Yayy!..finally an update and that too a bonus!(2 updates,I guess thats quite a compensation!)
I really have to tell you that this ff is one of my favorites here,and I'm so glad I joined forums so that I can comment on this.
I have loved this story right from the beginning and surely it has come a long way. The lovestory of Sharon and Swayam here is something I love the most,its actually close to my heart.
The characterization itself had its own uniqueness and your writing is so overpowering that one can easily feel the connect with both Swayam and Sharon.There is a realistic feel to every incident you wrote and the way each of that incident brought them a little closer than before.
Swayam's confession is something I can't get over with.It was probably the simplest confession but it surely held the strongest feelings ,so much that one cannot help but feel overwhelmed with his honesty and so purely expressed love.
If Swayam had that effect on me,Sharon was no less. The way she reciprocated his feelings ,one could tell that she wanted to express her own joy of having him in her life more ,rather than just letting him know that she returned the same feeling.
Simmi is such a darling.She played the role of cupid in Swayam and Sharon's love story for me.She is a friend every person would want and both Swayam and Sharon are really fortunate to have her in their lives.
Coming to this update, I adore Sharon even more now.Their relationship seems so ideal for the understanding they have between them. The essence of Sharon's character was preserved beautifully and its amazing how they both are concerned of taking care of each other's personal space while being so madly in love.Yeah Sharon is surely a non-dramatic girlfriend but then we shall see that when its actually time for Swayam to leave 😆 .
The last part!..Actions are louder than words, you don't have to tell that you love each other if you can make your partner feel the same.And Swaron just prove it every now and then.
Now that Swayam is about to leave I'm afraid there are some storms coming in again,but then I think I should look forward to the four months they still have to spend together !
Update super soon!..Loving this to the core!
Love,
Shreya
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