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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#331

A light, relieving update after so many twists, turns and questions. A big, huge grin on my face after reading this update (I can't even use an emo to show my grin coz its that BIG!). But lemme tell you, the questions are still hanging mid - air, unanswered. Nevertheless, am glad you gave this update. It was really sweet. Aww, Sharon was nothing less than an excited kid at the end. Again, a lovely banner. Just like other banners, could relate it very well to the update. Except for a few typing errors, a nice update. I can't wait to read further.

Thanks for the pm

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Nice update..feeling happy 😃
Finally they r getting close to each other..
Excited for ur surprises.. 😊
Beautiful banner.. 👏

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#333

Happy to see them getting close again.

Love you Sharon..
Great going

You know I can't sleep alone..
This line is sooo emotional

Thanks

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Heya chitra
That's such a good one u shouldn't be bothered its nowhere close to boring its way too good
Now thankfully sharon is giving second thought on swayum and is rethinking everything
Swayum was scared of being scolded by sharon on the company matter but she was lost in a different world.
The last half on choc. Ice cream was damn cute
Love ur writing its crisp and clear not less not too much everything every emotion us jus written perfectly by you a great writer indeed
Keep up the work and update soon

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#335

finally a swaronish chap
loved it so much
she is giving him a chance nice
awww sharon ki carving suru hogyi
ab to swayam gya

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prajana

@prajana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Hey..the update was soo cute!!

Especially the latter part

Sharon's ice cream craving..swayam is in a big trouble!

What i liked the most about this part is its subtleness..with just right amount of emotions

Waiting for the next part and the surprises ofcourse

Update soon😊

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

This update was super cute!!...I loved it!..The emotions were perfectly balanced!..Even if Sharon is trusting him again with her heart ,things will get better slowly taking its own time as she still has unanswered questions..and you showed that perfectly...they're closer..closer than before !..but they'll take time to get better and I'm waiting for that!..Eagerly waiting for your surprises!..I want Swayam to experience the happiness of being a father!..I feel so bad for him!..Hopefully he will soon!

Waiting impatiently for next!!

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#338

Feel like haven't commented in a while.

This update was very refreshing. The way there was balance, the way she changed, it was really endearing to read. The cravings. Ahh! Finally something that is speaking about her condition as mother.

What I loved the most in the chapter, got to be Swayam's unsure about her acts. When she held his hand. That moment, reading, made me feel so nice. I loved that moment <3

Awesome chapter di <3

Closer than before this line, it gives you the feels.

Thanks for the PM. :)

Love Ana ❤️

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gsk4

@gsk4

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#339

A very cute update indeed. Love the way Sharon is trying to breach the distance. I love the way you keep changing the banner. Awww. TheChoclate Icecream. Saif and Preity Zinta. It reminded me of the song which in d3 Swayan and Sharon danced in Dhol Gaav. "whats going on". ha ha ha😃😃.nice. The only thing that i didnt like that period in d3 where sharon was shown so desperate.

I Love ur writing, its very crisp and clear. you are a great writer indeed.👏

Keep up the work and update soon.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#340

Namaste.

This is ridiculous. 🐷 I demand you reveal the truth in your next update. Come on Chitra, warm update like this makes me wanna know the whole truth. So yeah, be a good girl, will ya? 🤡

I always enjoy reading pregnant Sharon. Reason being the poor helpless state of Swayam, and this one was no exception. 😆

Eager to continue reading and staring at the beautiful banners,

Cheers,

Your lou.

Edited by Rhapsody. - 9 years ago