Meethi si yeh zindegi..a kr ss Updated pg 11 - Page 2

bechara rey usse koi sone do yaar

New ss...I love ur write ups

Scene 1 ka update bhi karliya tumne😲

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

New ss...I love ur write ups

Nice concept and like the first scene...waiting for its next part...

Iss new ss ka pm kyun nahi beja...I almost missed it😕

continue soon

Sorry pm nahi de paane k liye 😭
Actually itne pm o se disturb nahi karna chahti thi
par ab permission mil gayi disturb karne ka 😆

Scene Two

Subha k 8 baje, busy Mumbai Station jaha pe duniya bhar ki bhid laga hua tha.

Hamari heroine train se utri. Uske paas do heavy suitcase thi jo porter neeche laya. Woh apni purse nikal ke paise de rahi thi jab achanak "aare chor chor chor...meri purse le kar bhag gaya" Kriya bhi kuch door tak uske peche bhagi par woh chor itni bhid mein kaha ghus gaya pata chalana mushkil tha".

Kriya peche mud kar dekhi toh Rey bhi uske peche khada tha "lagta hain tum Mumbai pehli baar ayi ho..isliye yeh haal hain".

"Aap kehna kya chahte ho"? Kriya ne pucha. "Aagar Mumbai mein yeh tumhari 1st time nahi hota toh tum itni carelessly paise nahi nikalti aur chor k peche to bilkul bhi nahi bhagti..kyun k iss bhid mein use pakadna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hain".

"Aap chor pakad ne k jaga mujhe bhashan de rahe ho" Kriya ne ankhen gol karke boli.

Itne mein wo coolie aya "madam mere paise?" Kriya mushkil mein pad gayi, wo kahase paise lati uski purse to ja chuki thi. Wo ghabrahat mein apne nakhun chabane lagi.

"Kitne paise huye tumhare?" Rey ne pucha. "20 rupaye sahab" coolie ne jawab diya. "Yeh lo" Rey ne apni pocket se paise nikal ke usko diya.

"Thank u 4 ur help..par main kisiki daan nahi leti..aap mujhe apna address de dijiyega main apko paise bhej dungi" Kriya embarassed feel kar rahi thi.

Rey ne iske jawab mein hanskar kaha "paise to aap tab lautaenge jab aap yahan se apke office pohoch payenge ya wapis apka ghar..paiso k bina to aap kuch nahi kar payenge"

"Otteri yeh to maine socha hi nahi...ab kya karoon" Kriya ki surat rouni si ho gayi.

"Tumko mujhpar bharosa hain?" Rey asked

"Kya???" Kriya chauk gayi

"Agar tumko mujhpar bharosa hain to tum mere saath chal sakti ho, tumhe jahan bhi jana hain main tumhe chod dunga" Rey ko laga wo kisi film ka hero hain jo ahem waqt pe ake heroine ki madat karta hain.

awesome update...
rey is so cute & filmy 😆
i'm loving this story 😳
update soon...

Scene Three

Rey and Kriya in a rickshaw. Kriya to save her face Rey ko yeh bataya tha k woh apni uncle k ghar teherne wali hain. Rey use uske uncle k ghar chod ne ja raha tha jo ki exist hi nahi karta thi. Woh log auto mein lagbhag pura Mumbai ghum chuke the.

"Tumhare uncle ka ghar aur kitni door hain"? Rey ne pucha, wo bohot thak gaya tha aur usko bhook bhi lag rahi thi. Kriya bhi thak chuki thi wo baat ko aur na badate huye kaha "Mumbai mein meri koi uncle nahin hain". Yeh sunkar Rey hairan ho gaya aur autowale ko rok diya.

"Tum kya pagal ho? hum subha se puri Mumbai ghum rahe hain, mere pure 300 rupaye kharch hogaye..mujhe studio bhi jana tha aur tum ab kahe rahi ho k tumhari koi uncle nahin hain? Ab tum jo ji mein aye karo main chalta hoon". Rey apna saman uthake chalne k liye ready tha.

Kriya itni der apni ansoon o ko rokh ke rakhi thi par ab wo uchhal pade. Rey firse uske paas aya, Kriya k taraf dekha uske dil mein Kriya ko dekh ke ek ajeeb feeling huya. Usne pehli baar yeh notice kiya that she was beautiful jis beauty ka shayad Kriya ko koi kadar nahi thi.

"Dekho tum ro mat..mujh jaise handsome ladke k saath hote huye bhi agar tum ro ge to meri stardom ka to om shanti om ho jayega" Rey ne kaha.

"Aap mujhe chod ke to nahi jaoge na Reyansh" Kriya ne ansoon ponch te huye kaha. Rey kuch seconds k liye jaise apne ap ko bhool gaya aur fir kaha "Nahi Kriya main tumhe chodke kahin nahin jaunga".

Scene Four

Dilkhush Guest House. Our hero and heroine enters. Samne chota sa reception area jahan ek elderly aadmi baitha tha. Rey table ki taraf gaya.

"Hume do room chahiye" Rey ne kaha.

"Kyaaa showroom chahiye? yahan pe showroom nahi rehne k liye kamra milta hain" us burhe admi ne kaha.

"He bhagwan..hume showroom nahi do room chahiye".

aww that was so sweet

stardom ka om shathi om 🤣
awsome update
cute and funny
update soon didu😆