahi toh hai meri mom ne hi mera mazak bana diya hai toh tum bhi bana sakti ho

Sharon:I am serious. you have any idea tumhari mom tumse kitna pyaar karti hai

Swayam:and you have any idea unki wajah se mere sath kya hua hai .meri school life kitni buri thi .sab mujhse mere father ka naam puchte the but mere pass koi answer nahi hota tha kyunki mom ne mujhe kabhi unka naam nahi bataya.School mera koi friend nahi tha... unke parents nahi chahte the ki koi mujhse baat tak ... sabke liye unki family aur friends bahut important hote hai but mere pass na family thi aur na hi koi friend tha but ek ladki thi new girl in my school she is my friend actually my girl friend I really like her par jab usse mere bare mein pata chala toh usne bhi mujhe chod diya.mere sath hone se uski reputation kharab ho jati. Maine apni mom ki wajah se sab kuch kho diya iss liye maine kabhi college mein kisi ko apne bare mein kuch nahi bataya .

Sharon:phir mujhe kyun bata rhe ho

Swayam:tum toh already mujhe hate karti ho

Sharon:point...but can't believe tum yeh bol rhe ho weaklings ka Saviour .Jo kisi ke sath wrong hota hua nahi dekh sakta aur woh Swayam apni mom ko blame kar rha hai jisme unki koi galati nahi thi

Swayam:you can't understand Sharon bahut bura hota hai akele hona

Tears flowed from his eyes

Swayam:tumhari koi galati nahi hoti par phir bhi sab log tumse dur rhete hai...sab the mere pass hote the but koi mere sath nahi hota tha...loneliness sabse...

Sharon:look at me Swayam

He looks at her and She hugged him

Swayam:what are you doing

Sharon:tumhe dil mein bahut dard ho rha hai and a hug is the best medicine for heart pain

He hugged her back

Sharon:are you feel better now ?

Swayam:hmm

Sharon breaks the hug

Sharon:so now continue...jo bhi tumhare dil mein hai woh sab bol do.you feel better aur I don't know tumhari mom ki life mein kya hua hoga but tumhari mom wrong nahi hai

Swayam:woh galat hai Sharon...agar mujhe pata hota ki mere dad kon hai toh main pass chala jata

Sharon:aur woh tumhe accept karte...unhone tumhari mom ko accept nahi kiya that oh woh tumhe kyun accept karte... tum bahut special ho Swayam tumhari mom ne kuch galat nahi kiya unke sath galat hua hai tumhari mom kitna pyaar karti hogi tumhare dad se isiliye unho ne apni har limit cross kar di and trust me kisi ladki ke liye easy nahi hota apni limit cross karna ...tumhari mom ke pass options the woh tumhe abort kar sakti thi yaa phire kisi orphanage mein chod deti aur apni life phirse start karti but unhone aisa nahi kiya unho ne tumhe choose kiya .jo sab tumhare sath hua woh unke sath bhi hua hoga sab log unse bhi wohi sab puchte honge but unhone kabhi tumse koi complain nahi ki

Swayam:maine kabhi aisa socha hi nahi

Sharon:because you are dumb

Swayam:i am not dumb kabhi kisi ne yeh sab samjhaya hi nahi

Sharon:kyunki tumne kabhi kisike sath yeh share hi nahi kiya that why you are dumbo

Swayam:i am not dumb you are dumb

Rohit:finally Sharon mil gayi but Swayam ke sath kya kar rhi hai yeh chance main miss nahi kar sakta.they are not in their senses...I can do it.

Rohit:hey Sharon Rey tumhe bula rha hai

Sharon:why

Rohit:I don't know woh tumhe bula rha hai...chalo he is waiting for you

Sharon:ok chalo

Swayam: I told you I am not dumb you are dumb

Sharon:kyun

Swayam:you really think Rey iss bulega tumhe bulane ke liye

Sharon:no way...tum jhoot bol rhe ho

Rohit:main jhoot nahi bol rha hun chalo yahan se

Sharon:mujhe nahi jana

He caught her arm and jerkedher up towardshimself

Sharon:leave me

Swayam pulled her behind him

Swayam:bola tha naa tujhe stay away from her

Rohit:you stay away from us

Swayam punch him and he fell into pull

Sharon starst laughing

Swayam:stop laughing and Run...iski gang bhi yahin kahin hogi

Kriyansh

Entrance of the pary

Rey:aaj phir late ho gayasharon gonna kill me.

Kriya:stop you... can't go inside

Rey:why

Kriya:show me your license

Rey: license?

Kriya:without license party mein entry nahi hogi

Rey:party ke liye license nahi invitation chahiye hota hai jo mere pass hai

Kriya:no...show me your license

Rey:yeh humesha mujhe hi kyun milti hai

Kriya:show me your license warna RDX sir se complaint kar dungi

Rey:are you mad...wait a minute you are drunk?

Kriya:i think so ...Mumbai orange juice se bhi drunk ho jate hai

Rey:orange juice?...Vicky and Nil

Kriya: license

Rey:where is your friends?

Kriya:gum ho gaye

Rey:party mein chalo unhe...

Kriya:no mere pass license nahi hai

Rey:do hell with your license...chalo tumhare friends party mein honge

She start crying loudly

Rey:ro kyun rhi ho

Kriya:you are shouting at me

Rey:stop crying kisine dekh liya toh sab galat samjhenge

Kriya:say sorry

Rey:i am sorry madam

Kriya:its ok...Rona humesha work karta hai

Rey:yeah right rona toh tum girls ka weapon hota hai

Kriya:Rey I feel like throwing up

Rey:what

She threw up on him

Rey: yuck...disgusting

Kriya:sorry

He removes his jacket and kriya start pull down her strap of her down

Rey:oye ...tum yeh kya kar rhi ho

Kriya:tumne bhi toh apni jacket...

Rey:kyunki tumne mujh par vomit kiya

Kriya:meri bhi dress dirty ho gayi hai iss liye mujhe bhi...

Rey:no stop...statue... not move...where is your phone

Kriya not responsed

Rey:where is your phone kriya mujhe tumhare friends ko bulana hai

Rey:tell me

Kriya: statue can't talk

Rey:oh god...release...now tell me where is your phone

Kriya:Neha ke pass

Rey:aur Neha kahan hai

Kriya:gum ho gayi

Rey:sharon...who iss handle kar sakti hai

Rey calls sharon

Rey:switch off... sharon ka phone kyun switch off hai

Kriya:kya kar rhe ho

Rey:dance...karna hai tumhe

Kriya:haan...let's dance

Rey:shut up...sit in the car...main tumhe tumhare ghar chod deta hun

Kriya:ghar nahi jana

Rey:kyun

Kriya:I am drunk maa bahut gussa ho jayegi phir mujhe college bhi nahi aane degi aur dance bhi nahi karne degi

Rey:tumhari mom ko tumhara dance karna acha nahi lagta hai

Kriya:nahi

Rey:kyun

Kriya:pata nahi...isiliye main chup chup ke dance karti hun

Rey:ab kya kare...kahan le kar jau tumhe

Kriya:ice cream...mujhe ice cream chahiye

Rey:ice cream...aur kuch chahiye madam aapko

Kriya:haan aur mujhe rehearsal hall bhi chahiye...ab meri team bhi rehearsal hall use karengi

Rey:tumhe pata hai ki tum kitni irritating ho

Kriya:haan

Boy:hi babe any problem

Kriya:mujhe ghar nahi jana

Boy:toh hum kahin aur jaa sakte hai what about my room

Kriya:ok chalo

Rey: excuse me yeh mere sath hai

Boy:lagta toh nahi...woh khud mere sath jana chahti hai

Kriya:yes he is right

Rey:shup up and you chup chap nikalo yahan se warna woh haal karunga...

Boy: chill dude woh khude line de rhi thi toh maine socha...

Rey:galat socha...now leave

Rey(in mind):aise nahi chod sakta iss...apne hi ghar le kar jata hun

Rey:kriya chalo

Kriya:kahan

Rey:ice cream khane

Kriya:ok chalo...I will drive

Rey:what... you can't drive

Kriya:why because I am a girl

Rey:because you are drunk

Kriya: i can manage

Rey:no you can't

Kriya(shout):nahi jana mujhe tumhare sath

Rey:stop shouting ...look this is my car isiliye main drive karunga

Kriya:dazzlers so bad...you are bad ...your sharon is bad and she faint

Rey:kriya get up

He scooped her in his arms. He comfortably put her on the seat and went to sit on driver's seat of the car.

Rey:oh god she is so heavy

swaron

Sharon:thank you...uss Rohit se mujhe save karne ke liye

Swayam:tumne mujhe uske sath compare kyun kiya tha

Sharon:tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya tha

Swayam:tumne meri cycle ko hath kyun lagaya tha

Sharon:tumne sabko jhoot kyun bola ki hum couple hai

Swayam:tumne kriya sath dirty prank kyun kiya

Sharon:uske sath kiya tha naa phir tumne mujhse uska revenge kyun liya

Swayam:because tumne galat kiya

Sharon:tumne bhi galat kiya tha kisi ladki ko uski permission ke bina kiss nahi karte hai you know what ek ladki ke liye uska first kiss kitna special hota hai but tumne mere first kiss ko...

Swayam:woh tumhara first kiss tha

Sharon:haan

Swayam:sorry

Sharon:promise me tum phir kabhi kiss nahi karoge

Swayam:are you mad...meri girlfriend,wife inn sabko kitna bura lagega agar main unhe kiss nahi karunga...definitely kiss karunga

Sharon:girlfriend aur wife ek sath...tum dono ko cheat karoge

Swayam:stupid jo girlfriend hogi wohi toh meri wife hogi aur usse kiss bhi karna padega

Sharon:woh school wali ladki se shaadi karoge

Swayam:no way...usne toh humare break up ke next day hi kisi aur ko apna boyfriend bana liya tha

Sharon:super fast... but stupid main tumhari wife ki baat nahi kar rhi thi main meri baat kar rhi thi ...tum mujhe kabhi kiss nahi karoge

Swayam:tumhari permission ke bina kabhi kiss nahi karunga par ek baat batau

Sharon:haan

Swayam:jab na maine tummhe kiss kiya tha toh i really enjoy it I don't know why but i like it

Sharon:because you are despo

Swayam:i am not despo ok...but I loved it after all woh mera bhi first kiss tha

Sharon:you are so bad

Swayam:sorry but i never do it again I promise

Sharon:ok bye

Swayam:why bye

Sharon:late ho gaya

Swayam:can I drop you...late ho gaya hai aur agar woh Rohit phir se aa gaya toh

Sharon:mujhe cycle par nahi jana

Swayam:walk kar ke chale

Sharon:haan moon light walk

After some time

Sharon:mera ghar aa gaya

Swayam:itna jaldi aa gaya...anyways good night bye

Sharon:Swayam

Swayam:hmm

Sharon:tumhari mom tumse bahut pyaar karti unhe khud se dur mat karo ...look at me my parents they don't love me ...mere parents ko humesha mujhse complains hoti hai...tumhari mom ne tumhare liye sabse fight ki hogi aur mere parents ek dusre se hi fight karte rhete hai tum bahut lucky ho ki koi tumhe itna pyaar karta hai...unhe dur mat jane do

She went close to him and softly kiss on his cheek

Sharon: good night take care

Swayam:sharon wait

He hugged her

Swayam: hug is the best medicine for heart pain...good night

In morning

Rey's house

Kriya came into consciousness. Her head throbbed with pain.

Kriya:yeh main kahan hun

Rey:good morning...feeling better?

Kriya:tum

Rey:yes...i think tumne first drink kiya tha medicine le lo you feel better

Kriya:main yahan kaise

Rey:main le kar aaya tha...tum akeli thi aur main tumhe uss condition mein wahan nahi chod sakta tha aur tum apne ghar bhi nahi jana chati thi...tum uss condition mein apni mom se...

Kriya:woh sab mujhe yaad hai uske baad kya hua...main yahan kaise

Rey:let me complete...tumare kisi friend ka contract nahi tha mere pass isiliye main tumhe yahan...

Kriya:get out

Rey:this is my house kriya

Kriya:what...mujhe yahan nahi rhena

Rey:as you wish

She tried to get up and the blanket covering her body fell off .she realized that she is not in her own clothes.

Kriya:my clothes?what happened to my clothes?

Rey:tumne vomit kar di thi toh...

She slapped him

Kriya:you cheap ,disgusting , pervert...you took advantage of me.

Rey:shut up not a single world...tumhara advantage...wake up miss kriya ghai tum jaisi girls ko toh main dekhta tak nahi hun... I wish kal main tumhe wahin chod deta phir pata chalta ki advantage lene ka kya matlab hota hai.

He left the room

Kriya:mom ko kaise face karungi

Pari:hi...how are you now

Kriya:who are you

Pari:i am pari. Rey's sister. Bhai told me tumne mistake se alcohol pee li thi woh bhi first time.

She starts crying again.

Pari:stop crying it's ok party mein ho jata hai aisa.yeh tumhare kapde... clean kar diye hai.

Kriya:my clothes ...Rey...no

Pari:sorry i didn't get it...you were in very bad condition so I took your clothes off and...

Kriya:tumne mere kapde

Pari:yeah...bhai tumhe drop kar ke wapise party mein apne friends ko dekhne ke liye chale gaye.unke friends bhi ghar nahi punche the isiliye.

Kriya:shit...maine yeh kya kar diya...mom sahi kehti hai hyper ho kar humesha wrong decision leti hun Rey ne meri help ki aur maine...kyun universe ji yeh mere sath hi hota hai

Pari:are you ok

Kriya:haan ...thank you

Swayam's house

Swayam:mom

Swayam's mom:Swayam tum mere room mein...come in beta...kuch chahiye tumhe

Swayam:i am sorry mom

Swayam's mom:sorry for what

Swayam:maine jaise aaj tak aapke sath behave kiya hai...maine humesha apne baare mein hi socha.kabhi nahi socha ki aapke sath bhi galat hua hai ...mujhse jayada galat aapke sath hua hai...mere liye aapne sabse fight ki hogi aur maine kabhi aapse thik se baat tak nahi ki meri wajah se aapki life mein kitni sari problems hui hai

Swayam's mom:no beta tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua hai agar tum nahi hote toh main bhi nahi hoti...you are my life tumhare bina kuch nahi hai meri life mein...jab tumhare dad ne mujhe choda tha toh I wanted to die par jab mujhe pata chala ki tum meri life mein aane wale ho toh sab thik ho gaya...i am sorry meri galati thi aur tumhe sabki baatein sunni padi main tumhe normal life nahi de payi I am really sorry ...I love you

Swayam:I love you mom and I am sorry

He hugged her

Swayam(in mind):thank you sharon.

Sharon's room

Sharon:how could you do this sharon.iss pure world mein wohi mila tha tumhe...tum apni personal life uske sath kaise share kar sakti ho and you...you kiss him...tumhe goli mar deni chahiye sharon.agar usne kisi ko yeh sab bata diya toh... mere reputation ka kya hoga...no he can't do this uska secret bhi mere pass hai toh woh kisi ko kuch nahi batayega so relax sharon bas apne plan par focus kar.uss so called ACS ko uska right place dekhna hai

Swayam:i should thanks her in very special way uski wajah se hi aaj mom aur mere bich sab kuch thik hua hai .kuch special plan karna hoga after all she is the diva ...the dazzler diva.

Kriya:Rey aur mere bich mein kitni sari problems thi phir bhi usne meri help ki aur maine uske sath...bahut gussa hoga woh aur uski big ego bhi hurt hui hogi.sorry toh bolna padega aur kuch different way mein kyunki simple sorry toh kaam nahi karegi...chal kriya apna K effect dikha de

Rey:bloody weakling Reyansh Singhania ko thapd mara usne...bahut khush thi naa tum apni team bana kar... dazzlers ke equal aana tha tumhe now wait and watch miss kriya ab college ka har din tumhari life ka sabse bura din hoga.you will regretted to mess with me.

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Edited by reet_26 - 8 years ago
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Update was superb, Kriya get drunk did , rey help her and mistook everything waiting for next update hope Kriya manofy him and melt his anger . Thanks for pm , please update your other stories too ,it's really long time you update them.. 👏

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