SwaRon FF: Healing of the hurt souls. Part twenty one. PG 68. Updated.

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Loved this update...sharon supporting swayam beautifully written...nd the kiss soo consoling...waiting for the nxt chapter ..

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VReSh

@VReSH

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

n i m speechless again...u surprise me more n more with every update...

I cant believe its u Adi, Such a Brilliant Writer u have grown to be... Amazing Work... So Beautiful Flow of Emotions... So Beautiful it is...

Love it, i jus Love it all👏

P.S check my reply on pg 25 :)

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Res
Unres
wow
Swayam's pain hurt anger was shown perfectly

Sharon's care is what I loved the most..
Loved it
Update soon

Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 10 years ago

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

awsm update dear... loving dis ff... keep writing... ❤️

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Shradha

@ShradhaP13

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Wow...

each and every emotion is beautifully written...

the way Sharon was consoling awesome...

hats off to u...👏

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Im speechless...

Really really loved it...

it was so amazing...

very well penned down..

And i loved the whole thing u wrote... its abt swayam or abt sharon..

both of them were star in this...

totally loved...

btw i have guessed it was asthma only 😛

and i love sharon little more 😉

Update super ...waiting

Keechu

Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Awesome update!!

The emotions are written so beautifully...U are an amazing writer..great work 👏

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Beautifully written...
luvd it...
thr emotions were xprsd so nicely...
swayam's pain nd Sharon's care nd concern fr him ws shown amazingly...
nd d kiss it seems so pure...
I luv dis update alot...
update asap
thnx fr pm

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Swayam has asthma...yaaayyy, I guessed it right.

This was a mesmerizing update. Full on emotions. Sharon consoling him, making him understand and letting her feelings out. It felt too nice. You penned it down beautifully👏.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon

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asthamehrotra

@asthamehrotra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Poor swayam 😭 really felt bad for him 😕 Sharon consoling swayam was good to read 😃 nd the last kiss was 😲 it was very unexpected, more like a treat for me 😉 waiting for next chapter, update soon 😊