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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Okay, this is something very different than what I've read in other swaron stories. A Middle aged swaron was a Very unique and it was pleasure to read from you.

First of all when the story started, I thought Swayam is dead, but then the way story moved was amazing.

Swayam and Sharon despite of marrying different people, living a normal family life with their individual spouse and kids, still after 20 yrs they hold same emotions for each other.

You have beautifully shown their emotions, the warmth which they were missing, they felt it again in each others embrace.

You are an exceptionally brilliant writer, Din't thought will read something like this.

Beautifully written OS.

Keep writing.!

Thanks for PM.

-Shivani.

Edited by Vani20 - 10 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Loved it
Really amazing it is

Thanks 4 writing it
Thanks 4 d pm

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Ria

@riachawlalko

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

gr8
the concept was something i have really heard of or read be4
bt over all it was amazing :)
thanks fr d pm :)

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

its amazing... so matured thots... loved it... keep writing more... ❤️

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mahak_28

@mahak_28

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

This was really, wow. That is the only word I could utter right now. It is not like a filmy story but a real life story that you have written. The way they feel love for each other even after getting married to someone else is extremely beautiful 😭😭😭😭👏👏👏👏

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

hello iam sorry i know iam super late

this os was simply splendid i loved each bit of it. . as i told you earlier i was feeling proud after i read it that you wrote such a mature stuff soo beautifully. . the thought behind this was os must be appreciated and i was more happy when you gave an open end. . again a mature thing to do. .

do write more os like this. . and i want you to know this is one of your best works that i have ever read. . or i can even put it this way this is one of the best os i have read soo far. . i was overwhelmed to read this and you know that otherwise i wouldnt boost soo much. .

swayam and sharons character was well portrayed. . the thoughts and emotions were really apt. . and the title defined it all. .

lastly i woud say keep it put mona👏

love you loads 😉

shini

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Sorry for late comment. The os had a different take but was yet beautiful😊. It was a realistic one. Loved reading it. Thanks for the pm.

Edited by aneesha93 - 10 years ago

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Okay, this is the first work of yours that I read. It was a pleasure reading this OS.

Middle-aged SwaRon, married to their spouse, having kids & having spent all the thicks & thins of life with their families still had that Fire of love in the hearts.

Even after 20 years, their love had no boundaries. Stories like these aren't acceptable in realities but I believe they happen.

Such mature writing and great way of expressing emotions of such characters- Applause, lady.

This was very different from stuffs I have been reading here. I am actually at a loss of words :')

& yes, I loved it.

Do write more.

-Ayushi

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

the story is way too a different one

not a happy chirpy one

but the one which cud make your heart feel warm

their love is eternal or say Beyond Forever

the title is tailormade for the story and vice versa

love is not always about being together

the way they find happiness in small things of life

their meeting,sharing incidents of their lives

reminiscing their past together

quite an emotional one

thnx 4 the pm

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Some relations are meant forever, strong and intact.. yet there always prevails a distance... but the concern is never washed away.. the care, the love (though not the lovers' love anymore) stays forever...

That's what this indicated.. and that's what you portrayed so marvelously well... No doubt you are the one who has put this amazingly, flawlessly well...