SwaRon OS Love knows no boundary

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya guys back with a OS😊

hope u liked it😊

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SwaRon OS Love knows no boundary

A girl was sleeping in her bedroom hugging her pink coloured teddy but her sleep was disturbed by the caller tune she picked up her phone in sleepy mode n said"hello,itni subha subha kaun ho tum?"

"mai hu sharon"

suddenly hearing that sharon's face lit up with a smile n she woke up fully "swayam sir aap?aapne itni subha subha kyu call kiya kuch kaam tha"said sharon still smiling.

"nahi kaam to nahi tha but tumhe remind karne ke call kiya tha that aaj 7:30 ka lecture hai"said swayam.

"thank u sir for reminding me mai to bhul hi gai thi"said sharon.

"ur welcome n by the way mujhe pata tha tum bhul jaogi"said swayam smiling.

"acha vo kese sir?"asked sharon lovingly.

"because i know u very well more than u know urself"said swayam in the same tone.

hearing this sharon started blushing.

And suddenly sharon's mom came to wake her up as sharon heard her footstep she immediately said"acha sir abhi mai rakhti hu mom aa gai hai see u soon,bye"

"bye"said swayam.

As soon as sharon put her phone down her mom came in."arey aaj tu itna jaldi kese uth gai?"asked sharon's mom in shock and disbelief.

"mom agar mai late uthti to aap dantte ho n ab jaldi uth gai to aap shocked ho,akhir mai bichari karu kya?"said sharon in a dramatic mode,

"ab bus kar meri dramaqueen,kalse esehi jaldi uthna n chal jaldi se tayar ho kar nashta karne aa jana"saying this sharon's mom left.

Sharon was getting ready for coaching classes sitting before her dressing table suddenly her eyes fell on the calendar it was 3rd july 2014.it was then she realised it was something special today"aaj hi ke din do saal pehle swayam sir aur mai mile the kitna acha tha vo din n dusra acha din tab tha jab mujhe ek saal pehle ye realise huva that i love swayam sir"thought sharon n started blushing.

"n today its high time mai swayam sir ko apni feelings ke bare mai batao i just cant hold my feelings more in myself aur vaise bhi aaj ka din bhi bohat special hai"said sharon talking to herself and getting up from the dreesing table.

"sharon"shouted sharon's mom from the hall breaking her trance of thought"aai"said sharon and she immediately pick up her bag n went to have breakfast

Sharon had her breakfast very fastly n went to the coaching classes.as soon as she entered she was as usual late swayam had already started teaching his other students he said to sharon to sit with his expressions she immediately went n sit on the 1st bench it was always empty as nobody likes to sit on it but she liked because this was the only time when she can be close to HER swayam sir.

As swayam was teaching sharon was lost in him his hairs were flying in air she was lost in their dreamworld.But swayam bring her back to earth by asking sharon some question.although swayam a very good friend with sharon but when it comes to studies he was perfect teacher.

after classes get over swayam went to his cabin as he was drinking water sharon came in without permission his back was facing her n she immediately said"i love u swayam sir"

Hearing this swayam was beyond shocked he throw all the water from his mouth to his table,he turn around n looked at sharon whose eyes were closed due to fear.

"Sharon do u know what the hell r u speaking?"said swayam with anger clearly heared in his voice.

Sharon opened her eyes n said"i really love you dont u love me?"asked sharon praying to god in her heart that he says yes he love her but immediately he replied looking down"no i dont love u"

"acha now look in to my eyes and repeat this"said sharon.

"dekho sharon tum..."swayam started to say but he was cut by sharon who cupped his face and kissed him and started savouring the tastes of his mouth swayam tried to controlled but at last he couldnot resist his hands automatically moved towards her waist n he also started responding with the same passion which sharon has,sharon's hands were to his hairs n she started ruffling his hairs both were not ready to broke the kiss but allast after even they dont know what time they broke the kiss.

Sharon n swayam both were painting hard n sharon said"now say u dont love me"

"i love u sharon...i love u"said swayam n hugged sharon in a never ending hug.hearing those three beautiful words she also hugged swayam with same intensity,both were feeling contended.

Suddenly swayam broke the hug n said"But sharon this is wrong mai ek teacher hu aur tum meri student ho ye..ye sab..."

"sshhshhh"said sharon"kuch galat nai hai ye kaha likha hai that ek student aur teacher lovers nai ho sakte"

"but sharon ur family,this whole world wont accept our relationship"said swayam looking in to her eyes.

"sir jab hum saath hai kuch galat nai ho sakta hai"said sharon putting her hands on swayam's neck.

"but.."

"maine kaha na kuch galat nai hoga n agar huva bhi to hum usse saath mai face karenge"said sharon, in response swayam hugged her she also hugged him.

Two souls together in a relationship which is not accepted by the world but they are ready to face the the hurdles TOGETHER which will came in their life by the world.

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So guys how was it?

i know i know bohat hi ajeeb n atpata concept hai but even i dont know from where this concept came in my mind

do give me ur reviews will be waiting😊

all ur jutta n chapals r welcome😆

love
Mansi😊
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago

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Amy21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Unique concept...:)
Well penned
Nice os...
Great gng mansi^_^
Well done 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
All together a different concept
Nice work
diyaswaronholic thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Amazing idea
Mast tha jaan
Luved it
Starting se end tak wowww
Aur bdw meri naughtinnocent kya likhti he
Bahot acha
Mai ff pe aane ke baad comment karungi
Sooo sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey mansi a very NYC concept
Sharon is in love with her Swayam sir too Gud
A different bond cud b seen Bw both
Write more ua really improving dea

Love
Shini
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kind of awkward concept...kind of feeling odd...
I m not against love...nor ur work...
Hmm...teacher-student...very much wired...
Can't connect wid it...


Extremely sorry...if u feel I m being rude/harsh...completely my point...
U r a grt writer wid sum awesome concepts/imaginations...BT dis I don't kno w how to...it felt very wired...
Sorry once again...
:)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
Jaldi se bhaag kar aagi after comminting on TR os ... 🤣 bt fir bhi 6th aai 😎
Comming on os its awsm bebs loved it
Swayam is sharan's sir n swayam calling her to remind her of lecture wow kitna caring hei 😉 n dat line ki i know u better u k ow yourself..
Grt job 👏
⭐️ 5 mei se 6 star for dis os 😃
Aww dey kiss 😳 lovely
Bt yaar so true we indian society take teacher-student love relation as wrng we can't understand that dey r in love ..

Ahh! Why hell i m being so serious !! God ..ahh its all becoz of u wid u i m also becoming emotional freak ..
Chal. Love u my bff n alwaya keep writting warna 😡 u know better
Bye 🤗
Edited by nishu98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Wow, nicely written honey,
Koi nahi...
Yeh pad kar mujhe demand rakhni hai.
Can you please write a swaron story...I mean both should be neighbours...
Baaki joh extra spice and salt...jo add karna hai kar.

Opps, Sowie...
I knoe, demanding ho rahi hun.
Comment ke time par bhi meri demands...
Hadh hai.
But Main isse delete nahi karne Waali hun.
Now, Comming to the story.
Cute, sweet, naughty aur swaronholic story.
Par thodi aur badi hoti toh...
Ugh...
Chalo Bubye...Warna main aur mere unlimited demands,
Love u...
Nikki.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a very unique cncept
i just felt ending thori acchi ho sati thi
apart from tat i loved the story
sharon is in love wit her teacher
n swayam too feels the same
the subject in itself was very intense mansi
n the way sharon initiated a very brave step
to confess her feelings was very well written
the kiss in the end was super spl
all in all a very pleasing read 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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swayam sir?? pdhkr hi shocked gosh different concept n very well penned waah my naughtiinocent keep it up aur likhti rahin aur muze pm krti rahain ;)

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