PREJUDICE PARADISE SWARON AND KRIYANSH FF - Page 11

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Please ignore the mistake and sorry for late update specially sorry anu_tanha

Part-6

Rehearsal Hall

Sharon:please last night ke baare mein kisi ko mat batana...main ek weakling ke sath...meri reputation sab...sab khatam ho jayega please kisi ko mat batana

Swayam:ok main kisi ko nahi batunga

Sharon:thank you

Swayam:tumhe last night ke liye regret hai naa

Sharon:haan...ek weakling ke sath hone par regret hi hota hai

Swayam:but last night meri life ki sabse beautiful night thi meri puri life change ho gayi only because of you...thank you

Sharon:kya

Swayam:nothing

Sharon:bye aur please kisi ko mat batana

Swayam:I love you Sharon

Sharon:what the hell?

Swayam:kal raat main ek different Sharon ko dekha innocent , cute, a simple sweet girl and I feel something for you and that's love...you don't feel anything...for me

Sharon:no

Swayam:really Sharon?

Sharon:haan... I...I hate you

Swayam:fair enough ...ab meri wajah se tumhe koi problem nahi hogi...tumhe kabhi mera face tak dekhna nahi padega...bye forever

He turned around and started walking away

Sharon:Swayam please don't go

Swayam:why Sharon

Sharon:because I love...

Swayam:you love what

Sharon:I love you

Swayam:really Sharon

Sharon:no

She wake up

Sharon: what a horror dream?...ab Swayam dreams mein aa kar bhi darane lag gaya hai...main aur Swayam...no way...Swayam se last night ke baare mein toh karni padegi...agar usne kisi bata diya toh main St.Louis ka biggest joke ban jaungi

Swayam's room

Swayam:time se yeh deliver ho jana chahiye

Guys:yes sir

Swayam:thank you

Swayam:directly toh woh iss gift ko aur mere thank you ko accept nahi karne wali...I hope uss pata na chale ki yeh maine diya hai...thank you Sharon for everything .

Boy's locker room

Rey: are you mad tum kaise kar sakte hi aisa

Vicky: kya kiya humne

Rey: stop it vicky mujhe pata kal party mein kya hua

Vicky (in mind): oh shit iss pata chal gaya main uss weakling Neha ke sath tha

Rey: tum dono weakling ke sath aisa prank kiya...do you have any idea Rdx sir ko pata chal jata toh kya hoga

Nil: what prank?

Rey: party mein drinks ke sath...

Nil :kisne toh kuch kiya tha

Rey: what do you mean kisne kiya...I know tum dono ne kiya

Vicky: pagal ho gaya tu... agar hum yeh sab karte toh khud ko aur apni team ko iss prank se safe rakhte

Rey:what...you mean tumne kuch nahi kiya

Vicky:no

Nil: definitely yeh sab weakling ne hi kiya hoga.

Vicky:agree aise plans weaklings hi ker sakte hai

Rey: no guys weakling nahi ho sakte woh log khud drunk the

Nil: toh phir kisne kiya

Neha: you saying wrong Swayam dazzlers doing all this

Swayam: no Neha dazzlers ne kuch nahi kiya

Bharat:tu dazzlers ka sath kyun de rha...kal party mein jo bhi hua woh dazzlers ne hi kiya

Swayam:main dazzlers ka sath nahi de rha hun aur main janta hun yeh kisne kiya hoga

Vishakha: who?

Swayam: Rohit

Amar: yeh dazzlers kam the jo yeh Rohit bhi humare piche pad gaya

Bharat: abbe mein toh uss chodunga nahi

Swayam:Relax bharat...hume Principal sir se uski complaint karni chahiye

Vishakha: seriously dude tujhe lagta hai ki st. Louis mein Rohit ke against koi action lega

Swayam:Lets try...principal usse har baar aise hi nahi chod sakte

Principal's office

Swayam: may I come in sir

Principal: yes

Rey already present in Principal's office

Swayam: sir last night party mein Rohit ne...

RDX: Rey ko bhi yehi lagta hai but Rey ke pass koi proof nahi hai agar aapke pass koi proof ho toh aap bata sakte hai

Swayam:Sir...

RDX:any proof

Swayam:no sir

Rey: but Sir I sure yeh sab Rohit ne hi kiya hai

Swayam: yes sir Rohit ne kiya hai

Principal: but koi proof nahi hai

Swayam: Rohit ne kya kya kiya sab jante hai sir but uss kabhi koi punishment nahi milti hai...actually St. Louis mein sab usse darte hai

RDX: Swayam shekhawat mind you language...aap uske against proof laye...uss uski punishment milegi

Outside RDX's office

Swayam: Rey

Rey: what

Swayam: mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni hai

Rey: Rohit ke baare mein?... look dude yahan usse koi kuch nahi kehne wala hai so leave it

Swayam:Rohit ke intension ke baare mein baat karni hai

Rey: I am not interested right now so...

Swayam:Sharon se related baat hai

Rey: Sharon?

Swayam: Rohit ne ek baar Sharon ke sath misbehave kiya tha and kal bhi woh party mein Sharon ke sath kuch karne wala tha I don't know what but kuch toh galat karne wala tha so be careful...and Sharon slapped him uska revenge lene ke liye woh kuch na kuch toh karega hi

Rey:I am not gonna leave him

Swayam: be careful dude yahan kafi log uske support mein hai

Rey: hmm...thanks buddy

Swayam: buddy?...can't believe... ek dazzler weakling ko buddy bol rha hai

Rey: Firstly I have no problem with you and your tea...team ( in mind) expect that Kriya... and Secondly Rohit ke against no dazzler no weakling

Swayam: agree and thanks

Rey: for what?

Swayam: uss din auditorium mein Kriya ki help karne ke liye

Rey: help? In girls ki help karne ka matlab hai khud ki insult karwana

Swayam: exactly inki help karo aur gali bhi khao

Rey:forget gali thappad milte hai

Swayam: aur girls kitni innocent hoti hai bechari humesha victim ki tarah act karti hai

Rey: aur har chiz ke liye hume blame karti hai

Reyam: Girls

In canteen

Kriya see Rey

Kriya:finally mil gaya come on Kriya you have to do this

Kriya:Rey

Rey(in mind):game begin

Rey: see you guys later

He completely ignore Kriya

Kriya :Rey listen

She follows Rey

Kriya: Rey please listen to me once

Rey: Reyansh

Kriya: kya

Rey :for you only Reyansh... Rey mujhe meri family , friends and my well wisher keh sakte hai aur tum inme se kuch nahi ho so for you only Reyansh

Kriya(in mind): Attitude king

Kriya: ok Rey...Reyansh mujhe tumse...

Rey: mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai

Kriya: I am sorry

Rey: stop following me

Kriya:then listen to me

Rey:no

Kriya :Rey...Reyansh please suno

Weakling team see all this

Neha:Neha dreaming Kriya Rey ke piche

Amar:yeh ho kya rha hai Kriya Rey ke piche aur Swayam detain hai

Vishakha:Swayam detain hai?

Bharat:haan detention mil hai uss

Vishakha:but why?

Amar:pata nahi

Neha:Neha sure yeh bhi dazzlers ne kiya hoga

Vishakha:aur kon karega

Swaron

Swayam:how could you believe her Swayam sab kuch uska plan tha... starting se sab kuch uske plan ke according ho rha tha aur main uss thanks kehne ka plan bana rha tha

Flashback

Sharon calls Swayam

Swayam: hi

Sharon(in mind): itni sweet tone mein mujhse baat kar rha hai

Swayam: hello

Sharon: unfortunately RDX sir ne tumhe iss college ka ACS bana hi diya hai toh kuch kaam bhi kar lo

Swayam:yeah tell me kya karna hai

Sharon:college mein renovation ke liye students se discuss karna hai actually main abhi girl's locker room mein hi hun aur girls chati hai ki locker room mein bhi kuch changes ho so I...

Swayam:so you want ki main wahan aa kar yeh sab check karu aur tum mujhe girls locker room mein aane ke liye punish karwa do

Sharon:bahut desperate ho girls locker room aane ke liye stupid...I just wanted ki tum boys se discuss kar ke unke views jano aur good ideas ko execute kar sakte hai

Swayam: sure... anything else

Sharon:no

Swayam:I want to talk to you about last night

Sharon: I don't wanna talk about it

Swayam: thank...

Sharon: what are you doing here?...get out right now

Swayam: Sharon.

Sharon: I said get out

Swayam: everything is ok Sharon

Sharon:aa how dare you touch me

Swayam:kon hai Sharon wahan

Sharon: leave me

Swayam:Sharon...

Phone turn off

Swayam: shit.. Rohit...I am gonna kill him

Swayam enter girls locker room

Swayam: Sharon...Sharon

Sharon: hi

Swayam: you ok tum chilla...

Sharon (smile): welcome to hell Mr. Saviour

Swayam: what

Dazzlers girls comes front him

Girls: oh god boy in girls locker room

Swayam :oh shit run Swayam

Simmi: look mam Swayam in girls locker

Mam: what are you doing here...don't you know boys are not allowed here

Swayam: I know mam

He looked at Sharon and she winkle at him

Mam: come to principal sir office

Principal's office

Rdx: tumse yeh expect nahi tha Swayam

Swayam: I am sorry sir

Principal:what do you mean by sorry. St. Louis ka ACS girl's locker room mein

Swayam:i am sorry sir misunderstanding...

Principal:what misunderstanding ? I don't know Sharon ne tumhe ACS ke liye kyun suggest kiya

Swayam:what Sharon ne mujhe ACS ke liye suggest kiya tha

RDX: yes she wanted ki weakling ko bhi dazzlers ke equal opportunities milni chahiye and you are perfect for ACS .but you disappointed her.

Flashback end

Swayam:Mujhe tabhi samjh jana chahiye tha jab Mere ACS banne baat sunne ke baad bhi usne koi scene create nahi kiya...this time I am not gonna leave you Sharon

Kriyansh

Kriya pulled Rey into fire exit

Rey: what nonsense is this?

Kriya:Problem kya hai tumhari kabse tumse baat karne ki try kar rhi hun aur tum mujhe attitude de rhe ho... oops I am sorry attitude toh birth right hai naa dazzlers ka.

Rey:ho gaya...can I go now

Kriya(in mind):stupid ,idiot Kriya mujhe sorry kehna hai iss aur main phir se fight kar rhi hun isse

Rey:phirse apne dreamland mein chali gayi

Kriya:sorry

Rey:not interested

Kriya:ok...its final ki tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni hai

Rey:yes

Kriya:ok then sorry in advance

Rey:for what?

Kriya:for this

Kriya took out knife from her bag and put knife on his throat

Rey:what

Kriya: not move Reyansh now listen to me carefully...last night ke liye sorry...tumne meri help ki aur maine tumhe...tumhe...

Rey:thappd mara

Kriya:sorry...sab kuch suddenly ho gaya and without thinking maine react kar diya I am really sorry

Rey:very weird

Kriya:kya

Rey: bahut wired way sorry kehne ka ...mujhe threatened karke sorry bol rhi ho ...

Kriya:iske liye bhi sorry ...tum meri baat hi nahi sun rhe the isiliye mujhe...please forgive me for everything

Rey:let me think...you know aajtak kisi ne mujhe se high tone mein baat bhi nahi ki hai aur tumne mujhe TAPPAD MARA toh easily toh tumhe forgive nahi kar sakta...punishment toh banti hai

Kriya:yeah give me any punishment...I can do anything

Rey(naughty smile): really?

Kriya:yes...no ...not in that way

Rey:don't worry tum mere type ki ho bhi nahi

Kriya:thank god

Rey:tumhe 1 week ke liye...no...1 week itna tolerate nahi kar sakta main tumhe ...2 days ke liye tumhe meri personal servant banna padega

Kriya:what

Rey:mujhe mere ghar se pick karna hoga than after college mere ghar drop bhi karna padega mere sare assignment complete karne honge and mere liye breakfast, lunch, dinner sab kuh arrange karna padega in short mere har order ko follow karna hoga

Kriya:never

Rey:cool with me...so now don't follow me aur tumhari help karne ke liye tumne mujhe jo TAPPAD MARA tha uss bhool jana and sorry wala drama bhi mat karna

Kriya:you are so mean... misunderstanding ki wajah se yeh sab hua tha aur tum iss tarah se revenge loge mujhe

Rey:yes

Kriya:I am not interested in your forgiveness

Rey:fine then leave

Kriya:main kyu tum jao yeh college ki property hai

Rey:ok but ab TAppd mat mara

Kriya:tum intensionally mujhe tappd ki yaad dila rhe ho na

Rey:haan

Kriya:I..

Rey:you

Kriya:I am leaving

Rey:ok

Kriya:you are heartless person in entire world

Rey:thank you

Kriya:hate you

She left

In rehearsal hall

Swayam:how dare you

Sharon:this is my dialogue copycat...tumhari detention puri ho gayi

Swayam:kyun kiya yeh sab

Sharon:because I hate you and thanks for the idea...maine toh kuch aur plan kiya tha but tumne hi mujhe detention wala idea de diya remember

Swayam thinking about their conversation

Swayam:so you want ki main wahan aa kar yeh sab check karu aur tum mujhe girls locker room mein aane ke liye punish karwa do

Sharon: forcefully kiss kiya naa mujhe toh ab kaisa lag rha hai tumhe

Swayam:I can't explain you ki mujhe kaisa lag rha hai but main tumhe yeh definetly bata sakta hun ki jab maine tumhe kiss kiya tha toh tumhe kaisa laga tha...you wanna know

Sharon:don't you dare

Swayam:ACS ke liye mujhe kyu chose kiya

Sharon:because I hate you...bahut khush the naa tum ki college ke ACS ban gaye ho actually tum mere assistant bane ho In other words I am your boss.

Swayam:ok boss agar tumhe tumhare iss discussion ke liye regret nahin karwaya na toh...

Sharon:toh?...apna naam change karoge

Swayam:nahi tumhara naam Sharon se siren kar dunga

Sharon:you...

Swayam:game begin SIREN

He going to left

Sharon:and listen don't you dare to tell anybody about last night...agar tumne kisiko bataya na ki tum mere sath the toh...

Swayam:are you mad...tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe apni insult karwane mein maza aata hai...

Sharon:matlab

Swayam:tumhare sath hone se badi insult meri aur kuch ho hi nahi sakti hai...ek baar tumhe apni girlfriend i mean fake girl friend banana wali galti kar chukka hun aur galati repeat karna I don't like it.

Sharon:what...mere sath hona tumhari insult hai

Swayam:yes sabse badi insult...so please tum yeh baat kisi ko mat batana

Sharon:get lost I just hate you

He left

Sharon:mere sath hona tumhari insult hai naa Swayam now wait and watch main tumhe batati hun ki insult kya hoti

After some time

Phone conversations

Guy:sir delivery ho gayi hai

Swayam:delivery?

Guy:sir aapne Sharon Raiprakash ke liye

Swayam:oh yes thank you

Phone conversation end

Swayam:great woh mujhe detain karwa rhi hai aur main uss thank you keh rha hun...but kal se back to normal... Swayam vs Sharon

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Edited by reet_26 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update, loved how Kriya tried to ask forgiveness from Rey😃 but he is just so rude😕. How mean of Sharon😡 bechara Swayam usko thanks bolna chahta tha aur usne usse detain karwa diya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update swayum got detention , Kriya slap Rey , Rey wants Kriya to be his personal servant ,waiting for next update to see more tashan please update your other stories too looking forward to read more 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg, my poor swayam got detention. sharon is very rude, but not to worry she will fall in love with him. what an unique way to ask sorry lol, i will also try this when somebody wont ready to forgive me hahaha, but still rey was way too rude with her. awesome update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
"bhai maza aagya "
purane din yaad aagaye ..

Keep up the good work girl ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good to see u back again.
Awesome update.
Both the couples are in full tashan mood.
Bechara swayam 😆 this remind me the episode wen swayam went to girls changing room to meet Sharon😳
Why me getting a feeling that swayam sending gift to Sharon will arise sme confusion n secret admirer thing 😛
Loved the growing friendship between Reyam. I always liked their bonding in the show also. And in ur FF we got the glimse of that.
Waiting for next part.
Please do update quickly
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi.. very nice update after so long return on IF.. just to read all swaron / tanha ff😊 once a swaron fan is always a swaron fan. & Thanks to all writers like you who are keeping them live🤗 good work girl 👍🏼 keep it up.. interesting story... ❤️ loved it keep sending pms.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Update jaldi jaldi... can't wait.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am loving this love hate relation..
Too good...

Waiting for swayam vs sharon..
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
Weekend pe ek update to banta hai Please Reet 😭

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