KRIYAM OS:-- ' U are getting too evil, day by day!'

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hey Diya...Nice OS!The soft knocks and their bickering...Loved it!Though I am not much of a KriYam fan but i love reading stuff on them 😊
Pretty cool work...Keep it up cutiepie 😊

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

ausome OS...

Kriya is not getting evil..but she is already one...so U cant make an evil more evil...

Poor Swayam...

Jealous Kriya...hehehe...

I knew it that was Sharon...

Ausome...

Love Aditi...

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Really cute OS

Nice friendship between Swayam and Kriya loved how you described it

Awesome work 😊

Thanks for the PM

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesomest
Loved it to much
Kriya be a devil that the intresting
Bechare reyam how they handle devil
Kriyam friendship is the best and the awesomest part
Then the CCD fun
Manager bhi darta hai gang se hahahahahahaha
Loved the fun and the masti dhamal
Both r diffrent choice but both read eachother mind
Dance rey ko jalane ke liye
Woh bhi rumba par
Nyc
Passiniote bechara jal bhun gaya hoga
Loved it so much
Sharon the girl swayam bhi dead aab
Amazing os
Loved the concept and the masti and devilpanti

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Usha

@Usha29

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

I liked it this way on kriyaam bonding.
Was hilarious when she barge into his
Washroom. And her jealousy she didn't even recognize
Sharon. And what was abt cafe their are don's their.
Hahaha! Funny how kriyaam are different yet same.
Loved a lot & jealouse Rey bcoz of Swayam treat
To read. And really kriya was evil 😉

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Anupriya

@anuaskif

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hi Diya...

Beautifully written... I mean I can see how you love these four people that you can create such an amazing chemistry between any 2/3/4 of them.

It tells me so much about you too... Love for you is just so innocent 😳 Good going gurl 👏

I luv your Swaron and Kriyansh 👍🏼

Luv

Anu

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

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Mele KriYam!!!

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Diyu...
Such a nic OS dear.
you r growing as a very gud writer day by day.
Coming 2 d OS
well penned down
unique and refreshing concept.
The bond of friendship *touchwood*
kriyam wer depictd in their best ways.
Jealousy doin wonders and challanges acceptd by kriya.
Sorry 4 d late reply
i had read it already .
Wat i <3 abt ur writing is the uniqueness in deir concepts.
And my most fav part:swayam in towel and kriyas gues dat he wud surely be thinking abt sharon.
Thnx 4 d pm chotu
love u chotu *imaginary hugs*
:-)