KR SS: Maine pyaar kiya #2 updtd pt27 on Pg68(12/29)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello People. Finally I have created a next thread of MPK. And thank you everyone for liking this story and supporting always. Specially when I have been very irregular in updating the story. I am planning to finish of my stories one by one. But again will not promise anything because life has become very busy all of a sudden. Anyway the good news is, i want to take up MPK story first. So till I complete this story will try and update it whenever time permits, no touching of anyother stories till then. I hope at least this plan works.

And thank you again everyone. Hope you will enjoy the MPK journey in future too. Love you guys. See you soon with the update, which is almost ready..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Recap :

Rey was highly pissed off with gang's this prank. He has understood kriya's dislike on girl's advances towards boys. The talk they had in the morning, after tara's incident, clearly stated she doesn't like all this.

Kriya ignored everything and started arranging food on dining table one by one. Rey nervously went towards her to help her take the dish to dining table, as soon as rey stretched his hand to take the next dish, kriya flinched and moved back. She didn't looked at rey or any one. She was looking down. Everyone felt bad for talking all that on rey.


Part 22:

Vishaka who was getting irritated with all this prank of boys, got down from the kitchen slab,

Vishaka : kriya let them do it. Boys hardly take initiative in kitchen matter. So today if they want to do it, let them. Tum chalo mere sath. Tumne swayam ke ghar nahi dekhi na abhi tak. Come let me give you the tour.

Saying that vishaka dragged kriya out of kitchen and away from everyone. She showed kriya the whole bungalow and finally took her to the backyard swimming pool. Vishaka has been observing kriya since she dragged kriya out of kitchen, kriya was still upset but trying to behave normal forgetting everything. So she makes kriya to sit with her at the end of swimming pool, putting their legs in water.

Vishaka : you know kriya, don't think that I am just saying to pacify you or something but I don't speak nonsense or fake words to make someone feel better. So if you are really not in a mood to go inside, I would like to talk to you for some time.

Kriya was confused. Why vishaka is saying all this?

Kriya : sure vishaka. You know what? I needed this girls space. I have grown up with my friends group. I was missing it. It gives me peace because I am so used to it.

Vishaka : yeah. Like I am used to the boys group here? They are everything for me. I never felt a need to have a girl as friend.

Kriya looks at her few seconds then says "really? I mean yeah, boys or girls, if they are true friends then nothing matters but really you don't have any friends who are girls?"

Vishaka: no. Never felt like to have one. I some time doubt, am I really a girl or (winks) you know?

With that kriya and vishaka burst out laughing.

Vishaka : you know these boys treat me like I am a boy like them, so I never feel odd with them. And trust me kriya I hate most of the girls and girly activities like spending time on make-up or shopping or painting nails with so much patience etc. I am a free bird and unless and until Bharat doesn't find anything wrong in what I do, I don't feel I am doing something wrong or abnormal.

Kriya : Bharat?

Vishaka : yeah. Oh you don't know? Me and Bharat stay together. Since childhood.

Kriya : oh okay. (She didn't ask anything further because she doesn't wants to come to any conclusion on vishaka without knowing anything properly)

Vishaka(after a minute of silence): you know what kriya? After these boys, only sharon and you were the people who didn't ask anything when I said me and Bharat stay together.

Kriya : may be because we know the value of such bondings better.

Vishaka : "such bondings" means?

Kriya : means without any blood relation, giving all the support and being with each other in every stage of life. You know what vishaka, we are actually blessed to have such people in our life, who are ready to do anything for us though they are not our relatives or siblings.

Vishaka : hmm true. (Vishaka knew everything about kriya as swayam always talked about kriya so she understood what kriya is referring here)

After a minute of silence.

Vishaka : I was 9 years old when my mom dad passed away in an bus accident. My parents were school teachers. Our distance relatives sent me to orphanage saying they can't keep me as they are also middle-class people struggling to give their kids good education. I don't blame them. They said "this is the best orphanage, we have enquired about it." And they didn't take any money from whatever my parents jobs could give after their death and even some insurance my parents did. My relatives opened a bank account and kept all the money there and gave those details to orphanage head. She was such a genuine sweetheart, she didn't touch a single rupee from that account knowing it's my parent's hard earned money. Then after 7-8 months bharath joined me in orphanage. He had only father who died with some heatlh issue. Bharat's dad was a mechanic and owned a huge garage where 9-10 people worked for him. After his death, the garage workers searched a better place for Bharat and came to know about the orphanage so they sent Bharat there but they promised Bharat and orphanage head that every month, they will give the collection from garage and till Bharat becomes mature enough to take decision of his own, they will work for the garage like before so that Bharat should get some money to lead his life and they would only take their salaries like before.

Kriya : wow see again we are blessed to get such wonderful people around us who are ready to do whatever they can.

Vishaka : hmm true. Me and Bharat were the only kids in orphanage who never used to play with other kids and sit alone. That sitting alone only made us friends. Then we started playing together, only two of us. Started studying together, spending all the time together. Within no time we became inseparable. Then when we turned 15 years old, as per orphanage rules, we were called and informed about our exit from orphanage after 3 years. It's basically a small meeting where they say we have to leave the orphanage when we turn 18years old. And if any of us had any money left from our family, they give the details of that too so that we can plan for our future and further studies. That time only I came to know that I have plenty of money to complete my studies. And Bharat's monthly garage income, a portion of it has been used every month for his fees as he gets monthly fair income from garage. Usually the orphanage don't use girl's money as the girl need it in emergency when she exits from orphanage. After few days, bharath suddenly asked me one day "vish, mere sath chalegi?". I asked him "of course but where?". Bharat said he doesn't want to wait till 3 years to leave the orphanage as we knew how everyone cry in orphanage if someone is leaving the orphanage, we witnessed it before, we too cried many times. So he wanted to leave the orphanage happily and be in touch with them always. Bharat said he wants to start going to garage to learn the work there, the mechanics work. And his plan was once he learn everything, may be within a year, he will search a better place for both of us and leave the orphanage promising to visit and be in touch with them always. I was hesitant. I wanted to go with him, of course but he spending money on everything was making me uncomfortable. So Bharat understood it and said "ok samaj gaya. I have a solution. You use your parents money for your education and other things I will take care of. Bolo manjoor?" And I agreed. So he started working and learnt everything pretty fastly. But we both waited till we turn 16, to tell about our decision to orphanage head. Then finally when we both turned 16, we informed the orpanage about our future plans and our decision. Our orphanage head said she will select the safe and best place for both of us to stay and help us settle in there. After 4 months she sent us to some PG where we both can share a room and the owner of PG was very sweet and like a strict mother. Then we both completed our studies along with working in garage. Yes i too joined the garage after couple of months, I found it's interesting work. I and Bharat together worked so hard that after completing MBA we extended it, made it a huge service center. Huh ..along with that we bought an apartment immediately after completing our graduation. We both stay there. We never thought of staying in different homes.


Kriya : you don't need to either. I mean you both came to this point together then what is the need to separate now.?

Vish : hmm. Yeah.

They again sit in silence for few minutes.

Vish : rey is not a flirt kriya.

Kriya : huh. What?

Vish : I said rey is not a flirt like boys were saying. Yes he flirts but only with those girls who don't take the flirting seriously. that too when we go for some parties or pubs. Not like he flirts all the time. It's just a time pass for him and he does it with only those girls who are also looking for such time pass in the party. Many times it happened that he didn't even know their names. So it's nothing. Don't take it so seriously kriya.

Kriya : I dont know vish. It's something I don't like. I mean flirting with your girlfriend or fiance is okay but other girls, I am really not comfortable with such acts.

Vish : okay. Forget this flirting part for some time and see what other good qualities he has and how wonderful person he is. And then think is it worth to get upset on this flirting thing, ignoring how wonderful person he is otherwise? And trust me kriya, he will not flirt with any other girl now onwards.

Kriya : means? I mean how can you say that?

Vish : oh kriya rey is a person who can give up on anything to keep his dear ones happy. If he finds anything about him is bothering his closed ones, he will give up on that thing without even second thought.

Kriya : you really think so? Will he give up on flirting? ... For me?

Vish : you bet. But yeah I can't assure you that he will stop flirting with you too. (Winks at kriya)

Kriya smiles and blushes.

Vish : tho chale? All must be waiting for us.

Kriya whispers thank you to vishaka and then they get back to the living room joking normally. Kriya liked vishaka that day just like how she likes her friends group in bangaluru.

The boys who were nervously waiting for kriya and vishaka, smile seeing both girls coming and laughing on something.

Kriya : sorry hum dono ne kuch jada hi time liye. Baat karte karte waqt ka pata hi nahi chala. (Looking at everyone)

Nanu : that's fine kriya. You are liking here that's what important for us. Chalo let's have dinner.

All sat and boys silently thanked vishaka who winked at them indicating everything is fine now. All the boys made rey and kriya to sit opposite to each other, facing each other on dining table. Kriya didn't look at rey since she came back with vishaka so rey was still nervous.

Kriya looks at all the dishes and grins at swayam because he had prepared all her favorites. All south indian dishes. Except nanu payal swayam vicky and kriya, others were not even getting what kind of dishes are they. Rey was looking at all of them, confused where to start and what to take first. Kriya observed this and took all the dishes one by one and served rey, explaining about the dishes to others who were also confused.

Rey : thanks (smirking because kriya very cleverly served him in front of everyone without getting teased by anyone as she made them concentrate on what she is saying about the dishes)

Kriya blushes and warns through her eyes only to which rey grins. Finally everything is back to normal between them. All had dinner with pulling each other's legs and boys sharing their some funny incidents to kriya. It was desert time, everyone settled in living area. Nanu and payal sat separately talking about their business matters.

Swayam : let me bring desert guys.

Kriya : swayu tum baito I will bring the desert. Tum thak gaye honge.

Swayam gives a side hug to her and says "thanks kriya."

Kriya goes to kitchen. Vicky says " rey ja na kriya ki help kar. Itne logo ki desert akeli layegi kya? Ja". Rey blushes and left to kitchen.

Kriya was searching for bowls,

Rey : here are they let me get them for you. (Saying that rey fetches bowls from the rack and place them in front of kriya on kitchen slab)

Kriya without looking at rey, starts serving kheer on all the bowls. Her hands were little shaking and she was very nervous. She didn't understand why but rey's presence was making her nervous. Rey could also understand that, who was observing her keenly. Finally couldn't control himself from asking her

Rey : kriya tum...

Kriya startled at his voice and dropped the serving spoon from her hand. Rey was little taken back from this reaction of her. He turns kriya towards her and cups her face

Rey : kriya kya hua? Mujse itna kyun darr rahe ho?

Kriya removes rey's hands cupping her face, and keeps her head on his chest, fisting his shirt with her hands. She was still little nervous but didn't know the reason.


Rey didn't ask her further and hugs her gently. He wanted her to open up by herself. Finally after a minute,

Kriya : don't flirt with anyone now onwards. Please. I don't like it.

Rey : sure (without even taking a second to think)

Kriya moves away slowly and adjusting her hair behind her ears,

"I don't know rey why I was nervous few minutes back. But..I ..no..i mean.." (she was confused, she didn't know about what her confusion is)

Rey understanding her mental struggle says "that's ok kriya I can understand"

"Thanks"

"No problem. I know my presence achhe achho ko nervous bana deti hai" (and winks at her)

Kriya putting hands on her hips " really? Abhi tho you have agreed to stop flirting rey. It's not even 2 minutes"

Rey scratching his head and blushing asks "I can't even flirt with you? "

Kriya too blushes at his cute expression and diverting the topic says "help me to serve the dish."


While having desert, payal announces

Payal : tomorrow I am throwing a small party to welcome kriya. Only all of us and mine and papa's(nanu) close friends.

Everyone becomes excited. Kriya was hesitant

Kriya : iski kya jaroorat hai. Seriously it's not needed.

Before payal or nanu could say anything,

Rey : why? I only came to bangaluru for two days but still you people arranged a nice party to welcome me. Why can't we celebrate your arrival to Mumbai?

Kriya didn't know what to reply.

Everyone started talking about party preparations. Rey was continuously staring at kriya. She was again nervous feeling his stares which didn't go unnoticed by rey. He knew something has changed today between him and kriya. Their equation has changed. Kriya has changed today towards rey. A better change. A positive change. What amused him the most was, without their much involvement, these changes happened between them today.



I know this update is a crap. Will try to cover it in next update. . Sorry.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello..okay first of all sorry..my health condition was hilarious last few days.lol. I went into mute mode because of throat infection and cold allergies.. I just communicated with sign language haha. Jokes apart now I am kind of okay health wise so here is the update. Not lengthy one but not short one either.. and guys who are not in my buddy list please add me so that I can pm you people when I update. Please. .

Part : 25

After party when all the guests left, the gang, payal, nanu and kriya sits in the living area totally exhausted.

Rey didn't speak to the gang, swayam nanu, payal or kriya. He just attended the guests with slight smile till the end. He didn't even had his dinner properly. Everyone noticed it but no one said anything to him as they were upset by his earlier comments on kriya. Guilt was clearly visible on rey's face.. all were silently looking at rey who was standing alone leaning on one of the piller of living room closing his eyes.

Kriya goes silently to kitchen and comes back with plate full of food. When she nears the piller where rey is standing, she grabs his wrist looking straight(not looking at rey) and drags him to the sofa(ignoring his shocked expression) where gang is sitting and says "sit" eyeing at the empty space. Rey without argument sits silently. Then kriya gives him the plate. Again without saying anything he takes and starts eating. It was pin drop silence till rey finishes his food. Then kriya takes the plate from him handing him the water bottle. He drinks silently.

Kriya : who am "I"?

Everyone looks at kriya who had tears in her eyes and looking at rey asking him the same question which he asked in his anger.

Rey wipes corner of his eyes before standing and looking at kriya and says "sorry"

Kriya (sadly smiles) : well that's okay. .that's. ..perfectly fine but ...just know one thing...I am not backing off...I will correct every damn wrong thing in this family before leaving.. I don't care if some people starts hating me.. (looking straight into rey's eyes which are shining with tears by now) I really don't care.

Rey (looking at everyone) : I am sorry everyone for ruining the party successfully (chuckles sadly).. hosake tho forgive me this time.(looking at kriya this time who is still staring at him)

Nanu : that's fine rey. .try to control your anger young boy..and smiles at rey forgiving him heartly.

Rey nods smiling at nanu.

Payal strokes rey's back lovingly which indirectly shows that she has forgiven him. Rey smiles at her mom.

Swayam punches rey's shoulder and says "last time okay?" Rey nods hugging him..swayam pats at reys back forgiving him..

Gang too got up and pats on reys back smiling..which was indication that this time they have forgiven him..

Now only kriya left.. though she said it's fine but still she was hurt. Her sentences clearly showed her emotions few minutes back. Now everyone looks at kriya..who wiping her eyes, smiles and says

"So everything fine now.. (to which everyone looks at her sadly because they know how hurt kriya is right now) ahh (wiping her tears laughing at the same time) don't worry about me..I will become normal in no time"

Everyone watches her sadly she laughs trying to stop her tears saying " shit..my inside tap is broken, I am unable to stop the water flow" everyone chuckles but they know how much she is hurting inside...rey couldn't control himself and hugs her tightly crying on her shoulder saying sorry continuously. .kriya was taken a back at rey's that reaction but slowly she hugs him back coming out of her shock. Everyone grins at this scene. Payal wipes her tears smiling.

Kriya slowly closes her eyes feeling rey's shaking body against hers. He was equally hurt as kriya it was clear now. Kriya starts stroking rey's back to make him relax. Which didn't work much then she starts stroking his head lovingly and hugging him with other hand.. rey slowly relaxes and he moves away slowly. . They both looks at each other and smiles.. he again says sorry scratching back of his head shyly.

Kriya blushes nodding. But soon she looks at the others behind rey who are grinning. .kriya's face becomes red with embarrassment. .she realizes then that she just hugged rey intimately infront of everyone. She blushes more closing her eyes tightly haning her head down. .

Well for rey it didn't take time to analize kriya's expression. . Without looking back he understood he hugged kriya infront of everyone. .that too not the normal hug, a tight one, pressing his face at kriya's neck..which basically looked like he is kissing kriya there but because of the situation everyone knew it is not the case.

What amuses everyone is, rey's reaction was totally different from kriya. Instead of feeling embarrassed, he laughs at kriya's expression and hugs her again saying " that's okay kriya". Everyone laughs at rey's reaction.

Finally everyone are happy.. and soon everyone starts chatting on random topics.. but for rey and kriya it's something new..they are still struggling with these newly formed emotions within them for each other. They both were physically present there but minds somewhere else. Rey was in between galncing at kriya scratching back of his head with his index finger, which kriya found adorable at first and slowly she founds it sexy because every time rey did that, he used to blush along silently. So finally kriya founds rey's that reaction is very distracting so she starts avoiding looking at rey.

Kriya struggle a lot to control looking at rey. But rey smirks at her struggle, understanding her situation very well. So he starts clearing his throat loudly by slightly coughing sometimes. It made difficult for kriya to restrain looking at rey. Finally she gives up and looks at rey but rey, smirks winking at her.

Kriya immediately stands up startled, to which rey chuckles, everyone first looks at kriya and then at rey.. rey shrugs as if he doesn't know anything.

Vicky : kriya what happened?

Kriya looking here and there "ahh..woo...I need some..ice cream...yeahhh.. haha ice cream"

Swayam goes to kriya and asks " you okay? "

She finally managed to smile and speak normally and says " yeah..just felt like having ice cream"

Swayam : cool..I will get it from fridge. .anyone else wants ice cream?

Literally the whole gang raised their hand lazily.

Swayam chukles shaking his head..




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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry guys for the delay again. Actually I moved to different apartment couple of days back so was busy in shifting. Here is the next update.


Recap :

Kriya : mm.. wo.. then suddenly kriya watches something and says angrily "what the hell are you doing?"

Part : 20

Rey immediately turns to kriya and then at the person where kriya'z furious eyes are on. To control the situation,

Rey : kriya she is (kriya cuts his sentence)

Kriya : what do you think you were doing? Haan? Yeh kya kar rahi thi tum?

Rey again tries to control kriya. He hasn't seen kriya so furious.

Rey : kriya yeh (again kriya doesn't let him complete the sentence)

Kriya : main tumse kuch puch rahi hoon? (Literally shouted)

It was then rey observed the other girl blushing looking at rey or his half naked body. Rey immediately takes the shirt and starts wearing. And he understood why kriya is angry on that girl. If it was in any other situation, rey would have teased kriya calling it as her jealous but here the situation is totally different. Whatever it is, by the look of kriya, it is clear that she will not let the matter go so easily this time. So just to rescue the third person between him and kriya, he thought of interrupting kriya

Rey : kriya she is Tara. She ahh (hell he is nervous in front of furious kriya)

Kriya : I know (it was sharp reply)

Rey gulps at her answer and it is now necessary to control the situation otherwise kriya will kill tara today.

Rey (clearing his throat) : tara kya kar rahe the tum yahan?

Tara blushed in retun again shyly looking at him. Kriya'z self control crossed it's limit at that reaction of tara.

Kriya : look at her (pointing at her). She is behaving as if she is your newlywed wife.

Rey was shocked at kriya's comment and shouts "what?"

Kriya : aur nahi tho kya rey. She is blushing looking at you and you, what were you doing, openly showing off your ...argghh (she fists her hands in the air)

Rey looking at kriya's frustrated state, got more nervous. So ignoring her glares, he turns to tara who definitely not looking happy at the way kriya reacting.

Rey : tara tum yeh kya kar rahe the? Haan?

Before tara could say anything,

Kriya : yeah ask her. Muje tho koi jawab nahi de rahi yeh "Tumhari tara". (Pressing at last two words)

Rey shakes his head at her comment murmuring "unbelievable".

Rey : yes tara. Chup kyun ho ab, bolo? (In more strict voice, which definitely irked her ego)

Tara (throwing the thing in her hand on the floor furiously) : wahi kar rahi thi jo karne aayi thi (looking at kriya, though the question was asked by rey)

Which made kriya and rey too angry.

Rey : tara out from here right now. (He didn't like the way she is glaring back at kriya) jao yahan se. Abhi. (In commanding tone)

Tara : sorry. Jo kaam karne aayi thi wo main karke jaungi.

This time kriya doesn't say anything to her. She looks at rey as if expecting him to handle "his tara".

Rey : maine kaha jao yahan se tara. You are disturbing me. Muje ready hona hai office ke liye.

Tara staring at kriya with anger left the room. Kriya too was glaring at tara with so much irritation. Once tara was gone rey clears his throat to get kriya's attention who was still looking at tara going. Kriya now was highly pissed off and upset. Even rey was upset with the whole situation. When finally kriya looks at him,

Rey : good morning, he just wanted to lighten kriya's mood so started with normal conversation but to kriya it was whole of a different thing.

Kriya felt guilty for ruining morning atmosphere of the house. She sadly goes and sits on rey's bed and says "what is good in this morning? I ruined the morning".

Rey too goes and sits next to kriya and says "who said you ruined the morning? Hell it was something adventurous scene for me"

"Hawww. Rey you are making fun of me?"

"Haha I don't have that much guts right now. I was so nervous to face you when you were furious kriya. I saw you getting furious first time."

"Sorry rey but I am not regretting for getting furious on your tara (again pressing last two words)"

"Ann aan, first of all stop calling her "my tara". For god sake kriya she is a maid and if she was drooling at me, it was not my fault"

"I agree but rey when you come out from bathroom you should see if anyone is there in your bedroom. How can you stand infront of her like...like..like...that?(in low tone) Any girl will drool if you exhibit your well built body"

(Rey smiles at her comment) "well I will take it as a compliment. So thanks. But kriya I daily come out of bathroom like that after taking bath. And tara, I think she saw me like this before as well"

"What? Since how long it's going on? And how you be so cool with it?"

"What do you mean by 'since how long'? Since tara has started working here, she comes to clean my room at this time always. And what's wrong kriya? I never paid attention to her. If she stares at me, it's not my problem"

"Really now rey? If your house's male maid like maali or gate keeper looks 'like that' at me when I am exercising or after coming out from bathroom taking bath, in my bathrobe, will it be okay to you?"

Rey gets angry at this question and he gets up and says "what? Shut up kriya. No one will stare you when you are..you are...I mean when they are not supposed to look at you. I will make sure of that..got it?"

"Why? Why does it bothers you now rey?" (But kriya liked rey's this possessive tone. She loved it)

"Kriya you are a girl. I wont tolerate if someone lays bad looks on you. Your dignity is my responsibility now"

Kriya smiles at him. She just adored rey in that moment.

"What? Why are you smiling now?"

" nothing. You looked cute when you said those words"

Rey smiles shaking his head "cute? Madam I always got compliments like 'hot' 'handsome' 'sexy' 'smoking hot' etc. You are the first one complimenting me as 'cute'"

"Hmm may be. Or may be you never showed this 'cute' side of yours to anyone before"

Rey got her point and yes she was 100% true. He never was this much possessive about anyone before. He too whispers 'may be' sitting next to her again.

After few moments of silence, kriya clears her throat and says " only girls won't have dignity rey, boys too have. And I don't like if anyone one stares like that at any of my family members when they are changing dress or getting ready. When swayam comes to Bangalore, I always made sure the maid doesn't enter into his room in the morning when he is getting ready"

Rey now got her point and also understood why she was that furious at tara.

Rey : I will make sure this won't repeat again. Promise. And sorry for being careless to notice tara's stares all these days.

Kriya again loved his way of understanding her point of view and adopting it in his own way.

Kriya : thanks. But rey.. woo (she was highly nervous and guilty now)

"What kriya? Bolo"

"Wo rey..wo main..I mean. ."

"Kriya what's the matter? It's okay tell me. You can say anything to me..bolo kriya"

"Wo rey..ahh..even I..I was ...alsoo..huh..I mean main bhi aapko..dekh..rahi thi"

Rey without any teasing or laughing says " you have all the right to stare at me..in fact 'only you have the right to stare at me like that'"

Both looks at each other forgetting everything. One is trying to see the same emotions on other's face, and the other one is trying to accept the real meaning of those two sentences. Their trance broke when payal calls them for breakfast.

Rey : mom

Kriya : hmm

Again they sit in silent for few minutes not getting what to say next and not wanting to leave the place. Both were nervous and looking away, trying to find a reason to talk or topic to talk. After couple of long moments when they fail to find any topic, both turned towards the other at the same time and says "okay then. ..".. they understood the situation and smiles at themselves. .

"Okay then rey you get ready, I will go"

"Hmm. I will be there in few minutes"

Kriya left reys room.

~~~~~~~~~~~

At dining table,

Rey : good morning mom.

Payal : good morning rey. See kriya, this is how our routine is. I can't even get to see my son in the morning till breakfast time.

Rey : mom (in a complaining tone)

Kriya : it's your fault mom. If you wanted, you would've changed it long back (says with smile, very casually so that payal shouldn't get hurt)

Rey : come on kriya

Payal : you are right beta. I think I gave him lot of freedom since childhood that's why my son behaves as if he has brought up in abroad, not in India. Too independent.

Rey : mom nothing like that. Why suddenly you have problem with my life style?

Payal : I don't have any issues with your life style rey. It's just that ki...ki..huh forget it..

Rey shakes his head at his mom's failed attempt to express something and continue with his breakfast like his mom..but kriya who is observing the scene very keenly couldn't stop herself,

Kriya : this is the problem mom. It's where you are making mistake. Infact you both are at fault (pointing the spoon in her hand at both rey and payal)

Both payal and rey looked at each other and then at kriya


Kriya : lack of communication. Not expressing anything freely to each other. I don't understand what's stopping you mom. Tell your son whatever is the matter mom. Then only he can understand how you feel about him in different situations. You dont express anything mom so he is taking you for granted. It's not his fault. Because he doesn't know what you exactly want from him or how you exactly want him to lead his life.

Rey looks at his mom. Payal was silent then after few seconds says "you are right kriya but it's too late. I should have started giving opinions on his lifestyle when he was in school and his whole life style was changing day by day. My insecurities never allowed me to stop him or say him anything those days so now it's too late I guess"

Rey : no mom. You can say anything at any point of time. I will consider each and every advice of you. I didn't know mom you don't like the way I am. (He was hurt..very badly.. the way her mom was saying against his lifestyle)

Kriya and payal(at the same time) : shut up rey.

Kriya : are you mad ?

Payal : who said I dont like you? What we both meant was there are few things in life rey which keeps the kids to connect to their family and their roots strongly. And it's parent's responsibility to keep on telling one by one whenever the situation is right. Or at least when our children doing something different than our family culture, explain them and bring them back on track. Believe it or not rey, this whole process eventually makes parents and children's bonding strong. I never attempted anything till now. I never tried to explain you anything when you were doing things which i dont like..yeah except for crying in front of your dad's photo, complaining him that if he was alive he should've stopped you.

Rey : why only dad? Mom you would've also done that? You have all rights too mom.

Payal : I know. .I know rey..but I was insecure. I only have you in my life rey. I was worried if I stop you doing something or restrict you to do something, you may end up feeling if your dad was alive you would've had all the freedom.

Rey : no mom. I can never think like that.

Kriya : abhi bhi time hai mom (in a teasing tone. Because rey and payal were in the verge of breaking down emotionally and kriya didn't like this so just to lighten the situation) in fact this is the right chance. Tell him mom(looking at rey ) that he should stop showing of his muscles, stop partying late night, stop flirting with girls (with stern tone), and..anddd let me think ...

Payal and rey smiles at her..

Rey : they are sounding your demands more than mom's..(how can he let go such an golden opportunity to tease kriya)

Payal too joined rey and said "exactly".

Kriya : wh..what? Why should I demand something from you..? I was just telling generally(concentrating on her plate and not looking at rey or payal)

Rey : really? Oh yeah show off se yaad aya..mom tell tara to

Payal : I told her to clean your room 1st thing in the morning when she comes. When you will be gone out for gym.

Kriya : sorry mom wo

Payal : no no kriya.. I completely agree with you. When she came complaining about the situation to me, I understood. I don't know how I missed such an regular act of her since all these days..

At that time swayam enters there.

Payal : swayam? Good morning

Rey : good morning swayam. Aaja breakfast karte hai

Swayam ignores both of them, before kriya could also wish him good morning,

'Where is your phone kriya?'

'Phone? I think it's in my room only'

'Wow yahan aate hi tumhare sare aadatein hi badal gaye? Your phone will be always with you right?'

'wo I had put it on charger and I forgot to check it later'

'Forgot kriya? I have been trying your number since morning. You are so much busy that you forgot to msg me or call me in the morning like always?'

Rey was taken back by swayam's such possessive behavior towards kriya. Swayam is always known for his patience and maturity but today for the first time rey is seeing swayam demanding for something so seriously.

Kriya : nahi..woh. I wanted to check my mobile when I went to rey's room in the morning but something happened there so because of which I forgot about my cell completely.

Kriya was addressing about tara incident but swayam took it in different way.

Swayam : forget it kriya (trying to control his anger) by the way i was trying your number to invite you all for the dinner tonight.

Kriya too got disappointment in swayam's expression but when he invites for dinner

Kriya : sach? Wow I am coming to your house today?

Swayam not reacting to her excitement, turns to payal and Rey and invites them too.




Done.. 😊
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Recap :

Swayam : forget it kriya (trying to control his anger) by the way i was trying your number to invite you all for the dinner tonight.

Kriya too got disappointment in swayam's expression but when he invites for dinner

Kriya : sach? Wow I am coming to your house today?

Swayam not reacting to her excitement, turns to payal and Rey and invites them too.

Part 21:

Swayam then turning to kriya "I will leave now. See you in the evening". He was still upset with kriya. Sensing the same,

Payal: wait a minute swayam. Kriya don't you give him his lunch box.? You wanted to send it with rey but since swayam is here, you can give it to him directly.

Swayam : lunch box? He turns to kriya but this time kriya avoiding him, silently goes to kitchen to pack lunch for swayam.

Payal : come sit swayam. Yeah kriya has prepared lunch for you. She got up at 5.30 in the morning today to prepare lunch for you. I told her most of the times rey and you have lunch together so she was thinking to send lunch with rey today for you, as a surprise.

Swayam didn't say anything. He felt guilty for behaving so cold with kriya. Rey is observing each and every emotions on swayams face since he had come. The bonding swayam shares with kriya is clear to Rey now. Today rey didn't feel jealous but adored their bonding.

Kriya comes and gives the lunch box to swayam giving a small smile. And then went to pick up her plate, which is almost filled still. They had just started having breakfast, swayam came.

Payal : why are you taking your plate kriya? Breakfast nahi karni? She got it that kriya is upset.

Kriya : no mom. Not hungry. Baadme khalungi.

Swayam : muje company bhi nahi dogi?

Kriya : breakfast kar rahe ho?

Swayam : yeah hungry. And today I have very tight schedule so wanna have nice breakfast to keep me active.

That was swayam's way of saying sorry by doing what kriya likes. She always advices swayam to have nice food in the morning whenever he has lot of work load. Kriya understood it and grins at swayam. Finally both sat to have breakfast.

Kriya forgot rey and payal and every other thing and started her chatting with swayam.

Kriya : so what's your schedule for today?

Swayam : huh nothing much kriya. Two important meetings hai in the first half of the day. May be they will take 1-2 hours each. And then I have some homework to do on one of our very important client, as I have heard that some issues are going on in their company. So just to avoid consequences in later stage because of our company tie up with them. And then our internal status meeting with my few employees. I am planning to return home by 4.30-5 pm today. Khana jho banana hai(winking at kriya).

Kriya : can I come early to prepare food?

Swayam : thumhare hi ghar hai kriya. Whenever you want, you can come. But today I would like to cook myself. First time you are coming home.

Kriya smiles. Rey today really adored their bonding. The way swayam said his schedule was much shocking for rey because even they(swayam and rey) don't share that much information on their companies day to day activities. But with the ease swayam said everything was proof that this is nothing new for them.

Swayam : so what's your plan for today kriya?

Kriya : oh me and payal mom are going for shopping. (Kriya was very excited. The way she sang that sentence was the proof)

Swayam : cool. And haan mere wo dark grey formal trouser ke sath koi suitable shirt nahi hai. See if you can find something to pair with that trouser.

Kriya : sure. Dark grey right? I will check on shirts. Anything else you want?

Swayam : some semi formal half sleeves shirts. It's too hot now a days tho when I dont have any client meetings will wear half sleeves shirts.

Kriya : done. Aur kuch? Perfumes, ties or anything ?

Swayam : hmm not really. Ek wallet. Haan.

Rey : dude you are giving your shopping list to kriya? He finally asked. It was the limit. Rey never thought swayam is such a care free person and right now it was looking like swayam is younger brother to kriya not elder brother.

Payal shaking her head and smiling "this is nothing rey. No one can understand their bonding".

Kriya smiles and swayam says "so what rey? If she is going for shopping she always asks me if I want something and I tell her."

Rey : even then when she was in bengaluru?

Swayam : yup.

Rey : oh that's why most of the time when ask you where you bought it, you say it's from Bangalore, kriya bought it.

Swayam : exactly. Aur kaun hai in my life who can take care of such small-small needs of me.

Rey felt proud of kriya in that moment though swayam's tone became emotional. Payal and kriya became emotional at swayam's last sentence. To lighten the mood,

Kriya : haha swayuuu don't forget you have given me a credit card. You will regret for giving it to me very soon. Dheklena.

Swayam : jalli. For whom do I work idiot. Jo karna hai karo I won't regret giving you that credit card. Infact I will feel happy if you use it without any hesitation.

Rey : bas karo yaar aap dono. I can't digest. Trust me kriya, he (pointing at swayam) is someone else with you. I mean I never saw him so posessive and protective and most importantly he is talking like a carefree college boy. He never behaves like that with us. We never saw him like this.

Kriya : shut up rey. Najar na lagao uske happiness pe.

Rey : what? Are you serious? You believe in all those najar lagna and all?

Kriya : yes I believe. And...I don't like someone making fun of it. (Indirectly she said 'topic closed now')

Rey : fine..(irritating tone, fake one)

Payal smiles at this reaction of rey.

Rey after finishing his breakfast, asks kriya "and where is my lunch box?"

Payal was shocked because rey never took lunch box. He always preferred having outside food. Even whenever payal asked, he used to refuse saying he will have something from hotel. So she always sent lunch box for swayam only.

Kriya looked at him and grinned. She is happy that rey is asking for lunch box. Morning when she said to payal, she will pack lunch for both swayam and rey, payal said rey never takes lunch box. He loves to have outside food.

Swayam oblivious to payal and kriya's reaction to rey's request for lunch box says
Swayam : yeah kriya please iske lie bhi lunch pack karo. Otherwise he eats most of the food leaving me very little.

Payal was shocked again to this fact and asks "rey eats home made food, I mean I thought he loves eating hotel food right.? He always said the same whenever I asked"

Rey didn't say anything to it. He just left the dining table to fetch his laptop bag.

Swayam : mom he loves eating homemade food. Not the other way. He eats most of my lunch box. Specially when you have prepared something. Actually he orders lunch for him and then we share my lunch box and the ordered food because I know rey loves home cooked food.

Payal : but why does he refuses me whenever I ask him?

Swayam smiles at this question and replies "because he doesn't want to trouble you. He feels if he agree to take lunch box, you will spend most of the time in kitchen preparing variety of foods for him. Which he doesn't want."

Payal didn't get how to react to this.

Swayam again smiling says "mom he cares a lot about you. Yeah he doesn't expresses it openly but these are his way to caring you."

Kriya packs lunch box for rey too and when he comes down after taking his laptop bag, she gives it to him smiling brightly. She is happy because he asked her lunch box authoritatively. Rey to smiles at her saying thanks to her.



Payal and kriya did lots of shopping. They bought sarees for payal and some light jewelries to match with those sarees. Kriya bought shirts and wallet for swayam and couple of dresses for herself. It was around 4pm when payal and kriya thought to have some snacks as they forgot to have lunch in the excitement of shopping. Payal's cell rings, it was rey's call. She receives it

Payal : hello rey

Kriya looks at payal immediately.

Payal : don't ask rey. We did very nice shopping today. Now planning to have some snacks in food court here.

Payal : yeah kriya wants to buy few things so It will take half an hour for us that's it.

Payal : hmm if you want you can join us for snacks.

Payal : okay then. Bye.

Payal then looked at eager looks of kriya. It is clear that kriya wants to know what rey said. Understanding it,

Payal : he is coming in few minutes.

It is then kriya understood, how eagerly she was looking at payal to know what rey said. She blushes at her stupid reaction. Payal too notices it and smiles.

Payal and kriya just sat in food court, rey comes there. Kriya was actually shocked because it's hardly 5 minutes that payal said rey will come and he is there already.

Rey : hey

Kriya : how come you reached here within few mins.?

Rey chuckled and said "how much time it will take to reach next building kriya?"

Waiter comes then and they order snacks.

Kriya : you mean...your office building is next to this mall?

Kriya didn't know that.

Rey : yup. And the opposite building of this mall is, swayam's company.

Kriya : what? Really? (She is excited to know all this) I mean you both, I mean both of your companies are so close?

Rey : yup. That's why i and swayam have lunch together most of the days.

Kriya : wow. Cool. That's really awesome.

They then had snacks telling rey what all they bought. Payal and kriya were so excitedly explained everything they bought. Rey is happy because for the first time his mom is so happy and excited. All thanks to kriya he thought. Payal observing the way rey looking at kriya, who is still busy in observing each corner of food court eagerly.

Payal : rey what else work you have at office today?

Rey : hmm? (Looks at payal diverting his eyes from kriya) ahh nothing much mom. Few files to review and sign that's it. Swayam ke yahan jana hai so finished my work early today.

Payal : hmmm then why don't you accompany kriya for her shopping now.? I will go and finish the work. Anyhow I needed to visit office to sign some papers so I will handle the other things too.

Rey smiles and agreed. Both kriya and rey got it that payal is giving them opportunity to spend some time together to understand each other. So payal left after having snacks.

Rey : so mam, kahan jana hai next?

Kriya said her list so that rey can suggest her the shops because she is new to the place. Rey took her to couple of shops and they bought all the things kriya wanted. It took hardly 30-40 mins for them. Now they are planning to return to rey's office as his car is parked there only. They decided to go home first to freshen up and then go to swayam's house. Payal has told them, she will directly go to swayams place from office.

Kriya : rey?

Rey : hmm?

Kriya : wo..don't you want to buy anything for yourself? Like shirts or something.? You know I bought few shirts for swayam in a showroom here, they have very nice collections.

Rey guessed that kriya liked something for him. She wants to buy them. So to confirm his guess, he says "sure. Let's go then"

Kriya became very excited and nervous at the same time. Rey observed it. He let her take him to the showroom and when they enter there, kriya directly dragged rey to one particular set of shirts section. She took out a dark maroon colored shirt within a second and holding it asks eagerly "how's it?"

Rey's guess was confirmed. She wanted to buy this shirt for him but was hesitating.

Rey : wow it's nice. Taking it from her, he holds it infront of him and looks at side mirror saying "cool. I will take it"

Kriya beamed at this. She grins and take him to couple more shirts section as if she has already selected them for rey. Rey without any hesitation took all of them. And now he got it that why his mom and swayam likes kriya to select things for them. Her selection is too good. She looks for color combination and style both while selecting. Then kriya dragged rey to goggles section and picked one particular shades and showed to rey as if again she selected it before only. Rey wore it and this time he didn't looks at the mirror but turning to kriya says "nice right? I didn't have this shade. Liked it". They took all of them and went to pay for them. Kriya kept all of them for billing and when the person on billing counter said the total amount, kriya opened her bag to take her card to pay but she hesitates and stops. Rey observed all this and waits. When the person again said the total amount rey said "what? Kriya pay the bill. Are you expecting me to pay? You selected all of them madam so you pay the bill. I love gifts you know (and winks at her)". Kriya happily pays the bill.

While walking towards car parking of rey's office,

Rey : kriya now you got my size, you can buy anything for me whenever you like something.

Kriya nods indicating 'okay'. She is happy that rey liked her selections. They went home to freshen up. After half an hour rey was waiting in living room for kriya to come down. Rey was checking mails in his phone when someone taps his shoulder. He knew it's kriya, he turns towards her and looks at her from head to toe slowly then looking at her smiles. It was an appreciating smile. Kriya was looking stunning in combination of white, black and red anarkali. She wore very minimum accessories to go with her attire. He loved her dressing sense.



He hardly looked or had flirt with girls in traditional dresses. It's not that he doesn't like girls who are in traditional dresses but he never paid attention to them.

Ride to swayams place was silent as kriya was eagerly looking out of the window. It's a new place for her. She was excited to watch it. Rey didn't disturb her. He himself had a smile on his face looking at kriya's excitement.

Once they entered the house, payal nanu and the gang (vishaka bharath amar vicky and neil) started laughing looking at rey. Rey just glares at them irritated. Because kriya was coming holding her handbag and rey behind her holding all the shopping bags, which she bought for swayam.

Kriya took blessings from nanu and asks where is swayam to which nanu said he is in kitchen preparing dinner for everyone. She felt bad for swayam and went to kitchen to help him.

Rey to followed her. Kriya tiptoe towards swayam and standing just behind him, shouts "bhowww". Swayam startled at this sound throws the spoon in the air which he was holding. Rey shakes his head smiling at kriya's antics. Swayam placing a hand on his heart

"Kriya yaar maar daloge ek din tum muje. Har baar yahi karti ho and every time I let you succeed in this huh. Not fair yar"

Kriya laughs at him holding her tummy. Once again rey lost in her laugh. Such a beautiful scene he thought.

Kriya : sorry. Sorry. Next time will try to control scaring you.

Swayam shakes his head smiling, resuming stirring the dish.

Kriya : waise kya bana rahe ho? Main kuch karu?

Swayam : no yaar. You are guest of honor today. Let me cook myself. Next time se kitchen mein enter hi nahi hoonga main. You cook all by yourself.

Kriya : done. Atleast food arrange tho kar sakti hoon na main dining table pe? Ya phir wo bhi mana hai guest of honor se.?

She was irritated because she didn't like swayam cooking everything and she can't help him.

Swayam : sure. So how was your day?

Rey : swayam tumhe yahi question mili puchne ke lie? She will now starts with her shopping experience. I don't know what pleasure ladies get in shopping so much.

Kriya : haha. Very funny.

Swayam : rey it's not the case with kriya. She most of the time spends time on buying things for others than for herself. Everyone gives their list knowing how perfectly she selects everything. (He said it proudly)

Rey too agreed it silently without voicing it out because whatever shirts or glasses kriya selected for rey are too perfect for him. Its clear that she buys things for everyone based on their complexion and personality so that they suit the person in stylish way.

The gang enters at that time in kitchen.

Vicky : swayam I am hungry. Cook fast

Swayam : bhukkad

Amar : vicky cooking is not so easy. It needs lot of patience.

Kriya : agreed

Vicky : whatever

All shakes their head at vicky's impatience.

Vishaka : waise party kitchen mein hai kya? The guest and host, even rey, all of you are hanging out here only.

Vicky and neil looked at each other. They got the perfect chance to take revenge against rey. With mischievous nod,

Vicky : wo kya tha dialogue? Haan(clearing his throat) "rey jahan rehta hai, party ka venue wahi ban jati hai" (dramatically)

All got this dialogue and vicky's intention except kriya. How can they miss such an golden opportunity. .

Rey who was sipping water, chokes and starts coughing. He too got that his friends will not spare him today. He nervously looks at kriya..

Kriya was confused by rey's reaction but vicky and neil cleared her confusion in next few minutes.

Neil : yeah yeah I remember that dialogue (with excitement). Who was she? (As if remembering someone's name) annn I think Taniya...no sonia..no yar..

Bharat : nahi be wo tho MBA ke girls the jo rey pe lattu the. Ye tho few months back ki baat hai.

Rey looks at kriya nervously biting his nails. Kriya was not angry but shocked and then her expression turned into hurtful.

Vicky : yeah right. What was her name dude.. (scratching his head)

Neil : but kya sexy thi yar ye ladki. (dreaming expression)

Swayam : but utni hi chipku thi (swayam too joined the gang this time)

Bharat : haan wo tho hai. Rey ko tho chodti hi nahi thi.

Neil : yeah man. Rey ke sath jab bait thi tho aisa lagta as if she is sitting on his lap.

Ray hits his forehead at this comment. He already witnessed kriya's discomfort for girls such behavior with rey in the morning. The tara incident. He is worried now for kriya's reaction on all this.

Kriya ignored everything being said this time and started transferring food in serving bowls to arrange them on dining area.

Vicky : I got it. Her name was...(he looked at all friends n then at rey who was so nervous and then looked at kriya but as soon as he looked at her expression, he got it that she is hurt by all these comments on rey. He also observed her discomfort too. He knows kriya since quite time now as he started visiting bangaluru with swayam since a year)

Neil : Sunaina

Vicky hussed everyone signalling by putting finger on his mouth. Swayam immediately looked at kriya when he saw vicky looking at her. Swayam too got that kriya is hurt not angry on rey. They all planned a prank to make her angry on rey but the plan went in wrong direction.

Rey was highly pissed off with gang's this prank. He has understood kriya's dislike on girl's advances towards boys. The talk they had in the morning, after tara's incident, clearly stated she doesn't like all this.

Kriya ignored everything and started arranging food on dining table one by one. Rey nervously went towards her to help her take the dish to dining table, as soon as rey stretched his hand to take the next dish, kriya flinched and moved back. She didn't looked at rey or any one. She was looking down. Everyone felt bad for talking all that on rey.


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I am sorry I took time to update though update was ready long back.

Part 24 :

Evening

Payal and nanu's friends started coming one by one. The gang is gathered near the drinks bar and having fun time.

Rey looking at his wrist watch says "how much time does she takes to get ready? It's been more than an hour since she went saying she will get ready now."

Vicky : chill. I am telling you, no I am warning you rey, when kriya goes to get ready then you just forget about the time. She takes her own sweet time to dress up.

Rey : always?

Vicky and swayam : always.

Rey murmurs "I have to change this habit of her. I don't have patience to wait"

Swayam: did you say something?

Rey : ahh no. (Looking at his mom's friends says) why did they bring their sons today for the party? I remember mom saying only 8-10 ladies, her friends, will come to the party.

Vishaka : dude you are gonna have tough time today (in a teasing tone)

Rey now understood why ladies have their sons tagged to them today. To introduce kriya to them. And obviously rey didn't like it.

Bharat : ahh. Ladki dekhi nahi aagaye saale swayamvar ke liye.

Swayam : what rubbish? I don't want to put kriya in any uncomfortable situation today.

Rey : right. Don't leave kriya alone in the party because I don't believe mom's these friends.

Payal calls swayam and tells him to bring kriya down. Somewhere payal was regretting inviting her friends to the party because she didn't expect them to bring their sons along with them. She very well knew what's going on in her friends mind. Payal always talked about kriya to her friends and even the ladies are little jealous about payal and smriti's friendship. Payal has taken smriti to poojas and parties when smriti visited Mumbai.

At that time kriya gives her entry with swayam.



She was looking stunning with absolutely minimum accessories and makeup and in simple yet beautiful dress bought by swayam.

Rey (looking at kriya) murmurs "Barbie doll"

Niel (just to tease rey whispers) "south Indian Barbie doll"

Rey : shut up.

Payal hesitant but calls kriya to introduce to her friends. Obviously everyone becomes alert but swayam was with kriya so rey and payal felt relieved. All payal's frinds liked kriya instantly and those who came to the party with their sons, they introduced their sons to kriya. Kriya initially was clueless but when aunties started asking her questions about her hobbies, future plans etc, she got it that where it's all going.

Rey (observing kriya's each expression) says "dude she is really not liking it. Look at them, how they are asking questions"

Vishaka : why don't you go there? You know, just to support her. She feels comfertable around you.

Bharat : tuje kaise pata be?

Vish : Bharat I am a girl. Aur ek girl hi dusre girl ki emotions ko samaj sakti hai.

Neil Vicky and Bharat laughs at vish and gives hifi to each other.

Neil (still laughing) : vish whatever you say we can't accept you as girl.

This is actually their all time favorite dialogue whenever vishaka calls herself as girl.

Vicky : okay okay guys. Jokes apart, rey I agree with vish this time. Kriya likes being with you. It's very clear on her face whenever she is around you. Go man.

Rey : I too want to go but these ladies don't have good opinions about me as you all know how they give wrong interpretation to my every behavior in front of mom. I don't want that in front of kriya.

Vicky : what rubbish? Do you think kriya will believe them.?

Rey : I know but still..why to spoil the party?

Bharat : abbe jana itna bhav kyun kharaha hai.

Neil : yes rey you must go. You 3 families are like one, very close. So go and be with kriya like swayam. There is nothing harm in that dude.

So finally after thinking so much, rey goes to swayam and kriya. As soon as kriya looks at rey, she gives wide smile and even swayam smiles at this gesture. All this didn't go unnoticed by the payal, ladies and their sons.

1 lady : ahh rey? Kriya I tell you, isse jara bachke rehna (pointing at rey in a teasing yet taunting tone)

Her son : yeah. He is too fast for you (and with that comment all boys (payal's friends sons) starts laughing)

Kriya : what do you mean? (She definitely didn't like it)

Rey : kriya (he wanted to stop her because he knew what comes next will be the worst comment on him than the earlier one)

Swayam just holds rey's hand behind kriya, indicating let her talk.

One of the guy from that gang : nothing kriya, he is way too cool dude of Mumbai. He is no match to you.

Kriya : really? (She was burning inside)

Another lady: payal do you know last month rey attended a vip party of spoiled brat son of a politician. He took selfie with some girls there who are very spoiled daughters of city's rich families.

One boy : yeah aunty that super model like daughter of businessman Mr mittal was tho all over rey in the party.

Payal felt really embarrassed.

Another lady (to her son): oh that girl you said she spents all nights out with boys daily.

Another lady : she likes rey too?

Another boy : not only her, few more girls are there who are rich and their parents don't restrict them for anything. Those girls are just party animals and daily finds new boys in the party to spend their time out. You know. That group is very famous in the city. Many boys take their advantage. Those girls too took selfie with rey.

Kriya : so what ?(lil irritated)

Everyone got little shocked. All ladies and boys tried to form wrong image of rey in kriya's mind but she is taking very coolly.

Kriya :(looking at all the boys) how do you know about VIP party? Did you all also attend it?

All the boys look at each other and their mom's sharp eyes too looked at their sons reaction.

Kriya : how do you know with whom rey took selfies? The famous girl's group, do you know them too? Just because rey took some selfies, he doesn't becomes one of them. And taking selfies is very common now a days. What's wrong in that? Did rey spent a night out with any of those girls? (She directly asks the question to boys, which was a little shock to payal rey swayam and the gang who is watching all this silently)

All the boys again looked at each other and their moms at them.

Kriya : no right? And that super model like girl, she was all over rey, not the other way right?

Again boys didn't have any answer to that and their moms were little embarrassed this time. To payal this whole thing is just a self realization. Self realization that why didn't she think like kriya about rey all this time? Why did she believe her friends opinion and comments on rey?

Kriya: guys grow up. Even if rey did all that, what's the problem to you? It's his life, he can do whatever he wants.

Swayam : ahh kriya nanu is calling let's go. Excuse me (saying this he drags kriya out from the scene. Rey stands with payal because he understood what's going on in her mind and he didn't like his mom feeling ashamed of herself for thinking so low about rey)

All the ladies and their sons too leave the scene saying they'll go grab some snacks.

Swayam : kriya calm down.

Kriya : what calm down? Don't you see how they accused rey?(still fuming)

Swayam (taking her to corner) : kriyaaa..(frustrated) I know. Even rey knew how all these ladies always manipulated rey's behavior outside and presented it in front of payal mom. But he loves payal mom too much to make her feel guilty of believing her friends more than him. He never listen to anyone in this matter.

Kriya : what nonsense. Jo jhoot hai that should come in front payal mom. Then only she won't misunderstand rey.

Swayam : I tried many times but every time rey stopped me saying payal mom only has this ladies gang as her friends. She spends her time with them and forgets her worries.

Kriya : aise friends hone se tho accha hai stay without friends.

Swayam : shut up kriya. Chod in sab baato ko. Rey too is upset. Just go and talk to him.

Rey (to payal) : mom kuch lengi aap?

Payal just hugs rey saying sorry. She cries lil bit then wiping her eyes says "I am really sorry rey. I believed them till today. Aaj kriya ne muje realize karaya that how wrong I was. I believed them over you, my own son, my blood"

Rey : shhh mom..(hugs her)just chill mom. Ye kriya bhi na, har waqt jansi ki rani kyun ban jati hai pata nahi.

Payal hits at his chest and says " don't say anything about her. Because of her many things are correcting between us"

Rey : but I don't like you to feel low mom.

Payal : but rey self realization doesn't comes without feeling guilty or low.

Rey : then I don't want your self realization or whatever it is.

Payal : shut up rey. Now don't get upset on kriya.

Rey : huh. Mom I think today she went little far. It was not needed when I, myself was not saying anything about all those comments.

Payal : rey. Come on she took your side and made me realize how wrong I was.

Rey : that's what I didn't want mom. What's the need. You'll leave all your friends now and starts to feel lonely. Which I didn't want. That's why I was taking all your friends taunts silently all these days. Who is this kriya to interfere in all our matters? (Rey was in bad mood, he didn't realize what he is saying and he definitely didn't know that kriya nanu swayam and the gang are listening this standing behind payal and him)

Payal : rey stop it beta. She is trying to do good to our family..

Rey : If this is how she is helping us then I don't want it mom. Smriti mom stays in Bangalore. Here you have only this ladies group to time pass and if you leave their group as well then you will definitely start feeling lonely. So what they don't have good opinions about me mom, atleast aap tho khush rehte in all these poojas and parties. Abb kya karoge mom? Tell me. When I dont have any problem with such nasty comments about me, who is she(kriya) to argue with them.?

Before payal could say anything

Swayam : who is "she"? You mean... who is kriya?

Rey and payal turned and got shocked seeing swayam kriya nanu and gang. Their expression clearly told in that moment that they heard everything and they are hurt. Kriya had tears in her eyes and she was standing like a statue. Swayam was glaring at rey.

Nanu : rey what did you say? (Before nanu can continue further or rey say something, swayam holds kriya's hand and takes her outside)

The whole gang was fuming at rey. Payal and nanu felt really bad for kriya. Nanu just says 1 sentence which made rey realize how much he had hurt everyone, specially kriya.

Nanu : I didn't expect this from you rey.

It was like a tight slap for rey. First time nanu said something against him and was upset.

Payal was about to say something but nanu stops her showing his hand, without looking at her and said

Nanu : we have guests to attend. I will go to my guests and you go to ladies.

Gang went and sat in one corner sadly. Rey stood alone at the center of the hall for few minutes and then went to have drinks. He was upset on himself now. In anger he blurted so many hurtful words against kriya. Everyone are upset because of him.

Outside in the garden.

Swayam took her outside in the garden and sat there on a bench. He gives her some time to come out of that shocked state. Once kriya takes deep breath wiping her tears

Swayam : you okay?

Kriya : hmm

Swayam : lets go to our house. After party let's pack your things.

Kriya chuckles : no. It's not right. I will stay here only.

Swayam : after listening to rey's words also you are saying this?

Kriya : this family needs us swayuu. Payal mom and rey unnecessarily created gap between them. I will try and make everything normal between them.

Swayam : are you mad kriya? After seeing rey's reaction also you want to correct everything between them?

Kriya : huh. Yes. Jo sahi hai, wo sahi hai.. whether rey likes it or not, he has to accept things. Jyada se jyada kya hoga? Rey will reject my proposal right? No problem. Family comes first to me. I will correct everything between rey and payal mom. They deserve the normal life. I am really getting shocked day by day knowing how much these two (rey and his mom) have created distance between each other.

Swayam looks at kriya silently without saying anything.

Kriya : what? Why are you looking at me like that.?

Swayam : no I was just thinking how much you have started liking rey within few days. You are ready to do anything for him, even ready to give up on him just to make everything alright in his life.

Kriya : what rubbish.? Nothing like that.

Swayam smiles and says "I know you since childhood kriya."

Kriya : okay..fine but just think swayam that guy (rey) is ready to go to any extent to keep his mom happy and busy all the time so that she can not feels lonely and sad. The girl would be lucky who will join this family.

Swayam : huh. And you think you're not that lucky girl?

Kriya : till today I had hope but now. .I don't consider myself as one of this family (rey - payal) member.

Swayam : you like him

Kriya : ha. No way

Swayam smiles

Kriya : what? Don't smile. Do you think I will leave him for hurting me? Never. (Wiping her tears) I hate him..suna tumne? I just hate him. (Saying this she puts her head on swayam's shoulder wiping her tears continuously..swayam gives her some time to control her emotions)

After few mins, kriya wiping her tears completely

Kriya: chalo .. Everyone must be worried. Let's enjoy the party.

When swayam and kriya enters the party all (nanu payal rey and the gang stood up, they were worried for kriya, it was clearly written on their face) kriya smiles at everyone and goes to nanu who was chatting with his friends. Seeing her smile, everyone understood kriya is okay now though she is hurt. Nanu introduced her to his friends. She spends some time with them and then she goes to payal. Kriya was trying hard to behave normal forgetting her emotions and the incident. Everyone got it by now. Somehow party goes smoothly there after. The gang tries to chear up kriya and every time, she laughs and gives satisfied reaction to everyone as if she is really happy and enjoying. But everyone knew how much rey's words have hurt kriya. Rey watches everything silently sitting at bar. He didn't go to his gang or to kriya or anyone else. He thought why to remind them the incident by going in front of them.


Edited by smileysmi - 9 years ago
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Hello my lovely people. I am sorry I couldn't update early this time as well. Here is the next update. Hope you guys like it. Enjoy.

Part 27:

Morning kriya wakes up and gets ready quickly to go and check on Rey. When she enters rey's room after knocking for couple of times, she saw Rey sleeping peacefully on his stomach. He was still on last night's party dress except he had removed the jacket and was on white button down shirt and sky blue faded jeans. Kriya doesn't feels like waking him up so she left the room closing the door.

When kriya goes down, she feels little confused to see swayam, nanu and payal sitting on sofa in living room. The worry and sadness was visible on their faces. When they look at her, they all stand up looking at each other nervously.

Kriya going to them says "good morning. What's the matter? Why are you all looking so worried?"

Payal asks her "are you fine kriya? "

Kriya doesn't gets where exactly it's going. So she just nods.

Swayam was about to ask something, nanu speaks, "kriya we heard that Rey was little violent last night. Did you go to him or spoke to him at night?"

This is nanu. No nonsense or running around the bush. Direct questions. Always.

Kriya now understood why all looked so tensed. So she says "yeah. I spoke to him last night and yeah I was with him"

Swayam feels proud of her answer and says "did you able to manage him well?"

Kriya gets confused by his words but still nods her head. She looks at nanu, he too has the same proud smile on his face. But at the moment kriya doesn't want to initiate any serious conversation with anyone. Because she wanted to be there with Rey when he wakes up. Last night's outburst was huge thing for Rey. She wanted to be with him to make sure he is doing fine emotionally. So she says "if you all don't mind I will take some coffee for Rey.?"

The trio just nods their head giving her sad smile. While kriya was going to kitchen she hears their conversation and then she understands nanu and swayam's presence and their expressions.

Nanu : see payal, I told you yesterday night, kriya will handle rey, don't worry. She is very matured for her age.

Swayam: Jo kaam hum log itne saalo mein nahi kar paye the, kriya ne ek hi baar mein kar dhikayi. Wow.

Payal : haan but that doesn't justify rey's behavior. Why does he behaves so violently some times? Poor kriya, she had to face such an horrible act.

Nanu : payal everyone will have their own way of removing their frustrations. And it is Rey's way. We can't blame him.

Payal : I don't know Papa(nanu). I just want Rey to stop his this stupid stunts. Otherwise it will scare kriya and she definitely doesn't deserve such an act from Rey.

Kriya fumes in the kitchen while making coffee. Payal's sentences angered her. But she understood the sensitivity of the matter. Kriya decides she will resolve this misunderstanding between rey and payal mom as soon as possible. Rey has already punished and tortured himself emotionally for so many years which he doesn't deserve so it's best to solve the issue as early as possible. Doesn't matter how angry rey gets because of this on kriya.

When kriya comes out with two cups of coffee for herself and Rey, nanu payal and swayam stops talking and looks at her. Kriya going towards them says "don't blame rey simply for his actions. Without any strong reason, no one behaves like that. (Looking at payal) And don't think that Rey feels happy or relieved after such strong outburst. Such acts are usually outcome of internal bottled up emotions which torture the person all the time". Kriya looks at nanu and swayam for few seconds before leaving and going towards Rey's room.

Rey was still sleeping on his stomach peacefully. Kriya keeps the coffee mugs on side table and sits next to rey's sleeping form. Gently pushing back the hair from rey's forehead, kriya calls his name to wake him up. Rey slowly wakes up and says 'good morning' to kriya. To which she just smiles and gives coffee mug to Rey.

Rey : give me just 2 mins kriya I will brush my teeth and come. I don't have anything in the morning before brushing.

Saying that Rey runs to washroom and as he said he comes back after couple of minutes feeling fresh and see kriya is holding her coffee mug and just staring at it. She was thinking something deeply. Rey clears his throat and kriya looks at him pushing her thoughts away. She gives rey his mug.

Rey taking the mug, sits next to kriya and says "I am fine kriya. Don't worry".

Kriya just gives sad smile and says " I don't believe that no one has tried to find out what's the reason of your such outbursts all these years. I mean no one thought that 'oh may be something is bothering him'..I mean itne sare close friends but no one guessed it.. strange". She was still in deep thought.

Rey says " that's because I never gave a chance for them to think other than the reason 'because mom is hurt I am hurting myself'. I never allowed anyone to come near me in such situations. I never expressed anything to anyone about my inner trauma till now. I don't blame anyone for that kriya"

Kriya shaking her head, denies what rey said and says "still Rey. Aise react Insaan tabhi Karta hai jab uske deemaag mein bahot Kuch chal Raha ho. Something very deeply bothers someone then only they react like that. Yeh tho common sense ki baat hai." She is angry on everyone for not trying to understand why rey behaves so violently some times.

Rey understanding her emotions says " that's okay kriya. I used to behave very rudely to them whenever they tried to make me understand what I am doing is wrong. And I always used to be quite with them for few days after such an act"

Kriya becomes more upset and says " that's what rey. That is what my point. They all tried to tell you what you are doing is not good instead of trying to know what's the reason behind your such act." She looks more than disappointed with everyone now.

Rey now got her point and somewhere he too feels kriya is right. No one tried hard to know the reason, instead they just blamed him. But he pushes that thought.

Kriya asks taking the mug from rey "when was the last time you did oil massage to your head?"

"What?" Rey gets confused why such a sudden random question.

Kriya smiles and says " seriously Rey your hair needs oil massage. They have become so dry and rough. I am sure you use lot of gels or hair spray regularly. They have damaged totally"

Rey couldn't take this comment and says " excuse me? My hair have become rough and dry? Mine? (Dramatically, pointing his index finger at himself) Wow. I take care of them the most. And what do you mean by 'have become rough and dry?' you don't even know how were my hair before. Maybe they are always like this"

"You mean always your hair is rough and dry only?" Kriya asks in a challenging tone.

"What? No.. my hair is not damaged. They are in good condition. I don't need any oil massage. Ewww" says Rey annoyed.

Kriya simply stands up taking both mugs and starts leaving the room and before going out of the door says "be ready. I am getting some oil for your hair"

"No I don't want oil massage kriya." Rey complains seeing kriya's determination. He knew kriya will not leave him today before applying oil to his head.

"No arguments Rey. Change your shirt. I will warm up some oil and get it for you." Saying she leaves this time.

Kriya takes oil from her room while going down to kitchen. She warms up quite a generous amount of oil in a bowl. When she is passing through the living room to go upstairs, swayam who was still there with nanu and payal, asks "kriya, umm how's rey?"

Swayam got the point that kriya is angry on them. May be they, payal or him, are somewhere responsible for Rey's such outbursts or they might have failed to understand why rey behaves like that.

Kriya in serious tone says " yeah he is fine". She expects swayam's next question but swayam just stands there looking at kriya, trying to understand what's she thinking?, why she is behaving so distant and cold with him? Did he do something to hurt rey because of which Rey behaves so violently some times ? His chain of thoughts were intrupted by kriya, who says hesitantly " umm excuse me, the hair oil is getting cold, can I go if you don't have anything else to ask?"

This formal behavior of kriya hurts swayam. First time kriya is shutting him off like this. Swayam just nods his head first then asks "can I meet Rey?". Kriya just nods her head and starts going to rey's room. Swayam just follows her.

Rey was working on his laptop when kriya enters his room. Kriya says " rey go and change the shirt. Quick." Rey looking at her says "no way kriya. I am not gonna take oil massage to my hair. It will be sticky sticky." To which kriya just stares at him putting both of her hands on her waist. It was clear message that he doesn't have a choice. Sighing loudly rey closes his laptop and changes his shirt. When rey sits on the couch, where kriya is waiting for him, he looks at the door and see swayam standing there leaning on the door frame.

Rey becomes hesitant, knowing very well why swayam is present at his house today morning, but still says his good morning to him. Swayam just nods his head and take a chair and sits Infront of rey .

Swayam slowly says " look I know, I mean I got it now(looking at kriya for few moments, who has started applying oil to Rey's head standing behind him and then looking back at Rey) that I am responsible or at least I am involved somewhere behind the reason why you behave some times like that. But I really don't know exactly how or what did I do. So can you please explain this time.. ?". Swayam looks between rey and kriya, trying to understand their reaction or their facial expression at least for some clue. Rey becomes stiff at swayam's question which didn't go unnoticed by swayam but kriya's reaction was totally confusing. She just continued applying hair as if she didn't hear what did swayam say.

Actually kriya understood, when swayam asked "how's rey?" that swayam got it kriya is angry on him or blames him indirectly regarding Rey's situation. So she expected him to pull his act at least now.

Rey composing himself slowly says "no dude. You or anybody for that matter, is not at all responsible for my such behavior. I take the full responsibility."

Kriya pulls Rey's hair little roughly while massaging, when she heard Rey's reply. Ray hisses in response. Kriya without any care continued massaging roughly and says " the knots in your hair are so old that they won't be freed so easily." Rey turning back to face kriya, glares at her. He knows clearly that kriya is telling about Rey's stubbornness that he is now also not expressing the real reason. Kriya glaring back at Rey with equal or even more intensity, turns his head straight, facing at swayam and continues applying oil little roughly only. Few moments no one says anything. Then kriya mumbles "I wish instead of patiencely smoothing and massaging your hair, I just could take a clipper and shave off all the stubborn hair completely".

Rey looks back at kriya horrified, turning his head completely to her. Swayam just coughs at this statement controlling his amusement at the situation. Swayam understood now that kriya is talking about Rey's stubbornness implying it at the hair massage task. Kriya again turns Rey's head back facing swayam and starts pouring large amount of oil on rey's head which results in leakage of oil on rey's forehead in few directions. Rey totally annoyed gets up saying "kriyaa" but kriya pushes Rey's shoulder to make him sit back in his original position and starts massaging seriously. Again no one says anything for couple of minutes which results in crossing kriya's patience level completely this time. She pushes Rey's head annoyed and says " are you going to open up at least now?"

Rey sighs again and turning to her says "it's not easy yaar kriya. I can't share it so easily with any other person (except you)."

Kriya with stern tone says "why not? You are not expressing your feelings to complete stranger here. I am telling you to share it with your closest friend"

Rey looks at swayam feeling defeated. He doesn't understand how can he repeat all those things to swayam when he knows very well that swayam will be mad and he will drag rey to payal mom and clears the misunderstanding. Then at that moment rey realizes, was the misunderstanding worth it? He knew it's not true in his heart. He knows very well that his mom doesn't blame him for his dad's death. Then why did he behave like that for all those years? Rey's thoughts were intrupted when kriya grabs Rey's hair roughly with her both hands and shake his head roughly.

Rey cried (not literally) this time shouting " kriya". Rey stands up turning to her completely which he regrets the moment he looks at her face. She was angry, it was clear by her look but her eyes had tears, which stirs something within rey. The feeling was very strong. Kriya was crying for all Rey's emotions and what he expressed last night to her. He never had someone, who felt his emotional struggle along with him and goes through the same stupid emotional pain as a result. Rey slowly turning to swayam, who was also standing by now, expressed everything.

Swayam didn't fail Rey's expections, once after rey is done with his side of the story, swayam stood there stunned for few moments looking at Rey, then blinking his tears few times, as expected, swayam dragged rey (literally) to payal mom and confronted everything in the presence of nanu and the gang. Yes the gang also got the news at night from swayam about Rey's outburst and though rey never used to talk to them for few days after his such outbursts, but the whole gang used to be present next morning just to check on Rey. Today was also no different.

For next hour or so rey stood there witnessing Payal's outburst. She cried a lot which resulted in rey glaring at kriya in turn the whole gang glaring at Rey with double intensity. Finally rey stood defeated, allowing payal to shout at him for blaming himself so stupidly all those years. Finally when rey thought the whole situation is settled to some extent, when payal sits down on sofa and starts sobbing silently, smriti enters the house. Which resulted in one more round of scolding session from payal Infront of smriti, expressing his stupidity to smriti. Finally nanu and smriti are able to manage payal and make her calm. Rey goes and sits on his knees infront of payal, holding his ears. Which came to the perfect closure for all the emotional struggle rey and payal went through because of Rey's misunderstanding, when payal hugs him and cries, later composing herself finally.


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I am back again with the new update. I am sorry for the delay. Hope you guys like this update.

Part 26:

The gang and swayam and nanu were leaving. Rey payal and nanu were talking while coming out of the house so the gang dragged kriya to the corner.

"Are you really all right kriya? If you want, you can come with me right now you know?" Swayam says to kriya. He is worried about her.

"Exactly dude how can you forgive Rey so easily?" Vishaka adds.

"Exactly. It's not like we didn't want you to forgive Rey but the way he behaved today we thought it will take sometime for you to forgive him" Vicky says confused.

Kriya smiles sadly at them and says "when somebody close to your heart hurts you the most and immediately asks sorry realizing their mistake then we need to forgive them because when they realize their mistake, it's them who are suffering more than you. Guilt eats to the extent that they starts creating distance from every one. In such situation it's our responsibility to stop dragging the issue by forgiving them."

"So you forgot what all he said about you so easily?" Vicky asks seriously.

"No. It will take some time for me to forget those words of rey but he has realized that how much his words have hurt me. So that's fine for me" says kriya.

Before anyone would say further, they see Rey approaching them so they drop the matter.

Once everyone left kriya went up to her room giving some time to mother and son duo. She herself needed some time alone.

Kriya after changing into night dress and out off all make up, stood at the open window from where the cooling air was coming. She thought about all the moments with Rey since her mom told her about the proposal. Kriya for the first time realizes that she is depending on someone for the first time in life. So much that his little anger filled words are hurting so much for the first time. For kriya it's not new that her friends or her mom or even swayam many times had hurt her in anger. And she always knew that it was their anger speaking so she never took them to heart. Kriya always try to correct things in her closed ones life so in that process many times it happened that she forcefully stopped them doing some stupid mistakes or interfered when they didn't want her to so it always ended up with some hurtful words towards kriya from them in anger. But she didn't mind because she knew once their anger vanishes they will realize their mistake.

But with Rey it's different. It's affecting her more which is disturbing her a lot at the moment. When kriya recalled rey's words, tears starts to flow silently from her eyes. She let them flow. She was so deeply involved in her own thoughts and confusions, she didn't observe Rey entering her room and seeing her state and then leaving silently.

It was only after couple of minutes, kriya shockingly becomes alert when she heard something crashing sound. She rushes out of her room wiping her tears and finds more throwing things sounds coming from the next closed door, from rey's room. Kriya runs to his door and before she knocks on the door, more breaking things sounds comes followed by loud frustrated growl.

Kriya stands there stunned by his painful sound. This time composing fast she knocks on the door. And observes that inside every thing becomes silent in reaction to her knock. For few long moments no crushing of things or rey's voice or any movement inside the room. Kriya knocks again.

"Go away" ...those two painful words were enough for kriya to understand rey's state at the moment.

Kriya without wasting time, ignoring his words knocks again and says "open the door Rey.."

"No"

"Please"

"No. Go please"

" sorry I won't..(after a long pause) I can't"

Kriya doesn't get any reply but after few seconds door opening sound comes. It was just unlocking sound of door. Kriya opens the door and enters to see the disaster in the room. Every possible/available glass things were crashed and the room floor is covered with glass pieces everywhere. Kriya went out of room and enters again with broom and starts cleaning the floor but soon a hand stops her by holding her wrist. It is then kriya looks at rey's eyes which have become red with anger and self loath. Kriya wipes her tears fast with other hand and try to release her hand from rey's grip.

"You don't have to clean this mess" Rey whispers. His eyes too have tears now.

"I know but I don't want others to witness this. Let me do this" kriya whispers back.

Rey leaves her hand and clutches his hair in fist cursing frustratingly. When kriya try to start cleaning again Rey holds her wrist again and says "I will do it later. That's fine."

Kriya throws the broom and holds his hand drags him to his bed then makes him sit by pushing his shoulder.

"Just sit here. Give me couple of minutes. Let me clean it. Don't argue please. I really don't want anyone to know this. Please" kriya says slowly making sure Rey took her each words and understood.

"Every one knows" Rey says looking at the opposite wall instead of kriya.

Kriya was little taken back by this revelation. That means Rey has reacted like this before also. No. Scratch that, it means he reacts like this in hard situations.

Rey opens his mouth to say further but kriya cuts him off saying "but no need for others to know this now onwards. Let me take care of this mess..please"

Kriya notices drops of blood on few glass pieces. Her body freezes for a moment but wiping her tears she first locks the door from inside and then she starts cleaning the floor. While cleaning she find many glass pieces with blood, ignoring them she rushes and cleans the floor quickly. Then she brings first aid kit from bathroom and sits next to Rey, who was sitting on bed looking down, elbows on his thighs.

Kriya puts her hand on shoulder, first Rey doesn't looks at her but after few seconds turning his head opposite side wipes his eyes and then turns to kriya giving a sad smile.
Kriya without saying anything takes his hand and starts cleaning with cotton.

"When dad died, all I heard was mom saying she was also supposed to go with dad to Kolkata and they had planned that after meeting, mom and dad will visit my mom's parents house and stay there for couple of days. And mom said she couldn't go with dad because... Because.. I ...I...had fever.."

Kriya was shocked to hear this. She didn't know about this because no one discussed the death after a month of that incident. Of course they cried missing their dads but no talking about the incident. It was unspoken rule.

Rey continued "mom and dad never took me to mom's house in Kolkata. Because my grandpa, who was the only person in mom's life passed away a year after mom and dad's wedding. So whenever dad used to have meetings in Kolkata, mom went along to visit grandpa's house there. And they used to leave me in nanu's house with swayam. So when dad died mom said if she had gone with dad and as planned, they stayed back, then dad would have not left us."

Kriya hugs Rey tightly. She couldn't control the emotions. Rey is going through so much. It hurts her. Rey continued "mom couldn't go with dad because of me..I am...responsible for...her...loss...because of me...she is been suffering.. I..I...really don't know kriya... I don't know what can I do to make her happy again in life..I don't know kriya..I am really a worst son any mom could have, who is the reason for his dad's death"

Kriya pulls herself away from hug and this time she cups Rey's face with her hands and says "don't allow all these negativity to enter your head. You are not responsible for anything. They are destined to go from our life. So they left. No one is responsible for that. And you are the best son any mom could have. Ask swayam, today only I said him, how much you love your mom for whom you are ready to take any insults from her friends. She is very lucky to have you as son. "

Rey cuts her words, removing kriya's hands, stands up and says frustrated "no kriya. I am doing all this just not to make her more miserable in life. Whatever I do kriya, I can't bring that happiness back again in her life. It's impossible. And that frustrates me every time I look at her. My mom's playfulness, carefree personality has gone with dad. I can't bring that back. That's why I don't want to hurt her in any way."

That explains rey's hurtful words towards kriya in the party. Kriya makes him sit again and starts cleaning his hands silently. Once it's done, kriya says "I will correct everything in this family Rey but you have to trust me for that."

"Don't.. Just don't hurt mom kriya..I will go out of control whenever somebody hurts her. I have already caused so much of pain in her life unknowingly. Don't want others to say or do anything hurtful in her life. I am just protecting her. I know I have hurt you today. It was not your mistake, I over reacted. But i can't help it."

"I don't care how you react against my actions but I will do the damage control very soon."

"Don't make me hurt you again."

" doesn't matter. This family's happiness is my priority now "

" you want me to feel guilty for hurting you as well? "

"I don't know but at the end, you and payal mom will be happy and that's all matters to me"

Rey turns to kriya who is sitting on his bed. Goes and sits next to her. Her determination is clearly evident in her words. Which definitely gave him little hope that his mom can be happy again like smriti mom but for that to happen all the buried incidents have to come out. Rey's guilt has to come in front of his mom which will hurt both for sure.. So he turns to kriya and holds her hands in his and says "please kriya. I request you let it be. I will not be able to take it, mom will be hurt (because as he grown up he has understood that his mom doesn't hates him or blames him for his dads death. But he is still unable to accept it and thinks he is the reason for his dad's death)"

Kriya giving him slight sad smile says "I will be there with you. I will be there for payal mom"

Rey stands up again. Facing his back to kriya says "you are not understanding kriya. Let it go..please"

Kriya stands up and hugs Rey from behind and says "I will be there for you Rey..trust me.. Even if you hate me, doesn't matter, i will be there for you, till you and payal mom comes out of this mess".

Rey sighs. He understood now that he can't stop kriya. Hell he doesn't know what's cooking in her mind. But one thing she is repeating which Rey has noticed. At least he wants to clear that. So he turns around by making kriya to release him from hug. Facing kriya, he asks directly

"What do you mean by 'even if I hate you'? You are saying it repeatedly today."

Kriya doesn't respond instead just looks down. When Rey said hurtful things about her in party, she took it as Rey hates her now even though she knew he was just angry, doesn't hates her. But even the thought of rey hating her making kriya emotional. It's hurting her a lot but she herself doesn't know why is she thinking like that.

Rey holds kriya's chin gently and makes her look at him and says "do you think I can start hating you so easily? Do you really think I can hate you?"

Kriya so wanted to say ' no' but instead she says " I don't know " looking into his eyes.

Rey cups her face and rubs his thumbs on her cheeks gently. After few moments says " I can't kriya. I just can't hate you. You have given me so much in past few days. Taught me so much. Giving different direction to my life. How can I hate you?"

Before kriya could stop herself, words comes out next "then why did you say 'who am I'?"

Rey smiles at this, continuing caressing her cheeks with his thumbs says " was angry. Sorry. Huh. Please kriya don't hurt mom. I don't want to say or do something which will hurt you again.. Let it go"

Kriya got it that this whole thing will not stop any soon if she continues talking to Rey. It's waste to tell him to trust her. So kriya says "good night Rey. Have some rest now". With that she steps back from his holds and turns around to leave but Rey turns her back by her shoulder and hugs her tightly. Putting his chin on kriya's shoulder says "I trust you kriya. Really. But the thing is I don't trust myself when I become angry. My actions and words will be very harsh. I don't want to hurt you again. I don't want to see mom crying again. These are years of piled up emotions for mom. Can't change them so easily. Can't start controlling my actions in this matter so easily. I am sorry. I have hurt you today. I didn't mean to." Saying this Rey hugs kriya again breathing on her neck. When kriya starts stroking his back slowly with her fingers, he nuzzles below her ear with his nose. Kriya stops stroking his back and gulps at his action. After few seconds Rey feels kriya's stiff posture and realizes what was he doing. Slowly he pulls away from hug and looks at kriya's face. Kriya looks at him blinking few times then looks away. But Rey observes a slight blush on her cheek which makes him smile.

After a few seconds when kriya starts to leave again, Rey holds her wrist but kriya doesn't turn back,

"I think now you know I don't hate you".

Kriya smiles and says " good night Rey." And without looking back leaves smiling Rey.

Done..hope many of you got the answers to your questions now. If not please feel free to express it. I won't mind.

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Recap :

Everyone becomes excited. Kriya was hesitant

Kriya : iski kya jaroorat hai. Seriously it's not needed.

Before payal or nanu could say anything,

Rey : why? I only came to bangaluru for two days but still you people arranged a nice party to welcome me. Why can't we celebrate your arrival to Mumbai?

Kriya didn't know what to reply.

Everyone started talking about party preparations. Rey was continuously staring at kriya. She was again nervous feeling his stares which didn't go unnoticed by rey. He knew something has changed today between him and kriya. Their equation has changed. Kriya has changed today towards rey. A better change. A positive change. What amused him the most was, without their much involvement, these changes happened between them today.

Part 23:

When the guest's list and other things were finalized, they took the last thing which was food. Discussion started about which caterer to finalize. Rey and swayam suggested few restaurants saying they are best caterers. Kriya was confused

Kriya : but I am not getting why are you suggesting other hotels

Swayam : matlab?

Kriya : matlab why don't you guys considering amar's restaurant. ?

Everyone becomes silent at this kriya's question and started looking at amar.

Rey(hesitant) : kriya amar is our friend. We dont want to embarrass him by making him work at our parties.

Kriya : what rubbish. Why will amar work in party. His restaurant workers will come and arrange everything.

Swayam : but kriya

Kriya : but wut kuch nahi. Apne ghar ki restaurant hote hue why should we give business to other restaurant.? Think positive guys. What is there to embarrass amar. Having restaurant is also a type of business not something embarrassing job. Amar is also an entrepreneur. Khud ki business hai.

Amar : actually I always thought why swayam and rey dont consider me for catering. They always have meetings or conferences or office parties where they order food from restaurants.

Kriya : see (looking at Rey and swayam accusively)

Nanu : we are sorry amar beta but we all thought it would be little awkward for you. We didn't know how to order at your restaurant. We were worried how will you take it. Ye khayal tho always we had in our mind.

Kriya : dekha baat karne se aur express karne se hi problems clear hote hai. Huh. Elders..haa(in a dramatic way to which rey smiles and swayam shakes his head)

Nanu : daadi ma(to kriya) if you are done with your drama can we discuss the menu with amar?

Everyone laughs. Kriya making sad face says "okay".

Swayam : what is there to decide?

Rey: exactly Amar knows what we all usually like in parties so he will decide himself.

Amar : no no. I want to be little professional in these matters. You guys have to tell me the items to be prepared.

Payal : huh kids have really grown up now papa (nanu). Amar do one thing since this is the first time I want you to prepare all your restaurant's special dishes or chef's special dishes. And bill us how you does with others. Don't hesitate. Business means business, no personal emotions in that okay?

Amar : don't worry aunty I am gonna get frequent business from you all if people like my restaurant food in the party so I would definitely like to impress people with my food in this party.

Finally deciding on everything regarding the party, all left saying to meet in the morning at rey's place where party would happen.

Kriya changed to night dress and just sat on Window panel looking outside, her phone rings. It was smriti's call. At the same time rey also enters with two mugs of coffee.

Kriya : hello mom. How are you?

Smriti doesn't answer.

Kriya: kya hua mom aap abhi tak soye nahi. It's too late.

Smriti : hmm

Kriya : missing me? (Kriya already had tears in her eyes though she is smiling and rey was observing each expression of kriya closely sitting in front of kriya)

Smriti started crying. Kriya understood her state.

Smriti : swayu called me when you left his house.

Kriya got it what swayam must have expressed.

Kriya (gulping her cry) : hmm

Kriya just listened to smriti silently looking at rey who was sitting just infront of her and observing her keenly. After talking for a long time,

Kriya : mom go to sleep..it's too late. And stop over thinking about me. I will talk to swayam also tomorrow on this.

Smriti : you okay? (Though kriya didn't cry on phone but smriti can sense her daughter's emotions)

Kriya was silent for few seconds and then again " go to bed mom..It's too late..good night"

Smriti understanding kriya's emotions says "good night. .take care".

Once the call ended, rey got up to leave because he thought kriya needs some personal space now. But kriya held his hand making him stop. He looked at kriya's hand holding on him and sat opposite to her like before.

Kriya without leaving his hand : do you remember rey what I said the day I came here? (Rey was just observing her tear filled eyes) I said I felt so many emotions that day when I was leaving Bangalore, (looking at rey's eyes) felt them for the first time (pause for few moments then slowly whispers) felt those emotions because of you.

When slowly kriya left his hand and wipes a lone tear from her eye,

Rey : kriya

Before rey could say further, kriya says "today felt the same way again"

Rey is little confused now.

Kriya : when leaving Bangalore I...I felt like..I am leaving my house and my family there for forever. It will not be my house here after.

Rey hugged her immediately. Kriya clutching his shirt tightly says "today also felt the same way when i was leaving swayam's house".

Rey now understood everything. While leaving swayam's house, swayam came till the rey's car holding kriya close to him. And when kriya was about to sit in the car, she looked back at the house and then at nanu and swayam to which swayam hugged kriya tightly and nanu was caressing kriya's head. Payal too had tears in her eyes.

All thought it's just there bonding but rey now understood how kriya and her family, swayam nanu felt today and how everyone in Bangalore must be feeling since kriya left.

Rey slowly releasing kriya from hug and cupping her face says "kriya I understood your emotions but I am really not getting what to say. All I can say is I want to become selfish in this situation. I am sorry"

Kriya : what you mean?

Rey : means if you think I will let you go back because of all this rona dona then forget it. Because I won't.

It took few moments for kriya to take what he said. She just punches him on his stomach saying "so insensitive"

Rey smiles holding his stomach where she had hit him. Rey got what he wanted. Smile on kriya's face.

Rey : kriya

Hmm?

Seriously I don't want to let you go back.

Kriya doesn't say anything. She just smiles.

Rey : I will make you call this as your house

Now kriya frowns

Rey : not only that, I will make sure your family also start calling this as kriya's house very soon.

Kriya got rey's words now. He didn't say it directly but kriya got the meaning.



Morning

Kriya was arranging breakfast on dining table everyone came except amar and swayam. Rey knew amar might be busy in his restaurant.

Rey : where is swayam?

Vicky : I called him he said nanu and him are going somewhere they will come after sometime.

All had breakfast discussing the preparations to be done for the evening party. Kriya left to her room as everyone strictly told her to rest till the evening, no need to do anything.

After couple of hours when almost all the arrangements are done, all went to kriya's room to check on her, thinking she might be bored. All got shocked seeing the kriya's room condition. All kriya's clothes are scattered on bed, chair and sofa. And she is now digging her jewelry collection and checking them closely.

Rey : beta kriya (sweetly)

All hid their laugh.

Kriya without looking at them says " hmm" still continuing checking jewelry

All smiled at this. Rey this time little loud

Rey : kriya what are you doing?

Kriya looks at them finally and says in a defeated tone "you guy's are waste. No use at all"

All shocked at this statement and looked at each other.

Kriya : not at all thinking to help me in selecting a dress for me to wear for the party. Meri gang hoti tho ab tak they would've selected everything.

Rey doesn't react to this because he was blank and so exhausted to have argument with kriya right now.

Vishaka : dude wear something you are comfortable in. Why are you thinking so much.

Neil : you have so many dresses, wear something you like (looking at all the clothes in room)

Kriya : what.? How can you guy's take it so easily. And it's not easy to decide on dress yar.

Rey : it's not difficult either (finally getting irritated with kriya's drama)

Kriya : rey aap tho chup hi raho. You just pass the comments. And kya kaha aapne? It's not difficult to decide on dress? Seriously? Here I am thinking whether to wear Indian dress or western? Simple one or grand one? (And then went on her never ending criteria for deciding a dress for party)

Rey shouts "stop"

Kriya angrily glaring at him stops saying further.

Rey : wear...anything. ..you..like (pressing each word loud and clear)

Kriya fumes but controlling her anger asks in a same tone as rey used : Indian or western?

Rey shuts his eyes for a moment and says "Indian"

Kriya : grand or simple? (In challenging tone)

Rey : grand (gritting his teeth)

Kriya unaffected by his anger thinks for a moment then says "nanu's friends and payal moms friends are coming to the party. If I wear grand dress, dont they think I got ready very brightly for the evening party?"

Rey (controlling his anger) : okay wear simple one then.

Kriya : haww the party is for me and you are telling me to get ready in simple dress? (Making sad face)

All get shocked at kriya's behavior and rey was about to burst on kriya, swayam comes puts his hand on rey's shoulder controlling him.

Swayam to kriya : oye drama queen. Stop your nautanky and take this (giving a bag to kriya) your party dress.

Kriya : you bought it for me swayu (beaming with joy and excitement)

Swayam : obviously I knew your all this act so bought it before coming here..

Kriya : thank you swayu.. (looking at rey) see ye hoti hai help karna. Just goorne se ya chillane se kuch nahi hota.

Rey to swayam : stop pampering her so much. You spoiled her completely. Saying this he leaves the room enjoying fuming kriya and her shouting from the room.

Kriya(shouts at leaving rey) : what do you mean by that rey? Am I spoiled one? Fine but I am better than you. Ek dress final nahi karpaye mere liye. Kehne ke liye tho cool dude but jab dekho sirf gussa gussa gusaa. Akadu singh. I hate you.


Rey went down smiling and sits next to payal.

Payal : what's that shouting?

Rey : chill mom. She is just angry.

Payal : and you are smiling here?

Rey : I love irritating her. Get used to it..saying this he goes to check on arrangements going on in the house..

Payal smiles at rey's words.


How's it guys. I lost the touch I know. But please do tell me u our opinion.


Edited by smileysmi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey gals. Hope you remember me :D.. okay first of all sorry for not updating any of my works. Actually I came to india on vacation in June and because of some reasons I had to stay back or move back to india permanently so again after couple of months when my vacation period was ending I had to go back to USA and pack everything there and come back to india saying tata bye bye to USA. Huh so after coming here I had to setup my apartment from scratch like interior to buying all furnitures to household things as I had desposed each and everything before going to USA. So it took all these months. I am really sorry people. .I missed IF. I visited sometimes but I couldn't follow any stories or anything. Now also I am hardly getting time but whatever time I get I would like to use it to continue my stories. But I can't follow any stories sorry to all of them who sent me pms regarding their story updates..

So can I continue my stories? Starting with mpk?


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