TaaRey SS - Mr. Anjaan *Chapter 10 updated* (on hold) - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

nice update..
rey is jealous of taani without meeting her..
cant blame him also..
but hope he change his mind after meeting her


Thanks 😃
And he will have to change his mind after meeting her 😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

superb funny updte soclly ShaReYam part. poor Rey. superb start. thnkww for pm.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Trisha49

Thanks for the pm

Sorry for extremely late reply
Concept is interesting, loved the characters
Loved Taani and her dad
Taayam and Taaron are tooo cute
Loved Shareyam also
Rey bechara, let's see kitni der keliye Taani remains the 'unknown girl '
In his life
Pretty excited to read further

Do update soon and pm me


No problem 😊
And thanks alot 😃😃
And I dont think she will remain the unknown girl for much time 😆😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept, character sketch n part 1. liked it
taani is career oriented girl n rey is opposite.
swaron are taanis best friend. rey is jealous that they are so worked up bcoz she is coming.
i think there is connecton between swayam n taani.
taanis dad does not want her to know it.
swayam is adopted n he knows it also.
waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
cool update , loved swaron n rey , taani is coming wow m waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Liked taani n her dad's bond...
Shareyam scene was nice...
Rey is jealous from taani...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 2

In delhi.

Taani's POV

"Taani, have you packed everything you need?" dad asked her for an 1000th time!

"Yes dad!" I said, irritated.

God, the way my dad is tensed, I am annoyed! I know he is just worried or should I say, SO OVER PROTECTIVE, but too much over protective-ness is not good! I know I am being mean, but come on, who asks that have you taken your eye-pencil or not?! I mean I didn't even know that my dad has knowledge of make up also, until now!

"Okay, lets leave for the airport, or else you'll miss your flight."

"Okay dad, lets go"

**

"So who is coming to pick you up from the airport?"

"Sharon and swayam"

Now I really think that my dad has got some short term memory loss problem, you know like ghajini or something, because yesterday also I told him the same thing, infact from yesterday I am repeating my dialogues again and again, now I have all the answers of the questions he is asking ready.

"okay, and you are staying at..."

"God dad! I am staying at sharon's place, I wont loose my ticket, and my seat number is 32A. I wont sleep at the airport nor will I sleep my flight. I ll be fine, and I ll find Sharon and Swayam on the airport, and lastly I ll call you as soon as I reach Mumbai. Okay?" I said all the things which I was saying since yesterday.

"Okay, okay, I wont ask anymore questions okay? Chill"

"Thank you Dad." I heaved a sigh of relieve.

Soon, we found a suitable place for parking and un-loaded the luggage and headed towards the entrance of the airport.

"Okay beta, bye, board the flight properly and ..."

"Okay okay dad, I will take care, byee" I interrupted him before he could continue.

"Byee"

He waved and I waved back and entered the airport.

I completed the formalities and waited for the call of my flight to come.

I am kind of very excited and nervous, like new college, new friends, new campus! Oh my god, this is so exciting! And plus, I am very excited to meet Sharon and swayam, I haven't met them since ages! And maybe their other "bestie", Reyash or something, anyway who cares. I am excited and soon I will be in Mumbai! I am feeling like a kid opening a gift or something, I love this.

I never pointed out but this is the first time I am going to Bombay, after my mom's death. I miss her a lot. That was the main reason we shifted to Delhi, so we could forget the last days of mom, and start fresh in Delhi. But now going back to Bombay is like going back to square one. Till now in delhi, I had digested the fact that she wont come again, and all I had was beautiful memories with her, but now, now I all the hurtful, all the last days are coming into my mind.

"I miss you mom."

Its not like my dad never tried to fill this emptiness in our family. He always tried to be my friend, my guide, my mom and my dad. He was everything... My everything. He has done so much for me. Everything he could do, and I am very thankful for that. But somewhere, there was always a voice deep inside telling, You don't have a mother, which I used to always ignore, until now. Going back to Bombay is very difficult. I never wanted to go in the first place, but because of my dad, I convinced myself to give it a try. But now, I guess I regret it, because all those memories are flooding back, like a bombshell dropped down. All those happy and not-so-happy days are back.

All those days when I was all alone, even dad was not able to digest the fact that she was no more. Nobody could digest the fact. But its always said, truth hurts, and I guess it true. Truth hurts, it hurts, but slowly, until it eats you up. That's what happened to me, It had eaten me. After mom's death I was so shocked, sad, hurt that I cocooned myself. I never used to talk to anyone, never hangout like normal people do. Never get out of the house. And dad is a workaholic, so he didn't know anything. And I don't blame him, he was also getting used to the fact that now the family is only of 2... not 3.

All those days, when I had no one to talk to, when I was all alone... But I wasn't alone. Its said that there's always a person who is caring for you but you don't see them. They care for you without your consent. They are watching you, but they aren't in front of you. Those people for me were Sharon and Swayam. They were there with me even when my father wasn't there, all the time, right beside me. They slowly removed me from that little world or should I say little dark world I was living in. they helped me make new friends. They helped me with everything. They were my true friends. I am glad that I had them.

"Passengers of Flight 234, Mumbai, please come to gate no. 2"

There was a call for my flight.

Returning back to the present world, I gathered my hand luggage and boarded the flight.

Well I have decided one thing, I am going to be happy, and go with the flow. I am going to Bombay after so many years! I want to go there with all the good memories, not bad ones. Its always said, stay happy and happy things will happen to you. So I am going to stay all nice and happy, and wait for my flight to land.

Mumbai I am coming!

Rey's POV

In Mumbai

"Okay so guys, we have completed everything, from cleaning the room and making gifts..."

I couldn't complete, because Sharon was on siren mode since morning, because her "Bestfriend" is coming, and she has been interrupting me all the time.

"Excuse me Rey? What do mean by "WE", I don't think you have done anything, because I think all you did was bought chocolates."

"Ya so? Atleast I did something right?!"

I mean, bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha. I took the responsibility to buy the chocolates because I thought I ll give some time alone to Sharon and Swayam, but no, nobody appreciated this!

"Oh please! You haven't done anything. I have done the cleaning of the room, I have done the decorating the basket..."

"And I have made the bed, and all you have done is sit!" Swayam added.

"Swayam you also?! I thought atleast you will take my side!"

What is this?! I mean I don't think they would have done anything for my birthday also! Its like over here there is some celebrity coming here!

And they are further making arrangements, like shampoo and stuff.

God!

"Is she a celebrity or something?" I said, not able to keep my irritating-ness with me anymore.

They looked at me wide eyed and questioningly.

"Because the arrangements you are making, nobody does this unless the person is special"

"Ha, to, she is special!" Sharon retorted.

"Isnt she?" She asked swayam.

"Ofcourse!" He said

Gooddd!!! Can I just slap some one or something? I am so angry of everything here!! I mean do I mean anything to these people??

Or maybe I am overthinking? I don't know! But isn't overthinking a girl thing?

God!!

This taani girl hasn't even come and I am going mad! I don't know what will happen if she comes! God please save me!!

"okay fine, whatever. But now lets rest, then after half hour we'll leave okay?" I said.

"Umm, Rey, you are our friend right?" Sharon said that in the oh-I-am-so-sweet voice.

Okay now, what does she want?

"Sharon, I know you very well, Come to the point, what do you want?" I said, not beating around the bush.

"Rey! Okay fine... Can you please pick up Taani from the airport, look we are really very tired!" She whined.

"So I am not tired?"

"Rey please"

"No"

"Pretty please with sugar on top"

"Look, the appearance of the "please" will not change my answer. I said no means no."

She looked at me with that innocent face.

"Okay fine, but only this time."

I gave up because then she would've bugged me the whole life for saying "no".

"But how will I recognise her?" I asked.

Sharon removed her mobile and showed me some old picture.

My god, she is a kid!

"Seriously Sharon? Do you think she looks like this now?"

"Come on Rey! Then you take a card, you know drivers take, Showing people's name. so you take the card saying "Taani Shekhawat"."

I mean seriously?! Do I look like a driver to these people??!!

"So you are saying that I am a driver?" I asked her.

"Are no Rey! See, even if you recognise her, she wont recognise you, because I have told that me and Sharon are coming, and she dosent even know you na, so take this, take this card." Swayam handed me a card in which taani's name.

"Okay FINE!"

This is the limit now! First I cleaned everything, did so much work and now, now I have to become a driver! A DRIVER?!

Godd! This is girl is already making me do so many things!

"Thank you!" they both shouted, as I headed towards the door, as now it was time for the flight to land.

"You are NOT welcomed" I shouted back.

**

I reached the airport and checked for the arrivals. The plane had landed, so I held the card up, like a driver!

After a while, when my legs started hurting, I saw one girl coming towards me.

Beautiful

She looked good, there was this huge smile on her face, and with her over loaded trolley, she came towards me. And she looks nothing like a kid, like in that picture.

"Hello? Excuse me?!" she waved her hand in front of me.

"Yes? Oh yes, are you taani shekhawat?" I asked.

I don't believe this, I just got lost in an unknown girl!

"No!"

Then why has she come here? Cant she see the board?

"Ofcourse I am Taani na! otherwise why would I come here?!" She snapped.

"Okay, okay fine sorry." I said, "wait... Why sorry? I am not sorry. Cant you say properly?"

"Shut up okay driver? Stay in your limits!"

"Excuse me?! I am not your driver okay?! And please I know what are my limits."

"Oh please okay, if you aren't the driver then what are you? Anyway, can you please take me to the car right now?"

And she didn't let me answer and started walking away. I sighed and just followed her. God, how much does she speak, no girl has spoken to me like this!

We sat in the car.

"So who are you and where are they?" She asked.

"I am Reyaansh Singhania, and look, I am not a anter-yami, who is "They"?"

"Ohh! So you are Reyaansh! I thought your name was Reyash, anyway, they means Sharon and swayam!"

"No I am name is Reyaansh, you can call me Rey, though I only allow my friends to call that. And oh okay."

"Oh hello, meherbaani nahi kar rahe ho, I ll call you Reyaansh only. Huh."

"You know I think you brought your whole house from Delhi."

"Excuse me? Those things are needed." She said.

"Yeah right, Needed'!" Sarcasm dripped from my voice.

"Please keep your sarcasm to yourself, its just your half car filled with my bags."

"Atleast, you said one thing right!"

"Can you keep your mouth shut!"

God! Now I just hope this traffic clears and I reach home.

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Phew!

Hey guys! Hope you liked the update. I tried to put my 100% in this, well, its just near it I guess, but if it isn't, sorry.

And as I had promised, this is a longer update.

Leave your honest feedback and do hit like.

If you have any suggestions then please scrap me.

😊

Posted: 10 years ago
res /unres
yaayyy 1st..😆
hahah lol..Rey The driver...
and phele hi meet mein kya tashan... vaaa👏
and as always shareyam talks were funny...
and cutie sharonn..LOL
update soon..
Edited by ndcdance - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
taarey meet ws gud
Update asap
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey..!!
awesome update
bichara rey swaron ke wajah se driver banna padh raha hai 😆
taarey part 😛 😆
thnxx for the pm
update soon

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