SwaRon OneShot: Needles and Medicines

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id2useit

@id2useit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

this was beautifully penned down👏

i had tears while reading...😭

do write more.

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

i dnt knw what to say... u made me cry... its so painfully beautiful story... & literally i m crying... so beautiful dear... u r an blessed writer... keep writing more... love you...

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

How beautiful you are at writing so many emotions of life so deeply and heart wrenchingly!

Man, this was an extremely perfect example of amazing writing, pouring emotions through the use of words.

Well, I being a Sadist, loved the one shot to the core. It was so full of pain & agony.

Sharon being a strong girl was facing every pierce those needles bought to her with a smile on her face, just for Swayam. She knew she had to be brave & face the truth the way that is. Not giving fake words & promises to Swayam, rather asking him to be strong at heart to accept that yes she is gonna leave the world soon.

Swayam, his emotion, his heart, his life was tearing apart. His world had trembled upside down. Those emotions of being away from the love of his love- you have penned it so beautifully.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nishi! You amaze me everytime with your superb writing skills! Dude this was wow, the emotions, the expressions and everything was classic. It did hurt in the end but ofcourse here you succeeded after all 😉
Keep writing! 👍🏼

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Noura

@lilinfinities

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I'm sorry Nishi for my late review. I think you're angry with me I'm coming here after a long time. Now I'm back. I have read this finally and I loved the title very much it's nice.

About the story, You wrote everything so beautifully man! I don't know what to say but this is amazing! You're so good at writing. While I was reading when it said Sharon had 3 bone cancer I was sad and more than that when she died :'( the ending really hurts. The flashback was amazing though.

Keep writing more

Next time I'll try to comment first.

Love,

Nou

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Well I just came around here after writing a comment on your latest work. And seriously. All I can do is quote myself from that comment. You are a brilliant writer, and create such a bond with the characters that when the story ends, you leave people speechless.

And I am pretty darn serious when I say that really few people posses this skill and knowledge.

This story touched my heart, and the pain, the love, everything and anything was beautifully written. You could empathize with not only Sharon but Swayam as well.

Brilliant.

This is all I can say.

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

another breilliant work

loved the os

keep writing more os's

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

This was too heart wrenching Nishi 😭 I felt my heart in my mouth. My heart beat so fast. Oh My God! This was one brilliant thing. More than anything I felt Swayam and Sharon in it. I could visualize every scene. That is the reason the pain was so intense.

My fav dialogue was Sharon's bluntness when she asked him to live. Pure emotions.

Well done, girl 👏👏