SwaRon OS Love Lasts Forever

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Really loved it
An awesome piece of work

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

It was a touching OS di👏

not to forget your brilliant writing!⭐️

okay okay..

I know that I haven't been the 'best-est' friend types recently..

and I AM sorry for that, even you know that!😭

Its just that after hectic dance practices in school

when I come home I sleep till late evening!! then i complete my homework till late night.. my schedule's totally unbalanced!

Its getting so tough to come on IF.. that's why couldn't keep up with our scrapchat

coming to the OS

Mansi di,

First and foremost, mashallah the story, the concept!😲😲 Am blown away!👏

It was soo uniquely unique.. I llooovveed it!❤️

So, it started off with Swayam gifting Sharon a collage.. aww.. how sweet na?

Then came the flashback.. ragging!😡

Yuvi ke bacche.. how dare you?😡😡😡 Idhar aa I'll beat you with my sandals!😡

But their confession... pehle slaps and then... hayee!☺️

Flashback over..

Rohan supporting his emotional father... how lovely it was..

no matter what people say.. children always tend to act more stronger in these situations as compared to adults!

It seemed so beautiful to know that Rohan made a card which read 'Happy Anniversary Mom And Dad' Mom... aww

Yup baby, Sharon will always be with you.. she's still here, with you, looking after you and your dad... after all, LOVE LASTS FOREVER!!❤️👏👏

Thanks for the pm Mansi di..😳

Love,

Yours,

Anu

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

oh god at first i thiought that why their son is ignoring his mom "sharon" i mean she's standing right there right?? but then i was like WHATT sharon is no more😭

but over all its a beautiful os yet sad

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

hey mansi

first of all thank u soo much for the dedication

i loved it

sharon is dead dat was really sad

but the starting part where swayam gifts sharon was very nyc

and the gift from their son was heart touching

the past and the confession was soo nyc

all in all a very well written os

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

heya mannu

superb os

the starting i was lyk☺️

and towards th end i was lyk😭

it was really emotional

swayam thinking about sharon

their sons gift

it was a real treat to read

swayam and their sons bond is superb

so well penned

thnx 4 the pm

keep writing

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

A very beautiful and heart touching OS

keep writing mansi

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