SwaRon OS: Walking away

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Emotional kar diya yr.
Bitter memories.

Nice os

Thanks 4 d pm

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

You & Nishi both are so Evil -__-

Reserved 'cause I have my exam in the morning & I don't wanna sulk & become all dramatically sad & emotional.

-Edited-

Beautifully penned. Such use of words re. SwaRon, the agony in their heart & souls.Those Swaron days were so full of intensity, misunderstandings, fights & tears.

I absolutely loved the way you described Sharon's POV. She has always been the most complex character in D3. But you related pretty well with her.

Swayam breaking up with her and even telling her that he would move on in life with someone who is not her. :(

Gosh, you guys depict pain so well :3 And being a sadist, I love these one shots completely :')

Thankyou for bringing back memories. They are still fresh.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

Edited by -.wanderlust.- - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

omg this was so emotional
again a sad os
guys wht happened these days to u all??:(
rula rahain ho:(
btw awesome os
i just hate this scene it was to heartbreaking n before this one
i still cry whenever i watched shan aka swayam
so plz kind request to all of u aur mat rulao yar ...

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

superbly penned... i ws reliving dos moments... palki maam's swaron... dey were loveee...

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Idiot.-_-

Reserved.

-Unreserved, finally-

Hullo. ☺️

My friend, my dearest friend, I can't believe you would blame me for this. Me, who did nothing but write one shots. Very well, since you did blame me, I intend to take full credit for this cringe worthy yet lovely one shot.

The break up scene was one which I watched with nearly shut eyes, coz I couldn't bear to watch all that heartbreak, all that misunderstanding. But, it was necessary, don't you think?

I would rather not say much about writing, because you along with me and a couple of other people are aware of your prowess. But I will, because it feels good to be praised. 😆 Great writing, love.

I am waiting for whatever you want to throw at me, which reminds me of the dearth of your works in the recent times. Waiting for a work of yours.

Cheers

Nv.

Edited by Rhapsody. - 10 years ago

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Nice one..

Beautiful😊

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Dis scene ws itself so emotional nd intense...
Nd ur os on d same bring tears in my eyes...
It ws so emotional bt beautifully written...
M bcmng ur fan now...:D
keep writng more
Thnx fr pm

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

just love every single work of yours :)

your seriously the best writer I have seen on IF :)

loved this one too :)

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Omg.. U wrote it so beautifully.. Evn though it ws sad bt I luvd it cz it ws exactly d Same as that scene in d epi.. Truly relived dat scene with this os.. Amazing job Done.. [Y]

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Your OS brought back so many memories. The harsh ones.

I don't think I can ever forget this scene. Swayam was more than broken here. He had actually felt for the very first time that "they were not meant to be"

I felt for him reading this all over again. I still remember how I cried with him. But didn't quite liked the fact that Sharon denied it after all the love she showed for him.

But the way you justified them and portrayed their emotions was just superb!! 👏👏

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