SwaRon: Writers need to keep a check on dialogues.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So, once again SwaRon are back to square one. I believe writers' n cvs cannot think of anything original for SwaRon, so they keep on copying the old repetitive tracks. But one thing which they forgot that SwaRon have come a long way and they are not stuck in 2011 phase. For heaven's sake they are in relationship and that too a strong one _/\_ But all thanks to cvs, their bond and love just vanished in thin air.

What kind of pathetic writing is this? Fine SwaRon was getting monotonous and it was important to show some MU. Instead of MU cvs showed break up. Swayam was casual initially anddidn't understood Sharon, which resulted in break up. Half heartedly accepted. Sharon was angry, as that bua questioned her character, fine her anger is justified. But the dialogues and her way of venting out the anger is NOT AT ALL JUSTIFIED _/\_

Just because she is angry, so she will question swayam's love? What the hell was that dialogue about modern girl and all, did she meant that swayam loved her only because of her short clothes and modernity? Its pathetic. Seriously. Swayam is selfish n a loser.

CVS just stop ruining SwaRon characters. Firstly it was swayam n nw Sharon. And on top of that those pathetic dialogues. Its not 2011 where sharon was not in love with swayam, its 2014. She loved him, cared for him, understood him. Stop showing her maniac. Stop this torture and MIND the dialogues.

this breakup drama could have been shown with better dialogues and drama. Everything got ruined because of pathetic and loosely written dialogues.

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sanchiswaron thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Some mistakes can't be corrected and this is one such which writers have committed
Using pathetic dialogues, repeating old tracks and ruining the characters _/\_
Hopeless
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all makers just make swarons happy end nd end swaron story in a happy note in d3 then we can relax...nd yeah cinevistaas it will be better u should hire some classy usefull writer unlike daal-baati nd all dialogg creators or using modern girl kinda thing questioning swayam love dialog nd above all looser selfish ,...what kinda dialog those writers write pls send them in a third grade films or something..they dont deserve to be a part of reputive youth show d3 where youth no1 couple nd ita viewers choice couple vrushan is main lead couple there ..._/\_
Edited by anindo_vrushan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Swayam the lover boy.. His unconditional love
Is the pillar of swaron story

Coz of which sharon couldn't stop herself to like n love him

Bt still giving such pathetic dialogs to sharon...
Questioning his love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pathetic dialogues and repetitive torturing storyline -_- Fed up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tday modern thing erked me up big time.What has writers turned sharon to? least they could do is write proper dialogues.anything going overboard is nonsensical now -_-
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Posted: 10 years ago
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even if they show the fight show a bloddy reason for the fight>>> did he say a thing to her...nad what all shit is shown? sharon love swayam so sharon's love is conditional so show me respect get me this then i will lobe u othrwise get lost...
CVS are on a mission to make swaron fans hate swaron
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Posted: 10 years ago
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After all romantic moments and 3 long yrs of wait this is what we are getting first breakup and now tortured irritating dialogs from sharons character hurting swayam each and everytime for bullshit reason.. This is not done this is most stupid way they have shown the things... Please cvs get some brain we are tired to watching all this please dont test our patience every time.. First of all you guys are ruined swayam character unconditionally now ruining his emotions, everyone comes and shouts on him and goes away and support is also, just to drag story please dont do such stupid things.. If u really don't have brain please let us know we shall give very better ideas to portay swaron story... After seeing fans love you guys still in way of ruining them this pathetic... Why is sharon compring such stupid reasons for breakup why swayam character should be held responsible when he is not, why this stupid attitude... Please stop this...
Edited by supp1288 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PATHETIC dialogues...
like seriously how can they Ques. Swayam's love for Sharon. . .Swayam's love is the base of SwaRon love story... & that mordan thing. . height of stupidity
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i so agree wid u... dialogues were pathetic today. cvs plz check old epis b4 writing such things. characters ko ruin krta hai wrong dialogues.

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