Taarey ss: unforgotten love(updated on page 40) - Page 5

Interesting prologue

nice and interesting start

Oh my god...u all rox...awesome response..thats y we say taarey rox...

Love u all who read and commented and liked..

Chapter 2

Kriya is with sharon..

Sharon-hows u

Kriya-fine..

Sharon-i dont think so...

Kriya-wat

Sharon -yes..u seeem to be soo dul

Kriya-nothin like that

Sharon-bolna..anything wrong with u and rey(hoping she would get the answer she expectd)dont lie to me

Kriya-reys acting too weird,,nowqadays...after i go..i donno wat happened..i just noe he fell in love with taani...but,..now..he has completely changed...

Sharon-isliye???

Kriya-hmm

Sharon-do something that may imnpress himm...like he used to like the way taani used be..the dresss.her hairstyle...everything...

Kriya -wat

Sharon-yea

Kriya-(tot of something and then went)-bye sharon gtg..bye and thanks(she ran)

Sharon-uff!mera kaam toh asan kar diya isne...i hope my plan works..and sorry kriya for using u in this..im really sorry...i would not have don all this..but i could have said everything to everyone but sometimes promises tie u into so many difficulties...

...

In canteen

(all r eating)

Nil-(suddenly)-thu..chi..wat dirty sandwich is this..bohut thika

Vicky-haan yaar...yeh samosa bhi

Simmi- i hate coffee nowadays

Amar-haan yaal

Bharat-abe..yeh sandwich ka taste kharab ho gaya hain

Swayam-stop complaining guys ..be happy...

Nil-chup kar swayam-i miss my taanis sandwich..how delicious it was

Vicky-haan yaar

Simmi-im to missing her coffee

Nil-dont u think wat we did to her is wrong

Vicky-ven i think so..

Rini- we taunt diyas..we scolded..heer.we made her lonely

Amr-jaan yaal...i miss gher...

Bharat-uff...main na uske sandwich ko miss kar rshi hun

Nil-if i met her once..i would fall upon her legs and beg for mercy

By this time swayam was in tears...all saw it...vicky tot of changing the topic and said

Vicky-mr.so called possessive bhai dint notice that nil ne taani ko apna meri taani bola

Nil(SHOCKED)-VICKY??

Swayam-wat??nil...remember she is my sister

Nil-meri toh nahi(saying that he runs )

Swayam-tume na

Nil reuns all over swayam is chasing him

But suddenly he collides with someone but he cannot see her becaus eshe will be wearing a burkha(sorry..its a suspense)

Swayam-oh sorry...

Unknown girl-its ok...

Swayam can only see her eyes..

Swayam-are u new to this colg

Unknown girl-yes and no

Swayam-waat

Unknown-sory,..im busy...

Swayam-its ok..

The girl leaves and he is confused now as he had heard the voice before but could not remember it...he thinks -ok its not important..buut now where is nilesh??

He was about to turn back

But

SWAYAMMM

HE heard someone shouting but he could gues it ewas his siren

He turned back and saw fuming sharon

Swayam-hey

Sharon -wat hey

swaym-kuch nahi babe

sharon-wat were u talking to her that burkhawali

swayam-nothing..asking

sharon-asking??/

swayam-nothing re..just enquiring whether she is a new commer

sharon-im thher e to all those...u better mind ur business

swayam-ok babe..but someone looks cute when she is jealous...

sharon-SWAYAM

I KNOE IT BORING///...SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE

THANKS TO ALL WHO LIKED AND SUPPORTED ME...THIS UPDATE IS DEDICATED TO MY JASMINE DI(JASMINE ASH)

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PUTTI

nice update

Awsme update
Loved it

Kreya shares her insecurities
What is cooking in Sharon mind

Nil n Vicky was so funny

Who was that girl
Awww jeko Sharon


Precap exciting

Update soon


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UNRES.

Awww putti really you r sweet heart dear. Even in your exam you updated. Mhuaa luv you.
Awesome but mysterious girl how kriya or taani
sounds too mysterious.
Gang and swayam scene good. Felt bad for swayam and vicky nil fun. Brought light changes.
Swaron scene awww.
But missing rey.
I hope sharon does not use kriya much bec she will be heartbroken i don't want anyone to be broken.
Thanks for pm dear.
Awesome lovely update superbly written :)

Nice update
Thanks for PM

lovely updt

Awesome update