SwaRon OS: A Mirage... *PMs sent* :D

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hey Dear

I would like to say that u are growing very fast as a writer here..This one is so beautiful one shot including ur idea n ur way to execute that..I loved it..The way u penned swayam n sharon individual characterwise feeling was brilliant..It was emotional at the side of swayam..His emotional trail was brilliant read for me..I enjoyed..Seriously..

Though from past few weeks,i just stopped myself to reply each ones PM's as i only get weekend time to read but i must say ur work, worth to read dude..Keep writing more..If u can..

Thanx for the PM

Prateek

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Haha this was indeed a very cool attempt nishi. Mirage was perfectly shown and justified, the concept was deep and i appreciate your thought process here as it was all about meeting then getting lost then finding your way back.
Amazing!

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Aah. . .That was such beautiful OS.The Love is incomplete and yet so complete.Beautiful Nishi 😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

It was just beautiful.

The way you described their hidden emotions.

Ah...loved it. I could actually feel everything and the letter awww poor Swaron but still they managed to be each other's in that one moment.

Enjoyed a lot while reading.

Thanks for the pm.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nishi, Initially when I read this, I was like, dude, this is similar to what I had once thought of writing a deserted trip.. and .. Let the rest be under the wraps of secrecy for now.

But then, I was proved wrong. No! Mine was nothing in front of this. You have got it so marvelously and the description was apt!!

*I know it would sound greedy of me to ask you but can't help it* Can you please write a sequel to this? If possible. Please!