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Posted: 11 years ago
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Was missing Kriyansh, so ended up with this,



"Helloo!! I'm home!" Kriya declared with her arm flailing at her sides, and a huge smile on her face. Rey smiled and got up to give her a hug, she always made his mood better. "Kya hua baatcutter, itni khush?", Rey asked as he lovingly placed a strand of hair behind her ear. "Accha nahi ho sakathi!", she said hitting his chest lightly. "Nahi baba itna kuch ho raha hai na toh", he said sitting down and pulling her as he sat, she turned around in his lap and looked at him. He had almost given up hope about the dance academy, they were trying everything they could, but there was absoltely no results. It was frustrating, and mentally exhausting to face rejection.

"Look, I know, everything may not be great now, but it will be, eventually", she said cupping his face and looking into his eye lovingly, he held her palm against his face "I know Kriya! But kab? This seems to be never ending!".

"Hum kuch na kuch idea nikalenge, hume aur bhi khoshish karna hoga! We have to think creatively, there must be something that we haven't tried" she said sliding off his lap and sitting beside him on the sofa. He put his hands in his hair, and began to ruffle it, "Ahhh, kya kareennn?".

"Oho! Abb yeh chod, sare din hum yahi toh karr rahe hain, tomorrow we'll talk about this with the gang, we'll come up with something, you don't worry! Ab yeh chod, dekho mein tumare liye kya surprise layi hun!" she said smiling widely. "Kya?", he looked around, "What is it? Mujhe kuch dikhayi nahi de raha hai!", "Yahii hai dekho!", "Kya hai?", "Areeyy Rey, mein hu surprise" Kriya cheered.

He laughed and held her close, he kissed her nose. She giggled, as he tucked her hair behind her ears, he hugged her tight and put his arm around her, and kissed her ear, and whispered huskily "I Love this surprise.. so much", she began to breathe harder, he nuzzled into her neck and placed soft loving kisses, she gasped and pulled back.

He pulled her back harder, she gasped at the force, he pushed her down slowly on the couch and began to kiss neck, when he reached her tender spot she moaned softly and clutched his shoulder tighter, her other hand was in his hair, she wanted to pull him back or push him in she didn't know.He moved back, and took her flushed face, she had a soft angelic glow on her face, he moved closed, "I love you so much baatcutter",he whispered against her lush lips before taking them.

After a heated session of making out with eachother, they lap next to each other, Rey's face in the crook of Kriya's neck, their breathing still a bit out of control. He was playing with her fingers, locking and unlocking with his own. "You know, I think we should tell all our friends in college to spread the word with their friends of different colleges. Our friends do know how well we dance right, i know yeh kafi nahi hogi, but we have to start somewhere." He was staring at their fingers for somewhile before he spoke, "Hmm Shayad, we shouldn't lose hope, no goal can be achieved if you give up, we should stand strong and fight", he said interlocking their hands harder. She sighed softly, both knew that if they had their friends and each other for support no obstacle is big, they should not lose hope.

"Want to watch a movie?" Rey asked pulling Kriya up, she nodded and Rey put on some movie, they spent the rest of the night in each other's arms, cuddling, and hoping the future has finally something good in store for them.





-- Haila! I had missed out a part, so sorry! now Edited!--


This is the first time I'm writing an OS, hoping you guys will like it. 😊 your honest opinions. 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesom...
luvd d romantic momnts & d suprise part... 😛

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Originally posted by: sakura20

awesom...
luvd d romantic momnts & d suprise part... 😛


Eee Thank you!! 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was awesome...
loved it..
write more plzz...
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Originally posted by: Gis...Arsha

it was awesome...
loved it..
write more plzz...


Thank You. 😃😃
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Thank You. 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc os
Kriyansh romantic moment so cute
Like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A romantic yet meaningful os..could easily connect ti it.
Write more on kriyaansh
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Awesome OS
Loved the KR romance<3

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