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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Really nice
Swayam is trying hard..
Nice..

Thanks

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Reserved. I take pride :3

-Edited.

Hi.

So, the mystery remains; good. This chapter was quite warm given the tension between Swayam and Sharon. It's gladdening to see that though their have problems, none of both can actually stop loving the other. Sharon, especially. Somewhere it's clear that she trusts Swayam deep down, and believes he can't cheat her.

Now, Swayam is undeniably in a mess. What I am eager to see is how he is gonna come out of this.

Great writing Chitra!

Cheers.

Rhapsody.

P.S. Everybody dies too.

You are warned. 🤡

Edited by Rhapsody. - 10 years ago

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Superb update.. 👏
Everypart..well written 👍🏼
And banner is awesome.. 😊

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ROSE

@rose1998

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Nice chapter Chitra. Reveal the mystery soon.

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Trupti Tamore

@VruShan_FanGirl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

loved it ❤️
sorry can't comment more then this an not well

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Okay so u need to like need to update cause you have left us at another cliff hanger! Love this story !

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prajana

@prajana

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Hey the chapter was amazing..as alwayss!!😊

But you have really confused me now

I mean swayam cant tell her the truth as it will give big stress to her and not telling the truth is already giving her stress!!..🤔

Update soon as i last in peace only till one day of reading your update and then i start to miss the story badly!!

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gofi

@gofi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Loved it!!

A comparitively lighter update

The suspense is killing

Hope you start revealing things soon

And update soon😊

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bhaumi_vrushan

@bhaumi_vrushan

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Nice part loved it...Now next part update soon love u

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Hello...I'm new here...A crazy swaron/vrushan fan too!...Wonderfully potrayed emotions..The suspense is killing now though...Please start revealing soon..its painful to see our swaron in so much pain!..I have read all the chapters and loved all of them..Update soon ...you are a budding writer..eagerly waiting to see how the truth unfolds!