SwaRon OS:Fights and Love - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Beautiful OS...swaron getting married...return kiss wid interest...awww**blush*.. keep up the gr8 work...
Loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
awww that was so sweet
its so obvious Sharon can do anything
swayam is so caring imaging him angry n caring at a same time is just mesmerizing
awww loved the ending d album is for shikhwat
Mr.shikhawat u r so sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
UNRESSED
m sorry fr d late comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awww...really sweet OS!
Even them fighting is really cute
Superb!
Keep writing
😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awweee!!!!
this was so sweet...
loved it to the core...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
If is definitely behaving in a wierd manner wit me
N its really sick 🤓
Coming to ur os
It was fantastic
I hav to say u kept sharon's character
To the ground she is adamant strong
N trying very hard to grab swayam's attention
To sort things out it reminded me of maula mere maula
N we knoe if sharon wants sumthing she
Gets it no matter wat
But she had to wait foe so long in the rain
Swayam's character was very well drawn
Too he was still grumpy but the lover boy who
Was surfacing deep down was
Out after he saw sharon
The small monents in the os were blissfull
For me to read
Sply the end mr shekhawat knoes how to impress
His lady
All in all a very well formed os
Keep them coming chitra 🤗
Edited by rosyrkohli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
simply adorable... read sumthing of this sort aftr a long tym n it was simply heart warming...(Y) fr this wonderful os..keeping writing more of this kind :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Beautifully penned.
I loved how you described their relationship. Good job
Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
heyyy chitra...
wonderful os...
so sweet and short one...
hayyyee i loved the end sooo cute...
i so wished it could continue...

with love
keechu

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