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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Mysteries...Inhibitions...Wanting something with all the Heart n still not being able to hold it close...I felt all this emotions while reading n I love it...

I love the fact that this is a fresh concept n u both are writing it real good...

Waiting to read more n More...👍🏼

Sharon in Prison n Swayam in Prison he himself made n then there is their daughter woh perhaps lives with Rey,Again the Strong support System as Always :)

Love it...Update soon :)

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raksh11

@raksh11

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Hey luvd it dude so mny equations, emotions... So interesting just wanna read it further plz update soon

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ShiriHoonMain

@ExoticDisaster

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+ 24

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome one..

Both miss each other, actually, the trio..

Little Niya!!!

I want to know eagerly about her dad hating her so much!!

I m dead sure Seayam ko misunderstanding hui hogi...

Waiting for next..

Love,

Shirisha

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

First chap..superb...love niya...what happened in their life...update fast

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Sharon in prison!..they are away for soo long!..I am feeling so bad for her 😭 What has happened that changed their lives to this extent.. Poor Nia..what's stopping Swayam from being a loving father?!.. So many questions!.. And really difficult ones!..please update soon ..can't see them in such miserable state..!..How do you guys come with such different concepts?..Very gripping update!..Thanks for the pm..:)

Love,

Shreya

Edited by Spark.Shreya - 9 years ago

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

This is really interesting. The concept, the story-line. Well penned.

Thanks for the pm

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Linda

@existentialism

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Alrighty, I don't know what to say coz the half of it was in hindi and I didn't understand a thing!!!. I will get my Indian friend to read and translate this for me & will let you guys know my opinion. I guess it was a nice update because the prologue was really intriguing and different.

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: existentialism
Alrighty, I don't know what to say coz the half of it was in hindi and I didn't understand a thing!!!. I will get my Indian friend to read and translate this for me & will let you guys know my opinion. I guess it was a nice update because the prologue was really intriguing and different.

I'm really very sorry Linda... from next time i will make sure that there is English translation.

I can translate this for you, in fact I will send you its translation tomorrow.