|Unscripted Love| ~ KR Short Story (Part 11: page 53)

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#231

horse race...interesting...
seems like rey is really liking kriya...till now i thot its jst a game to him...
poor aarav...wrong timing...
though its obvious that rey called...but did he really...???
jaanne ke liye keep bugging mannu madam for update

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Res. Gonna unres tomorrow, pakka se.

Its long, by the way. :))

Unres! Phinally :P

Kinni apology maangu Dii, I am always late. I always and always forget.. 😭😭

Okay. Now the review.

Bang on Didu! This is getting fiercer chapter by chapter. The horse race was nice. Great to learn that Aarav is genuinely conscious about Kria! 😆 She's something of weakness to him. Nicely nicey!! 😉

Kay then! Buhbye!

And a promise, I won't res anywhere. Would directly comment. :D

-Aishwarya :*

Edited by ..MereWhisper.. - 10 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#233

woww this s getting interesting

d horse race was amazingly described😳

but who msgd kriya😕

continue soonish🤗

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khushboo

@khusbooluvarsha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Yaayyy
finally the update is here...
horse race was damn interesting
the update was fab !
Kriya's entry was the best part... sahi time pe entry hui
her concern for Rey n he is enjoying this to the fullest ...hahahh
I loved this line: "Rey is my priority for the moment."
btw,now who is this third person...
waiting for the next part
update soon !

Edited by khusbooluvarsha - 10 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

hey mannu...

first and foremost loved it ...superb...
wow..it was worthwatching...

amazing...

keep writting...

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Awesome update

I love it

Thanks for pm

Update soon

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Wonderful update. .
is rey a negative role in this story?

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#238

amazing!!!! 😃

earlier I had thought they will go to see horse race ... n they will bet on them... 🤣

but no... they are themselves racing... 😆

cheapo aarav ... what will he get by doing this ... 😵

he himself lost respect from kriya ... such an idiot ... 😛

awww... sweet girlfriend kriya ... 🤗

kriyaansh scene nhi mila khul ke ... 😭

aahhh... this story is so engaging ... trust me... 🥳

whenever I read its update... I wish it never end...