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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This one's is great too
simple but cute plot
rey's part was fun
i would love to read it further but i know if u will update this further then it will lose its essence
so i loved it
especially i loved the ending
i hope to read more of ur works

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This felt Beautiful. Truly.

I read it today and since the start you created an aura with the two brothers lying under the sun which really felt beautiful to me.

This wasn't romantic. . .But whatever pinch of romance you sprinkled in SwaRon's convo was just soothing to read.

Reyaansh and Mummy Shekhawat were just so subtly used :D

All in all this was one pleasureable read Nish. I would love to read such stories from you anyday :D

Chitra :)

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Another awesome piece of work!
Loved it <3
Beautifully written :)
ReYam being punished by their mom 😆
SwaRon convo was lovely :)
There was no romance but still it was really a treat to read :)