KriYaansh One Shot: Cake-a-licious!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

res...
u r a darling u know that???
unres
zyada chota tha...bt i was satisfied..
lips dipped in lava cake are surely tempting nd wen its of ur gf..
backout krne ka to sawal hi nai uthta...
lines at the end were beautiful...
loved it totally

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Awwieee this was too cute..

Well written.. 😛

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Pehle toh this should be a HS i.e Half-Shot instead of OS , inna munnu sa tha 😛...

N then Crazy toh ap ho he , Writer ka tag bhi must hai , Only i writer can sum-up a little moment in such a way 😉...

This munna sa OS , Sweet tha with a little element of Romance 😃...

Me likey it ❤️...

N ya do come up with these sort of creative ideas 😆😳.

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

res

unres

cute and beautiful..

short tha..but very nicely written😃

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

chotu sa tha but cutee and romntic sa thaa!!!!!!

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

did you wrote this on swaron also by reading I thought I already read it BTW it was nice

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome os...
loved it.. :*

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Oh My God.. this was sooo sweet shenziii...

short..sweettt...

i really really loved it ^_^

u got inspired by vaishu's choco lava cake..bwahahahaaa...

it actually looked tasty :v

but..hehe loved ur chotuuu sa cute sa OS...

and those last lines in red.. loved it.. :D

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Dis is the PREFECT EXAMPLE of..
Aisa os joh kab start hua n kab Khatam.. Kuch pata hi nahi chala..
Itna chindi sa os.. Ufff..
Like up.. Sweet sa tha.. Liked it :D

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