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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Amazing start Sonal :D I'm so sorry for the late response! I checked my pm inbox thodi der pehle and saw that you had given the first chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Wow :)

Amazing start dear :)
Loved it :)
Eagerly waiting to read more :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)



Thankyou
Will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Memories-

Amazing start Sonal :D I'm so sorry for the late response! I checked my pm inbox thodi der pehle and saw that you had given the first chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon :D



Thankyou
N its ok shivi...no need to say sorry
I'll update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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liked it <3 update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MyMy-

liked it <3 update soon!



Thankyou
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hope u all like it...
Enjoy reading..


Chapter 2 : Paying Guest? ^o^

Ishika reached Mumbai, the city of dreams, she didn't have any big dreams,
her only dream was to live on her own terms, do what she wants to do and
not what others want her to do.

" ab mai kahan jau? Kisi ko janti bhi nhi hu yahan pe. Wo NGO jahan dada ji
paise bhijwate the... Kya naam tha?...uhh... haan Saraswati Devi Sanstha.
Wahan jati hu, shayad kuch madad mil jaye..."

She takes a auto and goes there
"Namaste kavita aunty, muje pehchana? Mai ishi, ishika chakraborty..."
"tumhare dada ji, vishwanath...?? "
Ishi nods a yes
"arre beta tum yahan kaise? Baaki sab kahan hai?"
Ishi tells her everything that happened to her n how she ran away n is finding a place to stay.
Kavita aunty tells her to stay in the NGO till she finds a new place...

As ishi was going to her room kavita was going towards the reception area when she recognises someone..

"arre avni tum?"
"haan aunty wo..."
Ishi recognises the voice n turns to see who it was
"avni di aap?yahan?"
Avni turns to her right n sees ishi
"ishika? Wat a surprise? Tum yahan kaise?"
Ishika stutters to hide the truth "wo toh aise hi par aap?"
"mai toh yahin rehti hu , mumbai mei.pr tum kahan ruki ho"..
N avni di notices her bags..
"ishika koi aisi baat hai jo tum mujhe nhi bta rhi ho, kya hua? A thik toh h na?"
Ishika nt able to hold it in her , she tells everything to her di

"tum ek kaam karo apna samaan lo aur mere saath chalo"
"nai di mai kaise?"
"kaise kya maine kaha na tum mere saath rahogi bas"
"par..."
"nhi,, ab chalo"

(how they both knoe each other will b in ch 3)

~

They go home
"vaise toh mai PG rakhne ki soch rhi thi bt ab tum yahan rahogi"
"toh di mai PG hi rahungi"
"lekin ishika tum family ho."
"pls di aap meri itni help kr rhi ho, mai bhi aapki help krna chahti hu, pls muje ye krne dijiye, mere liye?"
" acha acha thik hai ab gum fresh ho jao mai khana lagati hu"

They were having dinner
"di aap itne bde ghar mei akele rehte ho?"
"nhi main apne bhai k saath rehti hu, tum shayad usse nhi mili"
"raghav?" ishi gets lost in her thoughts
"haan tum usse kl mil lena, aaj toh vo late aayega... Vaise ab tumne kya krne ka socha hai?"
"kl mai st.louis jake form bhar dungi."
"st.louis ? Wahan toh rghav bhi padhta hai, chalo accha h ab tum usi k saath chali jana kl"
Suddenly ishi gets angry
"kya hua ishika?"
"kuch ni vo raghav ka naam sunke kisiki yaad aa gyi."
They finish dinner n go to sleep..

~

Morning 6:00

"raghav tu kab aaya raat ko"
"jb aay tha toh aap so rhi thi"
"acha raghav kl na muje koi mila"
"kon mila dida, bhoot?"
"raghav mai apni frnd ki baat kr rhi hu, wo hahin h , soo rhi hai, n isse pehle tu kuch aur bole meri baat sun... Wo teri age ki hai..n st louis join kr rhi h toh ek kaam kr usse apne saath leja college"
"wat? Dida no , wo toh abhi ghode bech ke so rhi h n muje dodna hai, rehearsals hai , sharon maar dalegi
So bye dida, apni ghodi ko jga k bol dena ki wo khud hi college aa jaye"
"raghav aise bolte h kya?"
Raghav goes away
"arre ye raghav pagal ho gya hai kya, bina jaane hi usse ghodi bula rha h, pta nhi jb yeh dono aamne saamne honge toh kya hoga"
[i'll tell u, World war ...3 hahaha lol!!]

~
The chapter ends

Do hit like n comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sonal...it really vry interesting...
Waiting 4 ishav to meet 4 d 1st time...world war...
Plz update soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Ahh finally read the 2nd chapter! It was amazing Sonal! Raghav's dida is Ishi's friend, this is sooo interesting! Ghodi part was hilarious 🤣 Hayee can't wait for IshAv to meet! Waiting for the next chapter!

I miss you! Where are you Sonal? Why are you not coming on the AT? And did you make any new vm?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ahhh!! ❤️ Ishav FF!! 😃 awesome!!

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