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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Really nice start. This seems like it's going to be an interesting story! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the pm (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
AWESOME...

mind blowing...

this story is really interesting..

waiting for the next part..

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
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awesum start
continue soon
n if u want banner then i can help u just scrap me if u want my help
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Chottu sa but CUTE chapter...
very well described...
Confident Kria with not so confident Rey, Intersting!!
Awesome Flashback... Loved the way u described everything in antic style, lovely!!!
Awww, small kria acting so cute, Adorable...
In the present time, u have shown kria as a Royal but in the past, She is like the daughter of dasi... CONFUSED!!
LOVED THE UPDATE, DO UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Nice start!
I love the idea of both stories going hand in hand!
Their first meet was just a glance...looking forward for their first convo...
The flashback meet was cute...meeting as 5 year olds...loved it!
continue soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Past ki meeting
Hayy
That was so sweet n cute
I love that cute rey n kriya

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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Koi title bhi suggest karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice introduction from thie mom to each other on their first meet...
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Bond Strengthens


"What is so bad in being a Rajput?" Kria questioned, once they left the hall.

"I just hate it. They didn't want me to be an archeologist. They wanted me to be something big.

Like a business man or something." Rey replied, almost shrugging of the question.

"By the way, you have quite a strange name. Just three letters, R-E-Y. It ends the moment it begins. " she said laughing her butt off on this silly joke. And he eyed her as if she didn't belong to this planet.

"FYI, my real name is Reyaansh Singhania. Named after a very great warrior, my ancestor." He spoke proudly.

"Oh that's nice. But I never heard it." Kria said, wondering at the back of her mind why it sounded so familiar.

"I'll tell you that later, it's quite a long story. Presently let's take these files to the hall; I wouldn't like to be scolded the very first day by our boss." He spoke, bringing out of her thoughts and bringing her back to action.

"So, as we have made pairs, let's give you all your very first consignment. We'll be giving you locations first, and of course all those won't be famous. You all just need to scoop out all the history you get from it. I will be giving you a deadline of two-weeks. Let's start with..." the boss said, listing everybody consignments.

As he started listing the places and submitting it to everyone, Kria's face fell. These places had no ounce of history in them! And she needs to submit a whole report! God, the work bosses give these days! As she started Hearing other places, her face fell more and she started making weird faces. She first looked up as if cursing her universeji and then at Rey, wondering if he had any ideas.

But he was almost stifling a laugh as he saw her weird cut very cute expressions. He had not at all paid attention on what their boss was saying. He was only wondering, "How can someone be cute and funny at the same time?" he suddenly saw himself being glared angrily by Kria.
She looked so cute that he almost laughed, grabbing the attention of almost everyone, but then
was thankfully ignored.
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"Come Kriyal, let's play together..." Reyaansh spoke in his baby voice.

He grabbed Kriyal's hand and dragged her to the garden. Seeing this, his mother laughed, seemed like they are going to be the best of friends, she thought.

As they were passing through the corridors, she innocently asked him, "How do live in such a big house? Aapko darr nahi lagta?"

"Hume darr toh nahi laga kabhi, pata nahi..." he said, scratching his head.

"Leave all that, lets first go into the garden and play!" she said, excitement clearly visible in her eyes.

"Okay, let's go!" he said, with equal excitement.

They reached the garden. After Reyaansh gave a whole tour of the garden to Kriyal, they almost stood in the centre of that place to play, as according to their brains, nobody would be able to disturb them there.

"Now what should we play?" Kriyal said.

"Hum nahi jaante. You are the guest here, you decide." He said, giving her the liberty.

"Hmmm, theek hai. So let's play Raja-Raja."

"Raja-Raja?"

"Haan, ek Raja hoga, aur doosra praja ka koi aadmi jo apni samasya Raja ke paas leke aayega"

"Nahi, this game isn't so nice. Let's play with talwaars."

"Arre! But you gave me the liberty to choose the game!"

"But in your game I will not become praja, I will become only the king."

"Not fair. Mujhe bhi Raja banana hai."

"Tum Raja toh ban hi nahi sakti! Tum toh sirf Rani ban sakti ho, aur Rani kabhi Raja ke kary nahi karti!" he said mocking her.

"Toh kya hua, Hum aisi Rani ban jayenge jo who saare kary kare jo Raja karte hai."

"Theek hai, but let's play with talwars first. Then your game, ok?"

"Ummm, ok. But I don't know how to play with a talwar..."

"Hum aapko sikhayenge." He spoke proudly.

"Theek hai!" she spoke with a smile.
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Hey!

I am back with an update!

I hope you like it and are able to connect with it.

And this time I need reviews from every reader. Each and every reader.

Silent readers, please daya karo mujh par aur review karo 😭

This time the demand is...

Pg 10 😉

Love you all always!
Parigya 😳

Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum update...
Hey help chaheye...
if u can me some pics of kr that u want in the banner...
It will b easy for me to made it as per ur choice

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