SwaRon SS~ Love Unspoken on hold.. Note on pg 14

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Ananya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

dis is so beautiful... plz continue na... want to see how dey manage to tell each-other abt der feelings...

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Oh my god..
Thos is fantastic dear..
They love..they care..
They want to be together..

But poor things.
Don't know the feelings of each others..

Really great
Thanks 4 d pm

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Chitra.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

That was so beautiful Shreya <3

The opening scene instantly brought back the memories of SwaRon's version of Remeo-Juliet Act.

Till the end I actually thought its just a one sided love and how beautifully Sharon was into him but it was so so lovely to see Swayam feeling that same emotions too. This piece was so soft and you kept the setting as well as conversations so subtle that it just enhanced the beauty of this shot.

You have grown as a writer and its so visible in this piece. It leaves a beautiful emotion lingering inside you even when its end.

Lovely Work Shreya! One of the best I have read from you :)

Chitra :)

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu
beautiful as always shreya 👏
selection of words is the best thing about your writing
each emotion was portrayed beautifully be it love or pain
I loved it girl ❤️
fantastic work 👏

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it.Thanks for reading my work always:)

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Shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_
That was an amazing piece of writing.
I was wishing It could have another part.

Thank you! Its really nice to know that you want me to continue this but I think I will have to turn it into an SS as just another part would make it appear incomplete... so if I can make out enough time to change this into an SS amidst my tight exam schedule, I'll surely try and continue..:)

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Shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Aayu27
That was very heart-touching! Loved it , how you described their feelings and their fears , their hiding games , beautifully written!

Absolutely loved and adored the last line , HOPE❤️

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.
Your words simply inching with sincerity and romance, absolutely beautiful. Such simplicity in emotion and such complexity in writing, seriously a beautiful combination.

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I always wait for a review from you and surely your words encourage me a lot! So happy you liked it!

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Shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dvrushu
This OS is heart breakingly Beautiful..
Actually don't know How to describe How much I loved it...
Awsmm...kudos girl
Well written
And do write more on swaron.

Hey! Thankyou so much Glad you loved it! Yup surely I'll be writing more on SwaRon!

Edited by Spark.Shreya - 9 years ago