Finding Our Safe Haven TS Updated - Page 3

Hinalll
Main aagaaaiii yaaayyy aaj raat end hone se pehle lol
Anazing ts as i said earlier like literallyi had goosebumps on my arms n my mind was like yeh aisi emotional story likh sakti hai :O
But yaar i agree that if we can share n stop this cutting n self harm that is the best. U pin pointed that fact amazingly. I know ppl who hv cut in past n still do i tried to stop them but i guess it was not that motivational as one cannot understand it until u face it urself.
Hats off to u for this.
Hopefully ppl will get that n try n stop bullying others n also help ppl who self harm.
Gr8 in story wise too as they both stop self harm for/becoz of eachother.
Loveddd it
Dhruviii

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

Hinalll
Main aagaaaiii yaaayyy aaj raat end hone se pehle lol
Anazing ts as i said earlier like literallyi had goosebumps on my arms n my mind was like yeh aisi emotional story likh sakti hai :O
But yaar i agree that if we can share n stop this cutting n self harm that is the best. U pin pointed that fact amazingly. I know ppl who hv cut in past n still do i tried to stop them but i guess it was not that motivational as one cannot understand it until u face it urself.
Hats off to u for this.
Hopefully ppl will get that n try n stop bullying others n also help ppl who self harm.
Gr8 in story wise too as they both stop self harm for/becoz of eachother.
Loveddd it
Dhruviii

the chapter was awesome and really liked it speak and share there lead them and made
a happy conversation and somewhat understand and became close ...
do continue soon

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

res
unres...
sorry sorry for bring this much late...nd thanx for reminding...
going by the name...this was heavenly...
each nd evry emotion was b'fully described...
neha's attempt to suicide nd her being going into the shell...painful nd disturbing...i hv seen ppl getting deep wound emotionally coz of othrs nd such reasons...
vicky...coconut boy...very very soft from inside...thqt inferiority complex which evolutes coz of others is hell...
they were saviour of each other...that was the essence of the whole fiction...
truly beautiful hinal...
this one is extraordinary...
congratulations

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

the chapter was awesome and really liked it speak and share there lead them and made
a happy conversation and somewhat understand and became close ...
do continue soon

You are such a good writer Hinal! That was the first thing that had to be said. Your usage of words is amazing! I love the way you string your sentences. I don't know this couple at all, but I could feel every emotion depicted in this fanfic, which is the sign of a great writer! You breathed life into two characters I had no idea even existed. Wow! The way you showed the change and development in these character's leaves me stunned. The inner turmoil of these character's, the insecurities, everything about them was so nicely penned. I love the end! It's not easy to heal wounds, but when you have a reason to look forward, you grasp that chance and you try to heal! =) It gives you motivation, it gives you hope, and you described it flawlessly. I don't know how to write proper reviews, just know that I loved it. You are amazing with emotion! I love you, muah! <3 By the way this two-shot makes me want to watch them now. Another sign of a great writer!

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

You are such a good writer Hinal! That was the first thing that had to be said. Your usage of words is amazing! I love the way you string your sentences. I don't know this couple at all, but I could feel every emotion depicted in this fanfic, which is the sign of a great writer! You breathed life into two characters I had no idea even existed. Wow! The way you showed the change and development in these character's leaves me stunned. The inner turmoil of these character's, the insecurities, everything about them was so nicely penned. I love the end! It's not easy to heal wounds, but when you have a reason to look forward, you grasp that chance and you try to heal! =) It gives you motivation, it gives you hope, and you described it flawlessly. I don't know how to write proper reviews, just know that I loved it. You are amazing with emotion! I love you, muah! <3 By the way this two-shot makes me want to watch them now. Another sign of a great writer!

Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy!

Thank you so much for the comment😳

I'm so glad you enjoyed it just as much as the first part!

It is very encouraging to hear see a response as yours :)

Really happy you liked it!

Thanks once again🤗

u r such an amazing writer
u deserve evry bit of it...

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

u r such an amazing writer
u deserve evry bit of it...

hinal...though i should nt ask bt i really want u to write something on kr...a story or smthing...
would love to read ur version...
only if u r comfortable