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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Ishana..
Amazing ending to one hell of a story. The re-birth element was brought in nicely :D
i really loved it. how Swayam and Sharon realised who they were and are.
aah..Beautiful writing girl. keep up the good work! :D

Sorry for late comment. caught up with studies :/

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

I am sorry i didn't edited my reserved post and now as you have updated the whole of it i thought to comment altogether now! A brilliant writeup in a long time! It was such a thrilling concept and you totally justified it by writing it amazingly on SwaRon. The reincarnation thing was exciting and the sam and sharon's story in the rebirth was cute too! You very well explained the stuff in two updates, the things they felt of the mention of the mansion, the paintings, the closed door and the renovated kitchen, it was all very cool! Then their union was really touchy, quite dramatic but it had to be i guess as the concept was of the same genre. Very well written and explained the end or the beginning of their lovestory!
Keep writing bud, don't quit. You are excellent!

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

omg wat a creation.. this is so damn brilliant👏

loved the concept of rebirth

the way you portray swaron character..is really amazing

blending the scene of past n present together was beautifully penned

They were brutally killed but their love was alive in each and every part of that mansion

happy to know that they remember everything.. SwaRon are for Eternity.. they are together forever...

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

thanks chitra for pm

this was unique concept . i like it a lot

the way you wrote the whole story was simply brilliant.
no wonder this one is close to you. really a masterpiece.
hats off!

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

simply awesome dear...

I really love this stories.. the way you portray swaron character..is really amazing.. their pain was visible to us... happy to know that they remember everything.. they are TOGETHER FOREver. loved it..

perfect ...great writing skill

thanks chitra for pm