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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my first try so ignore if any mistakes. It is basically a song Os so don't read if not interested.


SwaRon OS O Sajna


This starts after the announcement room fiasco when Sharon refused her love for Swayam in front of all.She then went to his house and he broke up with her.


Swayam is sitting on his terrace and Sharon roaming on streets.


Song:O Sajna
Movie:Table No. 21
Singers: Gajendra Verma and Puja Thakur

(Red is girl's lyrics and blue is boy's)

Love in you is losin my soul
I was in the lost battle
death at my door
A dog in the backyard
Feels for my pain
Beau in broken bottle
Beatin rain


{Swayam thinks of how Sharon refused his love in front of everyone. he thinks of how he was being tagged as a desperate and a stalker again. He looks out staring into nowhere thinking of how his whole life changed in a day!}


O sajna aaja ve
Dil di sunava gallan
Muh te uda ke pallan
Sir choom laan
O meri gal sun ja ve
Dil mera hoya jhalla
Ek bus tu hi ikalla
Tere te manave..


{Sharon is moving lifelessly on the road. It is raining heavily and she is just crying along hoping all her pain will go away!}


[They both are remembering of those few minutes that changed everything,every emotion they shared,every relation they had and are crying trying to lose away all their pain]


Yoon hi aansu aansu bikhar ke
Humein chain milega mar ke
Pachhtate hain hum tujh se dhokha karke
Zaaya hum pe yoon teri wafa na kar
Jaane jaan hum ko tu daga de


{She thinks of how she refused him absent-mindedly and how he asked her for break-up.. It was as if the whole world was converging around her trying to kill her and only his arms could save her now but he did not come and he should not even come after what she did}


Tera mera rishta tha bhool
Tu ne ik pal mein mita daala jaise ho dhool
Ab bas main hoon yaadein or gham hai
Ab is gham ko saari umar sahenge hum..


{ He thinks of how their relation was all a mistake and she had erased it in a minute without thinking of his feelings. He can't bear with this pain,this loss but he knows he has to live with it. He has no other choice left except for taking this pain to his coffin}


Mann dard se tere bhara hai
Tere naam ka zakhm hara hai
Sab khatm hua par baaki kuch zara hai
Dheere dheere kat rahi hoon jaane jaan
Aansoo thode tu bhi baha de..


{She thinks of how she desperately wanted him back by being his secret admirer. She then thinks of the break-up and simultaneously of the happy times together. She breaks down on her knees and cries in the hope that he will hear her cries and rescue her from this state of despair}


Toota dil to sub kuchh jal gaya
Mausam vo achanak khushiyon bhara badal gaya
Khwaab the jitne aankho se beh gaye
Bas karne ko yaad purane kisse reh gaye.


{He thinks of how she broke his heart again ,how they were so happy! What all dreams and wishes he had. His all dreams stood crushed and were wiped out along with the tears and now he could only remember the old and happy times which felt a lie to him now.}


O sajna aaja ve O meri gal sun ja ve..


{She calls foer him shouting in the hope he would just listen to her once but she did not even know what she would say that would make him come back, that would heal his broken heart!}


Love in you is losin my soul
I was in the lost battle
death at my door
A dog in the backyard
Feels for my pain
Beau in broken bottle
Beatin rain.


[Both cry their heart out trying to find a remedy for this pain. The only remedy they had now was their tears and loneliness. Whereas deep down they both knew only they both could heal each other but maybe this was not the correct time for that. Maybe Time would Heal all wounds]


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Thank u please leave ur comments if u liked it..
I am a die-hard SWARON fan by the way.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res/unres
nice os..
loved it
the emotions were well portrayed..
do write more..
thanks for the pm..

aur
i am the first one to comment...:)⭐️

Edited by nidhi.nidsnicks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidhi.nidsnicks

res/unres

nice os..
loved it
the emotions were well portrayed..
do write more..
thanks for the pm..

aur
i am the first one to comment...:)⭐️

Thanks...
Will do!!

P.s. Maybe the only one to comment😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress
will unress soon :)

Unress

Awesome os 👏
Beautifully written
loved it!!
Do write more 😊

Love
Anshi
Edited by Frozen_Flames - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No star you are wrong yaha aur bhi hai comment karne vale coming to os its nice and i always love that story where a d3 part be ho do write more good luck for next story
Edited by 3sisters - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3sisters

No star you are wrong yaha aur bhi hai comment karne vale coming to os its nice and i always love that story where a d3 part be ho do write more good luck for next story

Thank u😆 will write more soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrushanlove

Beautiful work...do write more...

Thanks will write more 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one the pain ws evident
do write more

good writers are always appreciated
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A really nice attempt. Fairly well written piece. You brought out the emotions wonderfully.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Os. Emotions were well written.

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