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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hey Dear,

Congratulations for ur first write up,i had noticed ur few comments on old swaron stories..Glad to see that u are exploring to read all the possible works..And now What a lovely one shot..It was sugary sweet to captured all the possible moments of romance (after marriage) in a way of ur writing..U wrote so beautifully,i got to read few amusing moments like coffee burn n cake wala part n after that the date was beautifully described..I loved it..Beautifull work.Keep writing

Thanx for the PM

Prateek

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Amy

@Amy21

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Sorry to reply late..was busy in work..
Os was amazing..
Well penned
Their feellings fr each other was well expressed.. 😊
Congrats on ur first os..
Write more on swaron..^_^
Will love to read more os frm u..<3

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

ur 1st os.. amazing work mansi😊

sweet cute nd romantic.. beautifully described.. keep writing..

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thank u 😃

all ur comments r very valuable fr me😃

it really means a lot😊

i didnt expected tat u guys will like it😆

bt it was a big shock fr me when i read all ur comments😲

once again thank u so much😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Just loved it.

It was really a sweet one with Swaron having some exclusive time with each other.

You write quite well. Do try more :)

Thanks for the pm.

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Mansi..🤗
your first write up..congratulations. :D
i loved it..the OS was really cute and adorable..
so SwaRonish.. :)
do keep writing..would love to read more..
thanks for the PM

Cheers
Nishi.

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

hey dear,
congrats on ur first work
firstly a bada wala sorry 4 the late comment
no one would believe that its ur first write up
you penned it down so well
do write more
nice os ...👏👏
thanx 4 d pm dear

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

A nice try. Different shades been portrayed with the write-up. A nice piece of work to read.

Welcome to the writing world. :)

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Wow...your first work???😲 Mahn jitna bolu utna kam hai..😳
It is just mind blowinggg... 😲👏

Marriage...SwaRon wants exclusive time.😛
Their naughtiness... Sharons' care for him... Swayam's outburst !! 😃

Everything was so perfect.⭐️

And then comes the date... I could actually imagine everythinggg live.❤️

Wohoa..the kiss...oopps kisses...! Lovely writing.☺️

Keep writing more n more n more...
You'll surely grow as a marvelous writer I bet.😊

PS- Thanks fr reminding me. Sorry for being late...was busy! Lovely work.
Loveu
Sakshi.

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Well written dear...loved it...Cute n romantic os

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