FF help (both KR n SS fan do see)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys,
as u know m a writer and now need help from u all.. i m writing a story and it's in both KR n SS version.

KR version: Forever, Jab tak saans hai'
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4166856

SS version: Hamesha Till the end..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4166860

Now, Problem is that, i m not getting idea how to expand the story, i know what's gonna happen next, but i want to show more cozy n fighting moments of the leads... so i want u guys to help me. post ur ideas in the comment and i will use it in my FF with some editing n highlights. i will use each n every suggestion u post and make my FF more interesting...

Thanking u,

Love
Shirisha😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shiru I don't remember the plot... Send me the link of KR one... I'll read n then post my idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
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swaron wala thosa sa dificult ha but ap dikha sakte ho swayam apne ap ko hurt kare ... sharon ka bossy type
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hmm..
Kr vale mein thodi c or fight dikha... Show kria still ignoring rey... Situation ko drag kar or rey ko kahin bahar bus trip pe bhej n then gang kria ko realise karaye ki vo rey ko galat samjh ri thi n tab tak on the other show rey setting up a proper living for kria so that jab vo kria ko kahe ki aab vo azaad hai n usse koi prblm nai ho gi aage ki life n usne sab kuch settle kar dia hai... Fir kria can do something to make up between them... Kuch aisa dikha de...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey!
KR wale mein u can drag a bt with kriya ignoring rey...
Den kriya relives d past moments through a video or pictures or smthng...n is waiting for rey to return n ask him to give her a chance to start off a fresh note...meanwhile rey plans to work late to give kriya sm more space...n he doesnt give kriya a chance to speak n makes assumptions dat she wants him gone...naturally with rey being absent, the attention showered on her is absent too...she misses him n goes to his office to talk to him...he sees her there n gets happy bt scolds her for coming alone late at nyt...n kriya realizes dat she never lost d guy she met in her clg...

Sappy hai... I knw...bt abhi ye hi aya dimaag mein...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maybe u can show Kriyaansh lost past n some beautiful memories of theirs...
Slowly Kriya can see Rey's P.O.V n try to forgive him

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